Coach's Lust - A Joint Story [FICTION] - Page 3

glue · 02-20-2008, 10:41 AM

that segment seemed rushed

TeenSlave · 02-22-2008, 01:22 PM

The coach pushed Micheal up so he was standing, now he was standing looking at the coach he got a chance to examine him better. He was a young teacher had just finished university and had accepted a job here, he still had his youthful looks he was about 6 ft tall, he was slim and obviously fit. He had a young boyish face with shortish brown hair and brilliant blue eyes. Most of the girls in the college already fancied him. He stood there silently eyes watering slightly his ass bright red and stinging wondering what to do now. The coach stood up he looked Micheal up and down slow taking in his every detail. The coach was savoring this he'd wanted it since he came to the school and more and more every day and now he finally had his wish.

mschooler · 02-22-2008, 01:49 PM

Wow...
Can i ask a favor from you teenslave?
CAN YOU MAKE YOUR STORY COME A LITTLE MORE OFTEN?????????
AND WRITE MORE EVERY TIME?????

I impatiently wait every day ever since you started this story....trying to see if you posted a new part, and many times NO. and some times YESSSS.
So, i am sure you would love to share and show your talent to all of us.

So, great story, and i'm loving it alot!!!

Davros · 02-22-2008, 02:29 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by mschooler

CAN YOU MAKE YOUR STORY COME A LITTLE MORE OFTEN?????????
AND WRITE MORE EVERY TIME?????

I impatiently wait every day

If you want him to post it all at once, rushed and full of mistakes, then fair enough.

Cliffhangers and tension is brilliant

When an author writes a book, they don't write it all at once in one go!

Take your time, TeenSlave

It's awesome!

smart88 · 02-22-2008, 10:20 PM

Thats really good. can't wait till you write again, it is a good story so keep it going. Please.

NikkiBlue · 02-23-2008, 03:34 AM

Yes, keep going, this story is very...intriguing. So far, anyway. And don't stop with your cliffhangers. I love them!

Kitty · 02-23-2008, 09:30 AM

it a male the answer is out but what next?

stevedare · 02-23-2008, 11:08 AM

Young college girl - it may be nice to see your descript of boy over the knee and slow spanking

glue · 02-24-2008, 11:24 AM

read it people its 2 men

02-20-2008, 10:41 AM	#31
glue Distinguished Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Oxford, UK Posts: 735 Blog Entries: 6	that segment seemed rushed __________________ WATCH OUT FOR A GLUE RATING OUT OF TEN glue would like to tell everyone reading this to stay sticky as life is to short to become unstuck I'm the Simon Cowell of GetDare Please add me at: Skype: Glue101 8 Years On Getdare!!!!!!

02-22-2008, 01:22 PM	#32
TeenSlave getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Liverpool Posts: 333	The coach pushed Micheal up so he was standing, now he was standing looking at the coach he got a chance to examine him better. He was a young teacher had just finished university and had accepted a job here, he still had his youthful looks he was about 6 ft tall, he was slim and obviously fit. He had a young boyish face with shortish brown hair and brilliant blue eyes. Most of the girls in the college already fancied him. He stood there silently eyes watering slightly his ass bright red and stinging wondering what to do now. The coach stood up he looked Micheal up and down slow taking in his every detail. The coach was savoring this he'd wanted it since he came to the school and more and more every day and now he finally had his wish. __________________ 24/M/UK/Gay I'm a switch but very heavily sub leaning. I am gay but I would like to try having a mistress degrade and tease me. Likes: degredation/verbal abuse, Feet, orgasm control, hypnosis. Limits: Poop, Public, Permanent, extreme pain, etc etc

02-22-2008, 01:49 PM	#33
mschooler Junior Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: europe Posts: 27	Wow... Can i ask a favor from you teenslave? CAN YOU MAKE YOUR STORY COME A LITTLE MORE OFTEN????????? AND WRITE MORE EVERY TIME????? I impatiently wait every day ever since you started this story....trying to see if you posted a new part, and many times NO. and some times YESSSS. So, i am sure you would love to share and show your talent to all of us. So, great story, and i'm loving it alot!!! __________________ seeking master if interested, email me! [email protected] my only limit is public!

02-23-2008, 03:34 AM	#36
NikkiBlue Junior Member Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: Illinois, USA Posts: 25	Yes, keep going, this story is very...intriguing. So far, anyway. And don't stop with your cliffhangers. I love them! __________________ I'm currently owned.

02-24-2008, 11:24 AM	#39
glue Distinguished Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Oxford, UK Posts: 735 Blog Entries: 6	read it people its 2 men __________________ WATCH OUT FOR A GLUE RATING OUT OF TEN glue would like to tell everyone reading this to stay sticky as life is to short to become unstuck I'm the Simon Cowell of GetDare Please add me at: Skype: Glue101 8 Years On Getdare!!!!!!

02-22-2008, 10:20 PM	#35
smart88 Junior Member Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: USA Posts: 23	Thats really good. can't wait till you write again, it is a good story so keep it going. Please.

02-23-2008, 09:30 AM	#37
Kitty getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: singapore Posts: 282	it a male the answer is out but what next?

02-23-2008, 11:08 AM	#38
stevedare Senior Member Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: earth Posts: 247	Young college girl - it may be nice to see your descript of boy over the knee and slow spanking