11-22-2011, 05:16 PM | #16 |
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Great job so far, I love how you update it very often.
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11-22-2011, 05:47 PM | #17 |
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love the story... can't wait for the next update
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11-22-2011, 06:33 PM | #18 |
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Yeah, me too. When will the next update be?
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11-22-2011, 07:44 PM | #19 |
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I'm really liking this so far!!!
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11-24-2011, 11:12 AM | #20 |
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This looks promising
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11-24-2011, 09:01 PM | #21 |
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I keep haunting this story, coming here every hour to see if there is a new release. I love this story.
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11-25-2011, 10:33 PM | #22 |
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Mark, oh mark, whatever shall I do with you...
First of all, let me say "sorry" because I *just* read your message and then came here to read this story. Now, you asked me how it was and I'm going to write you a full review! <3 From the second I started reading, I was totally hooked. Your writing style is nothing short of spectacular and your story is nothing but amazing. The characters seem very real, and quite believable and the same cam be said about their situation and the setting. One criticism (and it's a common one that usually improves over time) is details. A little more detail about the emotions of a character are *always* welcome. However, dont worry about this too much - because usually as you develop a character you will automatically decide on more details and note them as the story progresses. I think you have a real winner. I cant wait to see this story grow, as it is already my favorite. And seriously, you've made me kinda hot just reading it Cheers, and thanks so much for sharing, Mark. Love ya, <3 Lyn.
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11-27-2011, 12:38 AM | #23 |
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Love it!
This is amazing!
Love it and cannot wait for more! (: |
11-30-2011, 08:46 PM | #24 |
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Great Job
This story is one of my favorites so far. I can not wait to hear more. When is the next chapter coming out?
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12-01-2011, 05:06 PM | #26 |
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Very nice story so far. Very well written. The pace is great and everything is set up so that many interesting things can happen. Five stars for me! I can't wait for the next part!
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12-03-2011, 08:14 AM | #27 |
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Thanks for the feedback everyone! New chapters coming soon--hopefully tonight!
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12-03-2011, 09:26 AM | #28 |
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12-03-2011, 11:40 AM | #29 |
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Great story. I am looking forward to the next part.
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Quote:
Mark Bass uses chapter update. Fangirl Petaru uses fangirl scream. Mark Bass is stunned. Fangirl Petaru awaits the next chapter.
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