03-18-2009, 10:01 AM | #46 |
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oooooit tense!!!!!
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03-18-2009, 07:41 PM | #47 |
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Keep it up! Great story...
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03-19-2009, 03:21 AM | #48 |
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awesome story...keep it going on pls...
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03-19-2009, 10:43 AM | #49 |
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I will I just need some ideas. If anybody has any PM me please.
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03-19-2009, 12:41 PM | #50 |
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did my ideas help?
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03-22-2009, 03:58 AM | #51 |
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This chapter is vair vair short. But people kept asking me to write and I had no ideas.
Chapter 8 I nearly screamed as Darren stared a look of pure bewilderment on his face. Why, why do bad things happen to me, seriously? I didn’t know what to do. I couldn’t move I was glued to the floor, but Lucas came to stand in front of me, shielding me from Darren. ‘Problem?’ he said in a voice that terrified me. He sounded so protective, I wanted to grin. He clenched his jaw and made his hands into fist by his side as he stepped toward Darren. ‘Uh, I, no. I didn’t see. I – I’m not. Um.’ He stuttered, his voice breaking. Lucas was larger than most of the boys in our class, taller and more muscular. I’d be scared if I were him, too. Darren took a step back, stumbling over his own feet. Lucas grabbed him before he fell, saying ‘Careful now, we wouldn’t want anything bad to happen to you, would we?’ He gave Darren a threatening look, while raising his eyebrows. His hand dug into Darren’s arm and he looked like he was going to cry. I began to feel bad as he hadn’t actually said he was going to tell. I saw my shirt poking out from under the seat in front of me. I scooped it up and threw it on. I turned to see Darren staring at my boobs for the brief moment they were on show. Lucas saw this and punched him hard. ‘Lucas’ I shouted, ‘Stop now’ He turned to look at me, he let go of Darren and he tumbled to the floor. ‘Sorry’ he mumbled at me ‘I didn’t want to frighten you’ ‘You didn’t’ I smiled Darren was still on the floor, and as Lucas turned back to him, he whimpered and a wet patch appeared on his trousers. My mouth dropped open and Lucas moved fast, grabbing his phone and getting a picture of Darren. ‘Nobody will see this, if you didn’t see anything. Got it?’ ‘Ye – Yes’ He stuttered pulling his shirt lower over his crotch while scrambling down the aisle. ‘Aw, Lucas, look what you did to the poor boy’ I said my eyes following him as he practically ran away. He laughed while turning me to face him by gently turning my chin to his direction. He rested his head on my shoulder and whispered ‘It was fun though, and you know it’ And as hard as I tried to remember it as a humiliating memory, it was in fact, fun. He pulled me closer. My hands pressed against his chest, I ran them down to the waist band of his jeans, and I undid the button then the zipper. I looked up to see him staring at my hands, his look a mixture of shock and curiosity. I slid my fingertips down tracing the V shape his torso made then parted his now unzipped jeans. Pushing them down, whilst still staring at his face. I began running my hands on him, now erect. His eyes became wide, and it was now he who looked paranoid. His eyes darted continually down the aisle then back to me. The speakers scared me and I jumped back as the driver announced ‘All seatbelts need to be fastened; we are nearly at our destination’ I swivelled and sat in my seat, doing up my belt, Lucas stood and looked at me. ‘Sit down, Lucas’ I said, laughing. ‘Oh, yeah’ He pulled up his jeans, slumped into his seat and wrapped his arms around my shoulder. I leaned into him and yawned. ‘You tired Charl?’ he asked quietly. ‘Yeah, little bit’ I murmured. ‘Sleep then, I’ll wake you when we get there’ He said after kissing me on the forehead.
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03-22-2009, 07:12 AM | #52 |
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anouther great instalment
she should wake up with all her clouths missing or sumin like lucas did some thing to her in her sleep. i dont mean rape i mean write on her or sumin
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03-22-2009, 07:18 AM | #53 |
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I was thinking that but I didn't want him to seem mean.
We'll see.
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03-22-2009, 07:20 AM | #54 |
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well hes quiet a cheeky charector isnt he and i think charlotte loves him to much to stay mad at him.
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03-23-2009, 10:29 AM | #55 |
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Oh man i love this story i just finishished reading to the end of this last chapter i just started reading last right this is the only book that i have every read and keept reading keep it up it is great
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03-23-2009, 11:07 AM | #56 |
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I have just finished reading all of your posts, and boy are they good. Well done! =]
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03-23-2009, 02:41 PM | #57 |
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Just wanted to know when you are posting the next part of the story or if that was the end but you should keep going it is awsome
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03-23-2009, 02:51 PM | #58 |
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It isn't the end, but I don't know when I'll be posting. I'll write some more tomorrow.
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03-23-2009, 03:22 PM | #59 |
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ok ty for telling me
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03-23-2009, 08:18 PM | #60 |
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Is Charlotte your real name? if it is not to personal for me to be asking u
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