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Wow! Much better spelling/grammar... If I do say so myself
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If not, he's a very lucky guy lol
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Yes, keep going. I don't get that into most of the stories I read, and this one is really good.
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yea, i second what wicked just said, please continue
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Yeah, well I "third" what wicked just said, please continue, lol.
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getDare Sweetheart
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Just read your posts so far and boy am i excited?!! This is exellent. And please do tell us which parts are fistion and not.
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this is so good keep going
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getDare Sweetheart
Join Date: Jan 2009
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any reason this isn't being finished?
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getDare Sweetheart
Join Date: Jan 2009
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why not do the grammar yourself?
edit message him and ask what is taking so long. if it's suspicious, google this story. find out if he is stealing it. |
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getDare Sweetheart
Join Date: Jan 2009
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well then, it's all up to you face...
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don't worry this dose not go the slave route, i plan on making the story a good non-sexual story.
punctuation is def not there but ill have smile give me a hand with the next part, i figured every1 was dying for another part. enjoy __________________________________________________ _________________now that i think back on it, it was probably the single most significant event in my life. after that crucial moment i almost vowed to be sexually pleased as that everyday of my life. back to were we were. as my small 4-5 inch penis throbbed i saw her soft lips leaning in, wrapping those soft pink lips around my small penis. She began to suck and lick. "Oh my god stop.......stop!!!" i screamed "mmm no this is the best part matt" She returned The orgasm was explosive as i have never had one before. After standing there i shock i was finally pullin out of my trance by the other girls giggling. "Okay jesse your turn" "okay uhm Jen truth or dare?" "dare" "Hmm okay i'll be right back" as jesse jumped up to leave the room i noticed i got a small boner again form her tits bouncing under her bra. After She came back i noticed she had a small silver camera. "okay Jen time for a nice photoshoot!" said jesse "Okay,nude or no?" "full on nude!" after stripping down to nothing i noticed that she had the biggist tits out of everyone. she had a small pink pussy that really standed out. "okay ready baby?" "yeah!!!" "okay give me a tiger!" she bent over twords the camera and spread her ass cheeks out, growling and clawing at the camera. "very nice, now give me some sexy tit action!" She started to get closer to the camera and squish her hot tit's together after this going on for awhile we stopped and ended up naked watching some movie, i think it was aladin. __________________________________________________ ________________________________ that night, i awoke on the couch my face in jesse's soft tit's, i started to touch and pinch her nipple's. I heard a soft moan and she started tword her vagina. I saw her finger Caresse her clit. she moaned again and i stopped and just feel asleep on her again. Oh about 3-4 hours later i awoke again and saw a wet spot below her pussy, i thought to my self i can get back at her for the whole get naked thing. so i ran up to my room and grabbed my camera,snap....snap....snap. i took pictures from all angles of her, i figured if i ever felt like trying that masturbating thing i would like to have some sexy pictures. i fell back asleep on her soft body.
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Lmao, I wonder what would happen when the parents come back and take a look at the camera.
So far so good Face! Keep it up. And Smile is banned by the way...
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