11-27-2007, 04:23 PM | #16 |
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Fair enough, guess i'm not getting to the action quickly enough. Was thinking my style wasn't really right for here, why i've never posted a story here before and have only done so now once i was asked.
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11-28-2007, 09:56 PM | #17 |
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I liked the writing. He is writing flashback!! So he skips to the present and then back!!
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