11-04-2010, 01:46 PM | #497 |
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Your an amazing writer just like Shiny Demon Rach im proud of you for your amazing work
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11-04-2010, 02:11 PM | #498 |
getDare Sweetheart
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go on please want to know what happeneds next
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11-04-2010, 03:48 PM | #499 |
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Thanks Rachel, another good Chapter! Keep them coming, please!
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11-04-2010, 04:10 PM | #500 |
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You rock
Nothing more I can say about it Xx
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11-04-2010, 06:01 PM | #502 |
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Are u an angel? how else could u make spomething this good? or considering the natur of the story... a demon? lol
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11-04-2010, 06:57 PM | #503 |
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I think I was the closet without saying what the actual name of the train was. I did say Thomas the Tank Engine...
Anyways, nice chapter and of course she removed her panties which were probably dripping wet. I think Amber will ask why the did everything and then have it explained to her. Then she will want to either help or join or just watch all the fun. Either way next chapter will be good.
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11-04-2010, 09:32 PM | #504 |
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This is a great story! The plot is imaginative and spell binding.
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11-05-2010, 07:47 AM | #505 |
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just getting better and better rach!
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11-05-2010, 07:57 AM | #506 |
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Some time since my last comment glad the story is still going well. Keep up writing, this is one of the best stories I have ever read.
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11-05-2010, 01:48 PM | #507 |
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Part 62 (STRIP POKER WITH A TWIST)
A bit of a short chapter . my applogies more comming soon
Part 62 (STRIP POKER WITH A TWIST) Next Sarah followed suit and spread her sexy lady hole and removed the soaking wet black silk thong. It seemed to be literally dripping. All of the males stared at Sarah and Laura who were again totally naked, as they had been the previous evening. John set the times for 15 minutes and they continued chatting. After a couple of minutes Adam suddenly whispered “Is the answer to your puzzle word Diesel”. “Correct” answered Amber, with a chuckle before explaining what all of the clues were related too, followed by explaining that Adam had actually fell over this toy in the Pound Shop. Amber was sat on the rug staring at the twin sisters. She had never seeing a female her age shaved. Every now and then she glanced over at Adams weapon knowing that he was not wearing anything under them clothes. Adams dick began to stare and get larger and larger; this was quite visible through his trousers. “Do you like your twins sisters shaved muff” asked John to Adam, to which the response was very little. Adams cock began to grow even larger, and he couldn’t take his eyes off his beautiful sisters. Adam eventually asked Laura after several minutes of plucking the corrage “Who shaved your clit”. “I’ve had it waxed in Lincoln and it FUC*ING hurt like FUC*ING crazy” “I bet” said Amber never knowing anyone wax there pussy before. There was several more chit chat and discussing their day’s happenings and Amber finally understood a little more of last night’s strip poker game in respect of the master/mistress v slavery. “Adam I have thought of your punishment for masturbating in our bedroom and thinking of our naked bodies” “Your punishment is …………………. “ TO BE CONTINUED ……………….. More comming soon after a few comments have been posted.
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11-05-2010, 01:52 PM | #508 |
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Again...... SO AMAZING Great that you can actually still keep this going, and keep this really interesting!
Keep this up!
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11-05-2010, 02:32 PM | #510 |
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i just read the entire story for the first time. I am hooked. its great!
cant wait for more!!! |
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