Fiction: Her ticket through college.. - Page 3

slutpup · 12-23-2010, 08:20 PM

did it die or are u still coming up with the next part

12356416514a · 12-25-2010, 05:14 PM

I like this story you should keep it up.

seth18 · 12-28-2010, 11:22 PM

This story so far seems very rushed and just about sex, basically. You didn't really give much detail, explain the characters very well, it seems that I can skip through a few lines and still know what's going on.

However, You did leave a good cliffhanger, so this story could be good, we'll have to see when you continue it.

WedgieDareGirl · 12-29-2010, 07:43 AM

Thanks for the reply,
considering this is my first story, I didn't know exactly how to build it up, yet I think I have started it off in a decent way for a first attempt.
It may seem all about sex now, but maybe if you gave the story a chance to develop, you would see it develop into more.
So thanks for the reply, I'll bare everything in mind.
Than

12-23-2010, 08:20 PM	#31
slutpup Distinguished Member Join Date: Dec 2010 Location: MN Posts: 703 Blog Entries: 8	did it die or are u still coming up with the next part __________________ PM me dares! I will try any dare that gets sent that *doesn't* have anything to do with *any* of my limits! I need help figuring out my likes, dislikes and some limits! Dare me! Likes: Mouth soaping, writing lines, spanking, anal, slight pain, certain public things Dislikes: ??? Limits: Certain public things, permanent, major pain, any type of sex, family, friends If you think I deserve a punishment for not updating my story, punish me.

12-25-2010, 05:14 PM	#32
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12-28-2010, 11:22 PM	#33
seth18 Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Google Posts: 196	This story so far seems very rushed and just about sex, basically. You didn't really give much detail, explain the characters very well, it seems that I can skip through a few lines and still know what's going on. However, You did leave a good cliffhanger, so this story could be good, we'll have to see when you continue it. __________________ Here we go; Cool people use a ;; Duh! Likes: Candy. Dislikes: You. Limits: 'You have to cause I say so'

12-29-2010, 07:43 AM	#34
WedgieDareGirl Member Join Date: Aug 2010 Location: england Posts: 73	Thanks for the reply, considering this is my first story, I didn't know exactly how to build it up, yet I think I have started it off in a decent way for a first attempt. It may seem all about sex now, but maybe if you gave the story a chance to develop, you would see it develop into more. So thanks for the reply, I'll bare everything in mind. Than __________________ Hey 14/F/UK Likes: Wedgies, Ice, Anal Dislikes: Messy, Public Limits: Poo, Pee, Family. I dont have msn ect.. so dont ask I dont give pics or videos so dont waste your time asking me.