02-09-2011, 11:31 PM | #16 |
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Great chapter. Looking forward to more. Keep at this pace for awhile, I think it works for the story, but don't try to rush into lots of sex. Stories are usually better if they take time to set up events, rather than just throw the reader into a (rather hot, I must say) sex scene.
But keep up the aweseomness, I love the story!!!!!
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02-10-2011, 02:34 PM | #17 |
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damnitt!!!! GetMeOn u got me with the (its about sex) thing XD i didnt get it at first but then i laughed :P
it kinda seemed like u wanted to rush into the sex scenes, but im DEFINATELYnot complaining <3
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This story is really great. I can't wait for the next part!
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Section 5
Sorry, I was going to post yesterday but someone's hotness distracted me. *Cough* Dylan *Cough*
dirtylittleboy, nuditydudity, immaeatu, will9022, Slugger... You guys rock my world <3. For your comments I am going to give you the gift of another chapter. From now on once I get five reviews before I write again. I will owe you all a BONUS CHAPTER. Bonus Chapter's = Basically something for you to "wank" to the doesn't relate to the story. __________________________________________________ _______________ "Wow." Jim said. "Damn that was tiring." I said. "See you liked it..." I added laughing. "Sorta, I guess." Jim said turning red. "It's cool man." I said making him comfortable. *What do tiger's dream of... When they take a little tiger snooze.* My phone rang. "Hold up, thats my phone." I said walking over to my shorts now in just boxers. "Nice ringer." Jim laughed. *Do they dream of mauling...* "Hello?" I said. "Yo want to come over?" Tom said. "I know its kinda' late." Tom added. "Um... I'm with Jim." I said. "I with Pat." Tom laughed. "Hold on, I'll ask Jim." "Jim, It's Tom. Can him and Pat come over here?" I asked. "Yeah the more equals more fun." Jim winked. I was confused why he winked but, I just laughed. "He said yes, get your fag asses over here." I sad into the phone. "Ok, were about to leave. See you later, gay boys..." Tom said. "There on their way." I said to Jim. "Nice. Wanna' finish up this game with more more round of dares?" Jim asked. "Hell yes!" I said excitedly. "Calm your boner." Jim laughed. "Here I go." Jim said. He walked over to the hat full of dares. He stirred around for a little bit. Looking for a good dare. I was scared of what else was in the hat. I figured what could go wrong in one round. Jim pulled one out and his face flushed. He started to violently shake his head. "Dude, what is it." "For the next person to come to the house and ring the door bell. You must be naked and greet them." I laughed knowing that he had gotten one of his won dares, and now would be exposed in front of all of our friends. "What if I say no to this?" Jim said. "Punishment." I said in an evil voice. "And that is?" Jim asked. "No turning back after I tell you, you know that right." I said __________________________________________________ ___________ Muhahaha cliff hanger.
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02-12-2011, 05:45 PM | #21 |
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I hate you for stopping there! But I heart you. Great story just proofread because at the begging you had an issue with changing speakers...but please.CONTINUE!
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02-20-2011, 09:11 AM | #22 |
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Coming Back.
Sorry, Long delay on the story.
I was beaching it up... In Florida. Daytona Beach... Ahhh.... Had a lot of fun. More later on the story.
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02-20-2011, 03:33 PM | #24 |
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Waiting for more awesomeness!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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02-20-2011, 06:51 PM | #25 |
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this story is great just because of the hangover reference.
but i suppose the rest is good too..... hahahaha
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02-21-2011, 01:53 PM | #26 |
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Section (Who cares) I'm posting!
*Skip ahead*
(I'm gonna' keep you guys guessing on what it is) "I'll just go with your dare." Jim said. "You can not do that." I exclaimed. "Dude, C'mon. Tom and Pat are gonna' see my wang." Jim protested. "Fine. But, now you know." I agreed. "Yeah." Jim said scared. *Ding-Dong* "Perfect timing." I said laughing. "Get NAKED!" I said in an announcer voice. "Shut up, I'll take my time." Jim said. I just laughed. Jim quickly was down to his boxers. He had a semi boner from what he was about to do. I am not going to lie, I was aroused by this also. Then he slipped off his boxers and didn't look at me and just said. "Here I go." He walked downstairs and into the foyer and the door bell rang again. I followed and watched from the top of the stairs. Jim turned the knob and opened the door. "Holy shit this is great." I said. "What the fuck." Tom said. Jim reached for boner with both hands to cover himself. "Why are you naked." Pat laughed. "A dare." Jim said ashamed. "Truth or Dare! Let's play!" Tom said. "Yeah!" Pat added excitedly. "Up here guys, we can play in the computer room." I said. They all ran up stairs and dove on the couches and chairs. Jim just stood at the bottom of the stairs. I walked down to comfort him. "You ok?" I asked. "No." Jim said sadly. "Dude, don't be scared." I said. "They laughed at me." Jim said. "Well, you are naked." I laughed a little. "I have a small dick." Jim blurted out. "No you don't." I said, Jim was around five and a half inches. "You are just saying that." Jim said. "No, look." I said. Just then I pulled my pants and boxers down until my same length boner flopped out into the open. "Faggots!" Tom shouted from the top of the stairs. "Shut the fuck up!" I said taking toms arm and pulling him and pulling up my pants at the same time. ------ Comments please. More tomorrow.
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Good post! I'm glad you're posting again!!! Keep up the story, but don't forget to leave out the detail that you put in earlier posts!!!!
Yay for new chapter!!!
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keep gpoin its good
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Awesome so far bro, keep it up!
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"What you guys wanna do?" Tom asked lying down on the coach. "I don't know." Pat said. "Me neither." I said. "Um... Truth or Dare?" Jim suggested now fully clothed. "Nah, How about poker or something else?" Pat said. "Yeah, I'm don't wanna play those gay games." Tom said. I just stayed silent. "Well, we always play poker." Jim said stressing always. "Yeah, but its fun." Tom added. "Yeah." Pat said. "How about strip poker?" I asked. "I guess... That sounds good. I always win anyways." Tom said. "I'll play." Pat said. "Let's go." Jim said smiling at me. I went over to the game closet and got the set of poker chips and cards. Everyone got around the small poker table sitting on the edge of the coach and leaning in eager to get started. "Here are the rules: Everyone gets five chips so the game will go quicker. Chip 1 = Shoes Chip 2 = Socks Chip 3 = Shirt Chip 4 = Pants Chip 5 = Underwear You must ante one chip before each round. The winner of each round can return one item of clothing. At the very end, loser must take a dare from every one else, third takes a dare from the first two, second takes a dare from the winner. The winner, well wins." I said. "Any objections?" I asked. "Nope." They all said in almost unison. "Ok here are your chips." I said handing everyone their precious chips. "I will deal first then we will go clockwise." I said. I handed everyone their cards one by one. I lifted up my cards, I had an Ace of clubs and a King of clubs. A potential flush. I smiled and bet one more chip over my ante. Every one checked adding in their additional chip except for Jim. Jim threw his cards and chip at the middle of the table and removed his shoes, then he sat back and watched. The flop was to my disadvantage, a three, five, seven, all hearts. I checked wanting to see what everyone else was thinking and how their hand was. Pat checked along with me. Tom bet another chip. I immediately folded not having confidence in my hand and so did Pat. Tom laughed and showed his cards as Pat and I removed out shoes and socks, Tom had a Jack and Queen off suit. He bluffed us. He placed the chips back in the box but saving his one extra clothing piece for later as a bye. Round 2 The dealer this round would be Jim. He handed out the cards one at at time and I looked at my cards. They were trash. Off suit 2 and 6. I couldn't just give up now and loose my shirt so early. Everyone checked the beginning making me feel more comfortable with my odds. In the flop I got a two pair. Knowing this wasn't the best I still checked. Jim did the same, and so did Pat. Tom quickly threw down a chip because he was still fully clothed. I though about last round. Not wanting to get bluffed again I added a chip. Jim and Pat stepped out. Jim removed his shirt from his ante and Pat took off his socks. Loosing now was not an option. The turn didn't help me at all and we both checked. The river card came, Jim turned it slowly and it showed a six. I almost jumped out of my seat. We again checked and turned out cards. I had a two pair and a six pair. Tom had nothing. Buffed again. Tom took off his shoes using his bonus chip and I put back on my socks using my winning chip. Round 3 .... More tomorrow. I didn't have much time today.
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