Hell [FICTION]

[Trystaan]

Ok here it is.

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That night was a rough one. I was having all kinds of devil some nightmares. I woke up in a cold sweat. Claire was still asleep. She looked so good lying there on the floor nude. I softly crept towards her. My cock stirring. I slowly inserted a finger into her tight vagina then two. She was beginning to stir and get wet. I was going to stop but I couldn’t. It had been so long since I had touched Claire. We had being going out a year back. We were an unlikely couple. She was popular I was not within her group. A lot of her friends didn’t think I was good enough for her. That’s what crushed me. She had publicly humiliated me. Just because she cared what people thought. At that moment, I swore revenge. Revenge on her my captors and everyone who had ever embarrassed me. Trystan was about to become a new person. Starting right now.

The Alarm went but I was already awake. Loren and Briddie came in with our breakfast. It looked like runny oatmeal. They took great delight in telling me it had been up their ass while I was eating. I didn’t know if they were joking. They took me upstairs and I was made to put on a white a thong and bra... As promised they put toothpaste in one of the cups and chilli sauce in the other. It burned within minutes. How would I survive for a day? The chocolate bars were put in my thong. 12 in total. Briddie then gave me something I had never experienced before. An anal orgasm. She used 2 heavily lubed fingers and also put one of my fingers in her pussy. When I came Lauren caught it in a jar. It was whisked and I drank it. Claire then made a comment. ‘Miss I think you would like to know what Trystan was doing to me last night’ she said with an evil smirk on her face….


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[52977]

Great story, I really loved the oatmeal bit! +rep

[Trystaan]

As promised a new part. This contains a meaning. To see that meaning read between the lines. The girls ( if any read this apart from Bebe_Girl ) should be better at understanding her point of view. So here it is.

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‘YOU DID WHAT’ Briddie screamed at me her face one of anger and hurt. Almost as If she was holding an emotion inside. HOW DARE YOU. She looked so upset. I didn’t know why. She immediately grabbed a belt and started smacking me relentlessly. She was slapping me round the face and kicking me in the genitals. They blindfolded me and dragged me painfully across the floor and down some stairs. I was thrown onto a table and strapped on face down, my whole back exposed. She started relentlessly whipping me while the others went off to fetch equipment. My head was tied so I was constantly looking forward. The others came back with a row of rather mean looking dildos and strapons. Loren put on an 8 inch 2 inch width strap on and Claire did the same. Loren inserted it up my ass and I felt an instant burning pain. Claire came round and shoved hers down my throat. Briddie carried on with her unfaltering whipping, occasionally pausing for breath. I was being brutally tortured and I was crying heavily by now. Soon the pain had become too much and I had fell unconscious.

My ears came accustomed to the sound before I could open my eyes. I heard crying and Moans. I heard someone whispering ‘It’s going to be ok’. Another teary voice sobbed ‘I thought he wanted me’ ‘He’s waking up come on stop’. When my eyes opened I saw the three girls looking down on me nervously. ‘Are you alright, I’m so sorry’ cried Briddie.
I tried to sit up but as I did pain flared through my back. ‘Not now just lie down and rest’ spoke Claire softly. I fell back to sleep just as Briddie was saying ‘Look we have been unfair. Now its your turn. Then I blacked out.

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Next part up On Thursday.

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[Pingu]

Pretty good. 16 characters.

[Trystaan]

YES PINGU U replied

[dared to perfection]

ahhh no it ran out.... keep going MORE i want MOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEE <---- well not that much but i really want to know what happened next please

[Trystaan]

As promised I have put the next part up. Thanks to StoryTeller for an idea incorporated within. Please read it all so that you don't get confused.


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Later that day, after I had come round the girls explained to me what Briddie had tried to earlier. Basically I had had the punishment and the humiliation so now it was my turn, and I had all 3 of them as my sexy slaves. I started by ringing Marcus and when he arrived I explained the situation. He seemed more than happy to help. To start with I made the girls all dress up in maid’s outfits and tend to my still heavily bruised body. I had an oil massage from Claire while Briddie was feeding me grapes. Loren was off somewhere with Marcus. Who was obviously enjoying himself by the noises. While the girls were tending to me I was taking many pictures of them and had also deleted the others that the girls had taken of me. I chuckled to myself as I thought of how this was only just the beginning. Soon I would have the perfect Revenge and there would be many encounters after this one as well.

Briddie’s POV(Point of View)

I had waited for this for so long. The desire and the want to be dominated by him. I had only been so harsh to make him want to completely dominate and humiliate me. I was slowly becoming wet as the breeze from the open window was coming up under my skirt and through to my pussy due to my lack of panties. I wanted him to do so much to me. In the meantime he was calling me. I ran over to see him naked lying on the bed. ‘Come here now and get nude slag’, my heart tingled just from his voice and my nipples were also reacting. ‘Yes Master’. He wanted me to orally pleasure him. I was delighted. I began slowly teasing him and slowly getting him in the mood. Suddenly he took over and forced me to my knees. He began ramming his cock into my mouth. It hurt and made me want to cry but I would not let him down. After half an hour of abuse and deep throat he came. I swallowed willingly. He chained my arms and legs together and left me on the floor. ‘You know your crap you are bitch’ ‘You call that head, you’re a failure I’m going to get Loren she be better than you, you worthless whore’. Before he left he taped a vibrator to my pussy. I felt hurt, I cried for a long time, I had so wanted to please him and now I was determined to. Whatever the cost.

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Next part would be up Saturday but as I am in wimbledon I will put it up sunday and monday.

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[Pikachu]

Great story well done...


You deserve a hug but I unfortunately can't give it to you sigh*

[Trystaan]

Sorry about not posting for a while. I have been very tired and busy. Hopefully you'll like this.

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TRYSTAN’S POINT OF VIEW

I chuckled to myself. I was slowly breaking her down. Soon I would keep Briddie as my full fledged slave. As I walked over to Marcus’s room I stopped. Claire was in the lounge and as she was not aware I was there she was fucking herself with a long thick purple dildo. I seized the opportunity and pulled out my phone. When Claire came I walked in and whispered ‘I think you’ll be pleasing me for a while now, if you don’t want your sister to see this anyway’. ‘Yes Sir’ she trembled.


I started by making Claire crawl over to me and made her suck my toes erotically. I then dragged her outside and soaked her with the cold high pressure hose. She was almost crying by the end of that. But I wasn’t finished yet. I made her put on a sandpaper thong which I had made earlier. I then gave her a hanging wedgie from the top of the trampoline enclosure while I was bouncing. She was fully flowing now. I took her down and ripped off little pieces of sand paper from her underwear. I then started to grate her nipples very softly moving up to a rigorous grind. The skin from her tits was red and peeling. She was screaming In pain. I took her down and tied her up. I was now in an unstoppable mode. I got naked and started banging her right there. ‘THIS IS FOR ALL THAT SHIT YOU DID TO ME’ After about half an hour I came and let it dribble out then made her catch it and suck it off her hands with a straw. ‘That’s enough for today but one more thing, You’ll sleep out her tonight tied naked to a tree’. With this I tied her up and left her.


When I walked to Marcus’s room I called him out. ‘Hey mate umm I need Loren for a bit. Briddie is still crying and tied up in my room if you want her: oh and Bro be nasty’.
‘Well hello there beautiful’ I kinkily spoke to Loren, ‘I’ve always wanted to get back at you for all those times you embarrassed me in form and during lessons, Now its my chance I’m not going to waste it’. I pulled out a few chains, belts and whips. I saw the look of fear in her eyes and grinned. Tonight was going to be fun.


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[kirby66]

man that is really good u should have something with bending down with only the thong on and nude

[kirby66]

wow really good u should make more

[oreo_is_back]

Wait...Did you say all this happened IRL? >_> Worrying!
Anyway, good first person narrative, boo.
Last time I read a first person narrative was the 'Kushiel Legacy' by Jaqueline Carey(Still nead to finish the fifth book and start te sixth! Might buy it for my birthday!. =]
+ Rep!!!!
Ehm..Yeah.

[Damn! Need to spread the lufffff-rep around first boo. Hm. Strange. I will try again later! <3]

[Trystaan]

The bit that happened was the first post lol. My life isn't that interesting. My next part will be up inthe next quart of an hour.

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[jjjj]

Originally Posted by oleo_is_back

Wait...Did you say all this happened ILL? >_> Worrying!
Anyway, good first person narrative, boo.
Last time I read a first person narrative was the 'Shielding Legacy' by Jaquelin e Carey(Still dead to finish the fifth book and start te sixth! Might buy it for my birthday!. =]
+ Rep!!!!
chm..Yeah.

[Damn! Need to spread the bluffly-rep around first boo. Hom. Strange. I will try again later! <3]

what?

and pretty good story

[Trystaan]

Here it is. Part Something have fun

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I started by walking to the kitchen and getting chilli sauce and Ice from the fridge. Loren was hogtied nude in her room. On my way back I fetched some toothpaste and the toilet brush. I walked in and Loren was whimpering a cold despairing look in her eyes. I felt nothing for her anymore. My head was clear and I was angry. I started by applying toothpaste to her nipples and my fingers. I started slowly paying with her pussy. Slowly massaging, every now and then slowly sliding a finger into her. The toothpaste was working she was becoming uncomfortable and was blinking back tears. More of rage than pain. I taped the toothpaste inside her pussy so when she sat down it would squeeze inside her. I untied her and lay her on the bed. I sat her down and sat on her lap. I made her toss me off: all the time more toothpaste entering her. She finished her job and I came on her face, making her leave it on their. I next took the chilli sauce and coated a vibrator with it. I taped the vibrator to her ass.

I told her to wait while I went to the toilet. When I came back I made her take the end of the toilet brush in her mouth and made her crawl and clean the toilet, which I hadn’t flushed while holding the toilet brush between her teeth. I watched as she struggled only pausing to melt ice against her nipples making them cold to intensify the pain of the toothpaste already burning into her. When she was finished I gave her a swirly and made her crawl back to the room.


When there I applied more chilli sauce to her pussy and then put 6 clips on her pussy 8 on her inner thighs and 2 on each nipple. I hogtied her again and pulled out a studded metal belt. I whipped her ass so hard she began to rock so she was swinging even harder into the next one. By now she was crying and her ass was slowly turning purple.

With a shock I realised this had gone way too far. I felt horrible. I was so up myself I didn’t care about them. I let Loren go and she slapped me and retrieved her clothes then ran away still sobbing as she passed the door she whispered coldly ‘I am going to get you Trystan and you are going to wish you never touched me’. I felt terrible to see what I had done to these girls. I felt a sudden hate against myself. I paced and punched the wall numerous times leaving my fists bloody and bruised. I fell asleep.

Later I deleted the videos of Claire and also set her free. She also slapped me. Briddie however was different. She didn’t run away or hurt me she was the one who looked hurt. I said my goodbyes and left the house wondering what was going on with Briddie.

Later that week I received a threatening phone call. I didn’t know the caller but I had my suspicions. The call told me to go to the school 10:00 Monday night If I did I would be punished if I didn’t I would be punished even more. It was Sunday. I knew whether I went or not the next week would be an eventful one.
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