[Fiction] A 'special' relationship.

[sydneyyy93]

I will update this story when someone actually comments it with nice comments...

[stats2001]

love this so far,,.try not to worry about some of the comments, i have read a few of your stories and they are great...keep up the good work, and i too look forward to many moe chapters to come !!!

[sydneyyy93]

Originally Posted by sydneyyy93

Warning: This story is going to be in detail 100% it will talk about what happens in their relationship and what happens to girls at her age. And girls you know what im talking about.

Characters:
Crystal- (An 11 year old orphan. She is very shy, Jasons adopted daughter.)
Jason- (A 20 year old man. He is Crystals adopted father.)

Chapter 1

Jason was in his almost adopted daughters bedroom. He was fixing it up for her. He made her bed and put all the furniture in her room. He was just finishing up and was getting ready to go get her. He stepped out of the house, locking the door. He walked to his car and got in. He drove up to the adoption Agency. He looked over at Crystal and waved to her. She was excited to see him and ran to him and hugged him. He has been coming in and seeing her for her anger problems and more. She somehow convinced him to adopt her. She looked up at ahim she was about 5'0. He knelt down and hugged her. "Ill be done in about an hour ok Sweetie." She smiled at him a tear coming down her cheek. "Ok Jason." He wiped her tear away and kissed her on her forehead. "Ill be back soon ok dear you just wait im not leaving here without you!" She smiled up at him and ran off to play with her friends. He walked into the office.

Originally Posted by sydneyyy93

Chapter 2

After being in the office for about 30 minutes. He had white papers in his hand and motioned for Crystal to come to him. He knelt down as Crystal came running to him her long blonde hair flowing behind her she had a huge smile on her face. He picked her up hugging her. Crystal wrapped her legs around him tightly aswell as her arms around his neck. "So Jason???" She smiled at him. "Your mine..." He smiled back at her and kissed her on her forehead. He carried her out to the car and put her in the passanger side. He went around and got into the drivers side and drove off to the house. About 20 minutes later they arrived at the house. Crystal got out of the car amazed. "Do you like it dear?" He said smiling as he looked around. "I love it daddy." She blushed as she said 'daddy'. She went up to the door and pushed the door open. She was amazed at what she seen.

Originally Posted by sydneyyy93

Chapter 3

To Crystals surprise the house was as beautiful on the inside as it was on the outside. The walls were white with a forest light green border. She couldnt believe her eyes. She walked into the kitchen it was so beautiful and white and CLEAN!!!. She then walked back into the livingroom and stood him standing there. "Your house is so beautiful." He smiled at her and took her hand. "You have yet to see your bedroom." He walked her up to her room and went to the right. "My room is down the left ok so if you need anything during the nite you can come and ask me." She smiled up at him as they stood infront of her door. Her name was already carved into the door. She opened the door. Her walls where painted a lime green, the borders where a dark purple. Her two favorite colors. She turned to face her bed, it was huge with white sheets she looked above her bed to see her name. She climbed on her bed and wrapped her arms tightly around his neck. "Thank you so much!" She laid her head on his shoulder almost crying. "Thats not all Sweetie." He held her as he walked over to her closet and stood infront of it. "Remember when i measured you to see what size clothes youd wear?" She nodded looking at him. He pushed her closet door open it was completely full of clothes. "Oh my goodness...." She put her hands over her mouth. "You didnt have to....." She started to cry and burried her face into him. He laid her down on her bed and sat next to her. "This is your house now im your daddy.." She smiled at him as he kissed her forehead. "I love you daddy." She said with a smile. "I love you 2 sweetheart."

Originally Posted by sydneyyy93

Chapter 4

The next morning Crystal woke up very early. Her mouth was so dry, she went down stairs and to the fridge. She took a yoohoo that her new daddy had bought for her and went up to her room drinking it. She laid back in bed after putting the yoohoo box on her nitestand. She smiled. "I love it here." She fell back to sleep. The next thing she knew her daddy was sitting next to her on the bed shaking her to wake her up. "Sweetie wake up." He smiled at her as she refused. "I dont wanna daddy." She turned over pulling the covers over her head. He stood up and crossed his arms smirking at her. "Ok... I guess we dont have to go shopping." Her eyes opened as she jumped out of bed grabbing her robe she ran into the bathroom turning on the water. She ran back and hugged him. "Good morning daddy." She giggled and walked back into the bathroom. She undressed, stepping into teh shower. She began to wash herself. She stepped out about a few minutes later drying herself off. She put her robe on and brushed her teeth, and blow dry her hair. She walked into her room grabbing a blue jean ruffle skirt, pants and bra, and a white,pink, and blue zebra patterned tanktop that faded. She grabbed some sandals from teh many her daddy bought her. She walked down stairs and sat on teh couch. "Do i look good daddy?" She asked as she put her sandals on. "You already bought me many things i dont think i need anymore." He grabbed his keys waiting at the door. "C'mon sweetie..." She grabbed her bag and jacket and headed out to the car. She sat in teh passangers side and waited. A few minutes he came and got in the car and drove to the mall. As she walked into the mall holding his hand her mouth dropped.

Chapter 5

Crystal was so surprised at how big the mall was. She hadnt been in a mall every. Jason laughed a bit picking her up. "Where do you want to go first?" He kissed her cheek. "I dont know daddy....." She wrapped her arms around his neck. "I dont know any places in here....." He walked over to a map of the mall. "Well theres Aeropostale, American Eagle, Hot Topic, Rue 21...." She thought for a minute and finally spoke. "All..." She giggled as he began to walk into aeropostale. She jumped down and ran throughout the store grabbing clothes. "Daddy!!!" She screamed. Jason walked over to teh dressing room . "Yes dear?" She came out of the dressing room. "How does it look?" She was wearing a tanktop and pants. "Its cute on you." She smiled and walked back in. She came out with all teh clothes about three shirts and three pants. She handed them to him. "Thanks daddy." She kissed his cheek. She waited by the door for him. He came with the bag a few minutes later. "Where to next?" He asked looking around. "ummmm whats that place??" She said pointing to 'Lilly Pad'. "Ummm i don't know i think it sells bags..." She ran over to it. and looked around. "Daddy can i get one??" She said looking up at him with puppy eyes. "Just one." She ran over and got a pink and brown bag. She went to the counter and paid for it. "Thanks daddy." She put it in teh other bag and held his hand as they walked out of the store. "Thank you very much i like all the things I got." She got into teh car and sat in the back seat with teh bag. He got in teh drivers side and began to drive home. "Daddy can we get something to eat?? im hungry." She looked into the mirror at him. "I love you..." She smiled at him. "Alright." He pulled into McDonalds. "What do you want?" She looked at the menu. "A milkshake and some chicken nuggets." She sat in teh back playing with her doll. He handed her, her food. "There you go sweetie." She smiled as she started to snack on her fries. "No eating in teh car sweetie..." She groaned and sat it aside. "Can i atleast drink my milkshake?" He nodded approvingly. "Sure." She sipped her milkshake. "Thanks." She sat back and started to fall asleep.

[thedaring1]

I really like it so far, finaly a story that isnt rushed. Im excited and nervous to see how this turns out.

[ofthenorth]

I like it...interested to see where it goes. Very good writing, and wondering where you're going with a little girl and a twenty year old man with the nature of the stories on this site. I know it's not in the R section but still a curious question.

Only one thing to point out, you do something I do myself a lot, I'm guessing you type fast and in doing so you mess up simple short words cause your finger's muscle memory outruns your brain. You misspell "the" a lot as "teh" I do the same thing and have to go back and correct it however mine is usually "hte" :P just thought I'd point that out for you. I'm just a grammar and spelling nazi a lot of times. Haha.

Overall great story...a nice piece of "fantasy fiction" :P Ignore all those negative comments and keep up the good work. It may not be exactly in line with reality but what story is? I've read stories on here where people do things that would for sure get them arrested, in the hospital, or dead even and some even claim their "true" so ignore anything about this not being "believable" and the fact that it's not a "dare" story doesn't mean anything it's just getting started and there's lots of stories on here that aren't actually dares so forget about that, and you probably have a wealth of ideas floating around that can make it into that genre that you just haven't brought into the story yet. It's still starting.

It's a great story and you're a good writer. Keep it up.

[sydneyyy93]

Originally Posted by ofthenorth

Only one thing to point out, you do something I do myself a lot, I'm guessing you type fast and in doing so you mess up simple short words cause your finger's muscle memory outruns your brain. You misspell "the" a lot as "teh" I do the same thing and have to go back and correct it however mine is usually "hte" :P just thought I'd point that out for you. I'm just a grammar and spelling nazi a lot of times. Haha.

Oh I knew that, I didnt really feel like fixing it i use to but i just didnt want to.

[ofthenorth]

Originally Posted by sydneyyy93

Oh I knew that, I didnt really feel like fixing it i use to but i just didnt want to.

Haha. Makes sense. Like I said I do the same. :P

[sydneyyy93]

Originally Posted by sydneyyy93

Warning: This story is going to be in detail 100% it will talk about what happens in their relationship and what happens to girls at her age. And girls you know what im talking about.

Characters:
Crystal- (An 11 year old orphan. She is very shy, Jasons adopted daughter.)
Jason- (A 20 year old man. He is Crystals adopted father.)

Chapter 1

Jason was in his almost adopted daughters bedroom. He was fixing it up for her. He made her bed and put all the furniture in her room. He was just finishing up and was getting ready to go get her. He stepped out of the house, locking the door. He walked to his car and got in. He drove up to the adoption Agency. He looked over at Crystal and waved to her. She was excited to see him and ran to him and hugged him. He has been coming in and seeing her for her anger problems and more. She somehow convinced him to adopt her. She looked up at ahim she was about 5'0. He knelt down and hugged her. "Ill be done in about an hour ok Sweetie." She smiled at him a tear coming down her cheek. "Ok Jason." He wiped her tear away and kissed her on her forehead. "Ill be back soon ok dear you just wait im not leaving here without you!" She smiled up at him and ran off to play with her friends. He walked into the office.

Originally Posted by sydneyyy93

Chapter 2

After being in the office for about 30 minutes. He had white papers in his hand and motioned for Crystal to come to him. He knelt down as Crystal came running to him her long blonde hair flowing behind her she had a huge smile on her face. He picked her up hugging her. Crystal wrapped her legs around him tightly aswell as her arms around his neck. "So Jason???" She smiled at him. "Your mine..." He smiled back at her and kissed her on her forehead. He carried her out to the car and put her in the passanger side. He went around and got into the drivers side and drove off to the house. About 20 minutes later they arrived at the house. Crystal got out of the car amazed. "Do you like it dear?" He said smiling as he looked around. "I love it daddy." She blushed as she said 'daddy'. She went up to the door and pushed the door open. She was amazed at what she seen.

Originally Posted by sydneyyy93

Chapter 3

To Crystals surprise the house was as beautiful on the inside as it was on the outside. The walls were white with a forest light green border. She couldnt believe her eyes. She walked into the kitchen it was so beautiful and white and CLEAN!!!. She then walked back into the livingroom and stood him standing there. "Your house is so beautiful." He smiled at her and took her hand. "You have yet to see your bedroom." He walked her up to her room and went to the right. "My room is down the left ok so if you need anything during the nite you can come and ask me." She smiled up at him as they stood infront of her door. Her name was already carved into the door. She opened the door. Her walls where painted a lime green, the borders where a dark purple. Her two favorite colors. She turned to face her bed, it was huge with white sheets she looked above her bed to see her name. She climbed on her bed and wrapped her arms tightly around his neck. "Thank you so much!" She laid her head on his shoulder almost crying. "Thats not all Sweetie." He held her as he walked over to her closet and stood infront of it. "Remember when i measured you to see what size clothes youd wear?" She nodded looking at him. He pushed her closet door open it was completely full of clothes. "Oh my goodness...." She put her hands over her mouth. "You didnt have to....." She started to cry and burried her face into him. He laid her down on her bed and sat next to her. "This is your house now im your daddy.." She smiled at him as he kissed her forehead. "I love you daddy." She said with a smile. "I love you 2 sweetheart."

Originally Posted by sydneyyy93

Chapter 4

The next morning Crystal woke up very early. Her mouth was so dry, she went down stairs and to the fridge. She took a yoohoo that her new daddy had bought for her and went up to her room drinking it. She laid back in bed after putting the yoohoo box on her nitestand. She smiled. "I love it here." She fell back to sleep. The next thing she knew her daddy was sitting next to her on the bed shaking her to wake her up. "Sweetie wake up." He smiled at her as she refused. "I dont wanna daddy." She turned over pulling the covers over her head. He stood up and crossed his arms smirking at her. "Ok... I guess we dont have to go shopping." Her eyes opened as she jumped out of bed grabbing her robe she ran into the bathroom turning on the water. She ran back and hugged him. "Good morning daddy." She giggled and walked back into the bathroom. She undressed, stepping into teh shower. She began to wash herself. She stepped out about a few minutes later drying herself off. She put her robe on and brushed her teeth, and blow dry her hair. She walked into her room grabbing a blue jean ruffle skirt, pants and bra, and a white,pink, and blue zebra patterned tanktop that faded. She grabbed some sandals from teh many her daddy bought her. She walked down stairs and sat on teh couch. "Do i look good daddy?" She asked as she put her sandals on. "You already bought me many things i dont think i need anymore." He grabbed his keys waiting at the door. "C'mon sweetie..." She grabbed her bag and jacket and headed out to the car. She sat in teh passangers side and waited. A few minutes he came and got in the car and drove to the mall. As she walked into the mall holding his hand her mouth dropped.

Originally Posted by sydneyyy93

Chapter 5

Crystal was so surprised at how big the mall was. She hadnt been in a mall every. Jason laughed a bit picking her up. "Where do you want to go first?" He kissed her cheek. "I dont know daddy....." She wrapped her arms around his neck. "I dont know any places in here....." He walked over to a map of the mall. "Well theres Aeropostale, American Eagle, Hot Topic, Rue 21...." She thought for a minute and finally spoke. "All..." She giggled as he began to walk into aeropostale. She jumped down and ran throughout the store grabbing clothes. "Daddy!!!" She screamed. Jason walked over to teh dressing room . "Yes dear?" She came out of the dressing room. "How does it look?" She was wearing a tanktop and pants. "Its cute on you." She smiled and walked back in. She came out with all teh clothes about three shirts and three pants. She handed them to him. "Thanks daddy." She kissed his cheek. She waited by the door for him. He came with the bag a few minutes later. "Where to next?" He asked looking around. "ummmm whats that place??" She said pointing to 'Lilly Pad'. "Ummm i don't know i think it sells bags..." She ran over to it. and looked around. "Daddy can i get one??" She said looking up at him with puppy eyes. "Just one." She ran over and got a pink and brown bag. She went to the counter and paid for it. "Thanks daddy." She put it in teh other bag and held his hand as they walked out of the store. "Thank you very much i like all the things I got." She got into teh car and sat in the back seat with teh bag. He got in teh drivers side and began to drive home. "Daddy can we get something to eat?? im hungry." She looked into the mirror at him. "I love you..." She smiled at him. "Alright." He pulled into McDonalds. "What do you want?" She looked at the menu. "A milkshake and some chicken nuggets." She sat in teh back playing with her doll. He handed her, her food. "There you go sweetie." She smiled as she started to snack on her fries. "No eating in teh car sweetie..." She groaned and sat it aside. "Can i atleast drink my milkshake?" He nodded approvingly. "Sure." She sipped her milkshake. "Thanks." She sat back and started to fall asleep.

Chapter 6

He smiled looking into the rear mirror at her. She looked so adorable as she slept, So peaceful and cute. He shook his head, 'what am i thinking shes 11 and my daughter...' He kept his eyes on the road glancing at her from the mirror occasionaly. He pulled into the driveway and cut the car off still looking at her usually she woke up when the car stopped. He got out and opened her door picked her up. She wrapped her legs around his waist and her arms around his neck resting her head on his shoulder. He smiled at her rubbing her back ignoring teh clothes she had left. He took her inside, walking up the steps he walked to her room, He laid her down on the bed and took her shirt off leaving her in her tanktop. He took her skirt off and got her shorts putting them on her he laid her down the rest of the way and covered her up. He sat next to her as she slept rubbing her hair. She smiled as if dreaming... He got up leaving the room he went down stairs cleaning up the kitchen. His girlfriend Lillian came up behind him and hugged him. "Hey Jason.... where is she?" She said curious. "Shes upstairs sleeping she fell asleep in the car." He turned around facing her, he hugged her and kissed her. "Oh..." Suddenly Crystal screamed for him. "DADDY!!!" Jason and Lillian both ran up the stairs and into her room. "What is it sweetie?" Jason said as he sat down. "I'm bleeding daddy..."Jason looked at Lillian....

[Roll,ova,and,beg]

I really <3 it keep it coming and I like how you progress the characters

[the doc]

me likes it
its just very annoying that you quote ur whole story
but for the people who read it alltogether its good
make up ur mind and let me know if ur gonna stop it or not. Its ur choice
btw doesnt make you story any worse keep up the good work

[eire]

great story. confused about the blood? should I ask?

[sydneyyy93]

Originally Posted by sydneyyy93

Chapter 6

He smiled looking into the rear mirror at her. She looked so adorable as she slept, So peaceful and cute. He shook his head, 'what am i thinking shes 11 and my daughter...' He kept his eyes on the road glancing at her from the mirror occasionaly. He pulled into the driveway and cut the car off still looking at her usually she woke up when the car stopped. He got out and opened her door picked her up. She wrapped her legs around his waist and her arms around his neck resting her head on his shoulder. He smiled at her rubbing her back ignoring teh clothes she had left. He took her inside, walking up the steps he walked to her room, He laid her down on the bed and took her shirt off leaving her in her tanktop. He took her skirt off and got her shorts putting them on her he laid her down the rest of the way and covered her up. He sat next to her as she slept rubbing her hair. She smiled as if dreaming... He got up leaving the room he went down stairs cleaning up the kitchen. His girlfriend Lillian came up behind him and hugged him. "Hey Jason.... where is she?" She said curious. "Shes upstairs sleeping she fell asleep in the car." He turned around facing her, he hugged her and kissed her. "Oh..." Suddenly Crystal screamed for him. "DADDY!!!" Jason and Lillian both ran up the stairs and into her room. "What is it sweetie?" Jason said as he sat down. "I'm bleeding daddy..."Jason looked at Lillian....

Chapter 7

Cyrstal looked in fear as Jason looked at Lillian... Lillian sat next to Crystal. "Are you bleeding in a no no place?" Lillian asked softly motioning Jason to leave the room. Jason left as soon as he seen the sign. "Yes...." Crystal said in a soft voice with a bit of fear in it. "This is something that will happen every 28 days dear." Jillian got up and grabbed her purse. "You stay in here and ill be right back alright..." Crystal nodded as Lillian walked out, she went down stairs and out of the house. She came back about 20 minutes later and went back up to Crystals room holding a bag, she walked into the room placing the bag on the bed. She dumped it out and 4 items fell out. "This stuff will help you when your on your cycle..." She held up the pads. "I would start with these till your a bit comfortable with it ok?" Crystal nodded taking the pads. Lillian grabbed the tampons and panty liners. "If you go swimming or when you dont feel like wearing pads you can wear these and they last up to 8 hours. but if you use a tampon you have to use the liner for incase you cant make it to the bathroom this will catch the blood in time. but for a short time." She handed them to her. "Now take this when you start to hurt down there but only one ok?" Crystal nodded taking the box of midol. "Thank you Lillian." Lillian nodded. "If you run out just tell your daddy and hell go get you some.." Crystal nodded as Lillian walked out. Jason caught her in teh hall. "Is everything going ok?" Lillian smiled. "Your daughters becoming a woman..." She walked out and drove off.

[eire]

aww I right but was confused which is a great thing I love to see excellent story Sydney

[the doc]

haha really good
i like it
but just a question
what kind of story are you trying to make out of this??
ly xx

[sydneyyy93]

Originally Posted by sydneyyy93

Chapter 7

Cyrstal looked in fear as Jason looked at Lillian... Lillian sat next to Crystal. "Are you bleeding in a no no place?" Lillian asked softly motioning Jason to leave the room. Jason left as soon as he seen the sign. "Yes...." Crystal said in a soft voice with a bit of fear in it. "This is something that will happen every 28 days dear." Jillian got up and grabbed her purse. "You stay in here and ill be right back alright..." Crystal nodded as Lillian walked out, she went down stairs and out of the house. She came back about 20 minutes later and went back up to Crystals room holding a bag, she walked into the room placing the bag on the bed. She dumped it out and 4 items fell out. "This stuff will help you when your on your cycle..." She held up the pads. "I would start with these till your a bit comfortable with it ok?" Crystal nodded taking the pads. Lillian grabbed the tampons and panty liners. "If you go swimming or when you dont feel like wearing pads you can wear these and they last up to 8 hours. but if you use a tampon you have to use the liner for incase you cant make it to the bathroom this will catch the blood in time. but for a short time." She handed them to her. "Now take this when you start to hurt down there but only one ok?" Crystal nodded taking the box of midol. "Thank you Lillian." Lillian nodded. "If you run out just tell your daddy and hell go get you some.." Crystal nodded as Lillian walked out. Jason caught her in teh hall. "Is everything going ok?" Lillian smiled. "Your daughters becoming a woman..." She walked out and drove off.

Chapter 8

Crystal came out of her room about an hour later. Her daddy was laying on the couch. He motioned for her to come lay with him. She shook her head and went to the kitchen and got a glass of water. "It hurts daddy." She sat in a chair next to the couch. He sat up and scooted near her. "It only lasts for a couple days." He said patting her thigh a little to close to her private part. She looked up at him as he stood up. "What are you doing?" She put her feet up on the chair. "Makin dinner dear. What would you like?" He asked walking to the kitchen. "It don't matter....." She laid in teh chair feeling a bit of pain. "Alfredo dear?" She looked at him. "Sure...." She got up and laid on the couch. "I hate being a woman daddy....." He chuckled and came back and sat next to her. "It wont be that much longer hun its your first period so....." She looked at him as he rubbed her hair. "I lvoe you dear." She smiled. "I love you too daddy..." He got up going to her room he brought down a tank top and shorts. "Here dear you can put these on." He smiled watching her undress after taking the clothes. He started to get a boner watching her stand half naked. She put on the top and faced him. "Can you help my stomach hurts..." He nodded kneeling and holding the shorts. She stepped in holding his shoulders. He pulled the shorts up to her waist. He looked her in teh eyes as she wrapped her arms around his neck.