[Fiction] Night With The Bear (MxM)

[skyler_luvs_ya]

this is cute lol

[nuditydudity]

Yeah, I really like everything about the story.
Oh, and about not getting the part you want? It sucks a lot.
My friend is a cellist and never gets the parts she wants. *sigh*

[soldar15]

Originally Posted by nuditydudity

Yeah, I really like everything about the story.
Oh, and about not getting the part you want? It sucks a lot.
My friend is a cellist and never gets the parts she wants. *sigh*

ur friends probly good tho...im not

[soldar15]

everyone ready for the update tonight?? i am

[soldar15]

We kept up the wrestling, not really sexually , more guys being guys , you know? We were laughing so hard all the time and we weren't really hurting eachother so we kept going.

We must've been going for two hours when something went wrong.

It was me and Ryan fighting and I had the obvious advantage. That being that I was 2.5 feet taller.

So we were going nd I grabbed his arm to flip him over my back, but all I hear is a snap and a "Mother Fucker!!!" from Ryan.

"Shit man you okay?" Shout me and Liam at the same time.

I grabbed his other arm to help him up and in minutes we were knocking on Tom's door telling him to drive us to the emergency room.

"What the hell happened?" He asked.

"Well, uh, we were wrestling and I kinda broke his arm." Was my innocent response.

At this point none of us had put shirts back on abd we were sweaty like dogs. Tom ran back into his room and grabbed a bottle of... something. He pressed the button a few times and a powerful cologne sprayed out.

"Sorry, you guys smell like shit." He laughed.

Then without speaking he grabbed the keys too his car and rushed to the front door.

10 minutes later we reached Marksman Medical Emergency Room.

We rushed Ryan in and told the nurses what had happened. She tsked at us and called a doctor, writing down on a little board the whole time.

Ryan's mother was called and she told us she didn't blame us , "boys will be boys" were her words.

We left, feeling one down, but two left we could still chill.



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Hello ladies gentlemen and the in-between...i apologize for the short chapter but ive been studying ...wait i hate studying....anyways new part friday ad=nd probably saturday....<3 you all...in the not creepy way

pleease please please feel free and open to leave good comments bad cmments and helpful comments they all help

[soldar15]

as i said anyone who wants to can comment good or bad idc what pleeease.....will update tomorrow night <3 evry1 whos commented....so evry1 comment K<3

[soldar15]

hello people...i believe ive lost all interest...i wont contiue if u dont want me to and im only going to post 5 m ore parts until i get an editor...i hate t threaten you because i love you all so much, but i really feel id give u more pleasure if i had an editor and some criticism


anyone who wants to be an editor should private message me!!!!!!

[Apples0ranges]

Please continue don't quit

[nuditydudity]

You have a great story, and while an editor is always nice to have, I think you are doing fine (better than quite a few of the stories that pass through this site) without an editor, and are writing a truly good story.
Don't give up on it so easily. Take the time to let it grow, and if you read the part through once before you post it, it'll easily get rid of any grammatical/plotline errors. Typing it in Word first also helps.
Don't give up on the story, keep writing, and keep it being awesome!!

[soldar15]

i have a candidate for editot :-o anyone else interested private message me and ill start the process of choosing....


UPDATE TONIGHT WHO'S PYSCHED...I KNO I AM!!!!

[CaptainMahoney]

i am looking forward to it ^^

[soldar15]

dearest friends i cannot write tonight as i am in a bet with friends as to who can spend the longest duration of nonstop watching glee and ive been going for 4 hours

as an apolog i promise double possibly triple posts tomorrow

[soldar15]

!st things first i want to thank everyone....today i reached 100 views...while its a small number im still happy

2nd i once again apologize for skippin ot on u last night

3rd i want to say that i won the bet with 15 hours of consecutive glee watching yes im a gleek no i dont care if u hate gllee

4th---DOUBLE POST TONIGHT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

And so we go.....

By the time we had gotten back to the Shylette's it was almost 11 o'clock and Tom said we should probably be quieter in the barn.

So we got our stuff all set up for "sleeping", which is somethibg we never do during the bash. We were all set up and we were talking about nothing inparticular. Liam was talking about Black Ops like it was God, but I honestly think it sucks.

"Wow I so don't want to sleep." Liam said. It was fairly obvious, mostly because only boring people sleep at sleepovers.

"So uhhh what do you wanna do?" I asked Liam.

"Not really much to do here so uhh how abouts we gets some Truth Or Dare. goin'" He said, to much surprise. We'd heard all these things about T or D getting all weird and hot ad stuff.

"Ehhh OK I guess, you go first then." I said back, nervous.

"Kay truth or dare." He asked.

"Truth to start" I said

"Weaaak!!! Uh Okay why haven't you had a girlfriend, I mean you coud get one?" He asked.

"Well Most of the attractive girls in our school are either taken or total sluts." I said, which was totally true.

"OK good point, kay now dare me." Liam said.

"I dare you to dance to a song of my choice." I said grinning evilly.

I grabbed my iPod and plugged in the speakers. Now I have no idea why i even had this next song , but I put on Fridy, by Rebecca Black.

Liam's hips started swaying as the opening sounds of torture opened up...

[soldar15]

As the song progressed, along with th warblings in the song, Liam started shaking his ass at me more and more to the beat.

It was totally hilarious, and attractive to watch. Sadly, as soon as it was getting good, it was over. Thank god for my ears, sadly for the eyes.

"Well I'll take a dare after what I just saw"

"I dare you to do the same thing but with your shirt off.

As I took my shirt off I felt my face flushing red with embarassment. the embarassment was...I was gonna jiggle.

I was't overweight, but everyone jiggles a little bit.

As I heard the opening to Born This Way by GaGa, I got totally psyched.

This song was a masterpiece of dance, and I'm the master of...no dancing.

I started moving and i could tell how intently Liam was watchng my chest. It was sorta weird, knowing i didn care that he was getting his hots from me. As i danced the song away, I could feel sweat dripping down my body, and I realized a slight bulge in Liams gym shorts.

"Dang you're good at that." Said Tom.

"Yeah I'm pretty great So truth or dare" I asked, always the fates question.

"How about a truth, need some time to cool off." He said

"What's that in your pocket there.?" Was my queson for him.

"Umm oh uh that's um a uh cool rock I found in the woods." He said nervously.

"You shouldn't lie Leo the Lionhearted." I called him by the name his dad used to call him.

"Fine, you're hot dancing gave me a boner." He said sheepishly.

"I'm that good eh?" I asked him.

"keep tellin yourself that man, so t or d anyways."

Why dont you dare me again." I said

"Okay how about you..............."


To Be Continued at a ater date yet unspecified

[soldar15]

no comments so ill assume i need to kick it up ome more :] and anyone else who would like to be an editor pllleae feel free to pm me