A Teacher's Life [FICTION] - Page 2

sirparkuk · 10-31-2007, 06:19 PM

The next part of the story... as always, your comments are very much appreciated. Please feel free to leave them here or message me.

“She’s only a kid,” Andrew repeated under his breath as he walked to the front of the class. “Only a kid – she’ll be easily scared off. Just stay calm.”

Jenny was not sitting in her usual seat. Instead she was sitting, as instructed, next to Erica. One look at Mr. Thomas showed he had read the note. He was clearly trying to appear casual and workmanlike, but there was an awkwardness to his movements, and an unconscious tightness to his jaw which gave him away.

Erica leaned over to Jenny as Mr. Thomas wrote the date and heading on the board.

“So, what do you want him to do to you Jenny?” she whispered conspiratorially. “What is Mr. Thomas going to do for little Jenny today?”

Jenny could feel herself reddening as the images started to flood her mind. She could see him stripping… stroking his cock as he had been doing earlier… pinning her against the wall… touching her…. She was overwhelmed again by that feeling, that mix of exhilaration and fear. Jenny determined again to stop this before it got out of hand.

“I still think we should just leave it Erica. We’ve given him a scare now – let’s just see him squirm for a bit.”

“Oh I intend to watch him squirm alright,” replied Erica, her face set firm. “But it’s too late to be pulling out. He’s read the note, so he knows we’re serious. There’s no going back.”

There was something about Erica’s smile that worried Jenny. A lot. She took hold of Erica’s hand.

“What was in that note Erica? What did you say?”

“Oh not much – just the facts really,” Erica whispered back, holding Jenny’s gaze. “I did tell him you weren’t wearing any panties though,” she laughed. Jenny’s hand squeezed Erica’s hard.

“You said wh….”

“Ok class,” interrupted Mr. Thomas, in his usual brisk manner. “Some work from the text books today – pages 54 and 55. Read the historical sources, and have a go at the extended writing assignments on the next page.”

As the rest of the class groaned and slowly turned the pages of their books, Erica leant over to Jenny again.

“I am right aren’t I?” she whispered. “You’re not wearing any panties under that tight little skirt of yours.”

Jenny thought back to that morning, her silly dreams, her ‘dare’ to herself. Don’t wear any panties to his class… wear a shortish skirt... feel sexy... see if he notices you...

“But… how did you know?” stammered Jenny, completely humiliated at the thought that Erica had found out her little secret.

“Oh, it was quite obvious really – at least when I was studying your ass it was,” giggled Erica. And there was that look again, the look that Jenny had come to recognise when they had been better friends, the kind of look that had persuaded her to keep her distance from Erica.

“Ugh – don’t be weird,” she replied.

Before Erica could reply, the lesson swept on, and the surrounding silence forced both girls to get started on their work – at least pretending to get started in Jenny’s case. Her mind was swimming – what were they going to do after class? How would Mr. Thomas react? He knew she wasn’t wearing any panties… And despite herself, despite her attempts to focus on her work, Jenny could feel her mind returning to the same images, and could feel the wetness between her legs.

molten man · 11-01-2007, 04:29 AM

Great. Keep it going!!

batman420 · 11-01-2007, 08:28 PM

Great story please keep it going!

brownie · 11-02-2007, 03:07 PM

it a good story but u are streching it out to much, they been talking about if there going to do somthing or not the whole time, get to the point plz its good details thow.

sirparkuk · 11-02-2007, 05:02 PM

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Originally Posted by brownie

it a good story but u are streching it out to much, they been talking about if there going to do somthing or not the whole time, get to the point plz its good details thow.

Fair comment brownie - just building up the tension! Writing the next part now. Don't worry - the action's on its way...

zeketheorc · 11-02-2007, 05:04 PM

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Originally Posted by sirparkuk

Fair comment brownie - just building up the tension! Writing the next part now. Don't worry - the action's on its way...

Take your time and dont worry about taking a long time to get to the action. It makes the action all the better once it gets there.

molten man · 11-03-2007, 03:19 AM

come on. He is wriing really professionally!! You do not give away everything at once, do you??

SubMissChievous · 11-03-2007, 05:14 AM

I agree with zeke & molten man! I'm impressed how well this story is building up. Wonderful job so far!

brownie · 11-05-2007, 05:02 PM

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Originally Posted by sirparkuk

Fair comment brownie - just building up the tension! Writing the next part now. Don't worry - the action's on its way...

ok, cant wait untill next part comes out

Sum · 11-05-2007, 06:02 PM

also can't wait for next section. Don't go jumping to any action that the story doesn't warrant too quickly, you've done a great job building things up so far, i hate stories where people straight at the action. This has the feel of a true erotic story to it, nice bit of blackmail, suspense etc.

One thing though, i think i'm getting confused, in the first part, he was an english teacher, then later he seems to be a history teacher?!?

brownie · 11-05-2007, 06:47 PM

i do agree, wonderfull, rising action. but it so good, i wont to know what happens!

Ashy-J · 11-14-2007, 06:51 PM

this is an amazin story, best ive read on this site, cant wait for more

brownie · 11-14-2007, 07:25 PM

Yes i agree, very good, do you mind posting the rest? Thx

anayguy · 11-15-2007, 09:44 AM

keep it going you have hooked

YoureAmazingMe · 11-17-2007, 10:12 AM

Great story, interested to see whats to come. & very good grammar, which is always a plus. :]

11-01-2007, 04:29 AM	#17
molten man Distinguished Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Mumbai, India Posts: 946	Great. Keep it going!! __________________ MMan 26/m/straight Skype: molten_man007 Kik: molten_man

11-02-2007, 03:07 PM	#19
brownie Account Banned Join Date: Sep 2007 Posts: 52 Blog Entries: 1	it a good story but u are streching it out to much, they been talking about if there going to do somthing or not the whole time, get to the point plz its good details thow. __________________ i was a legend and chole banded me (

11-03-2007, 03:19 AM	#22
molten man Distinguished Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Mumbai, India Posts: 946	come on. He is wriing really professionally!! You do not give away everything at once, do you?? __________________ MMan 26/m/straight Skype: molten_man007 Kik: molten_man

11-05-2007, 06:02 PM	#25
Sum getDare Devil Join Date: Jan 2007 Posts: 1,049 Blog Entries: 9	also can't wait for next section. Don't go jumping to any action that the story doesn't warrant too quickly, you've done a great job building things up so far, i hate stories where people straight at the action. This has the feel of a true erotic story to it, nice bit of blackmail, suspense etc. One thing though, i think i'm getting confused, in the first part, he was an english teacher, then later he seems to be a history teacher?!? __________________ Through the darkness of futures past The magician longs to see One chants out between two worlds Fire walk with me I'm off to kinktalk. Bye all.

11-05-2007, 06:47 PM	#26
brownie Account Banned Join Date: Sep 2007 Posts: 52 Blog Entries: 1	i do agree, wonderfull, rising action. but it so good, i wont to know what happens! __________________ i was a legend and chole banded me (

10-31-2007, 06:19 PM	#16
sirparkuk Member Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Near Swansea, South Wales, UK Posts: 44	The next part of the story... as always, your comments are very much appreciated. Please feel free to leave them here or message me. “She’s only a kid,” Andrew repeated under his breath as he walked to the front of the class. “Only a kid – she’ll be easily scared off. Just stay calm.” Jenny was not sitting in her usual seat. Instead she was sitting, as instructed, next to Erica. One look at Mr. Thomas showed he had read the note. He was clearly trying to appear casual and workmanlike, but there was an awkwardness to his movements, and an unconscious tightness to his jaw which gave him away. Erica leaned over to Jenny as Mr. Thomas wrote the date and heading on the board. “So, what do you want him to do to you Jenny?” she whispered conspiratorially. “What is Mr. Thomas going to do for little Jenny today?” Jenny could feel herself reddening as the images started to flood her mind. She could see him stripping… stroking his cock as he had been doing earlier… pinning her against the wall… touching her…. She was overwhelmed again by that feeling, that mix of exhilaration and fear. Jenny determined again to stop this before it got out of hand. “I still think we should just leave it Erica. We’ve given him a scare now – let’s just see him squirm for a bit.” “Oh I intend to watch him squirm alright,” replied Erica, her face set firm. “But it’s too late to be pulling out. He’s read the note, so he knows we’re serious. There’s no going back.” There was something about Erica’s smile that worried Jenny. A lot. She took hold of Erica’s hand. “What was in that note Erica? What did you say?” “Oh not much – just the facts really,” Erica whispered back, holding Jenny’s gaze. “I did tell him you weren’t wearing any panties though,” she laughed. Jenny’s hand squeezed Erica’s hard. “You said wh….” “Ok class,” interrupted Mr. Thomas, in his usual brisk manner. “Some work from the text books today – pages 54 and 55. Read the historical sources, and have a go at the extended writing assignments on the next page.” As the rest of the class groaned and slowly turned the pages of their books, Erica leant over to Jenny again. “I am right aren’t I?” she whispered. “You’re not wearing any panties under that tight little skirt of yours.” Jenny thought back to that morning, her silly dreams, her ‘dare’ to herself. Don’t wear any panties to his class… wear a shortish skirt... feel sexy... see if he notices you... “But… how did you know?” stammered Jenny, completely humiliated at the thought that Erica had found out her little secret. “Oh, it was quite obvious really – at least when I was studying your ass it was,” giggled Erica. And there was that look again, the look that Jenny had come to recognise when they had been better friends, the kind of look that had persuaded her to keep her distance from Erica. “Ugh – don’t be weird,” she replied. Before Erica could reply, the lesson swept on, and the surrounding silence forced both girls to get started on their work – at least pretending to get started in Jenny’s case. Her mind was swimming – what were they going to do after class? How would Mr. Thomas react? He knew she wasn’t wearing any panties… And despite herself, despite her attempts to focus on her work, Jenny could feel her mind returning to the same images, and could feel the wetness between her legs.

11-01-2007, 08:28 PM	#18
batman420 Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2007 Posts: 27	Great story please keep it going!

11-03-2007, 05:14 AM	#23
SubMissChievous Prodigy Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: Canada Posts: 4,466	I agree with zeke & molten man! I'm impressed how well this story is building up. Wonderful job so far!

11-14-2007, 06:51 PM	#27
Ashy-J Junior Member Join Date: Nov 2007 Posts: 29	this is an amazin story, best ive read on this site, cant wait for more

11-14-2007, 07:25 PM	#28
brownie Account Banned Join Date: Sep 2007 Posts: 52 Blog Entries: 1	Yes i agree, very good, do you mind posting the rest? Thx __________________ i was a legend and chole banded me (

11-15-2007, 09:44 AM	#29
anayguy Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2007 Posts: 118	keep it going you have hooked

11-17-2007, 10:12 AM	#30
YoureAmazingMe Member Join Date: Aug 2007 Location: USA.* (: Posts: 94	Great story, interested to see whats to come. & very good grammar, which is always a plus. :]