05-07-2012, 08:58 PM | #16 |
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Love the story so far, looking forward to the conclusion.
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05-09-2012, 09:04 AM | #17 |
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great story so far sounds like a fun game too
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05-11-2012, 12:46 PM | #18 |
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Sorry guys, been really busy lately to write another chapter but i'll try to as soon as i can. Thanks for all the great comments though, i really appreciate them all
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05-13-2012, 07:36 AM | #19 |
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The story is great so far would love to read more
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05-31-2012, 03:38 AM | #20 |
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Sorry for not updating sooner but here is the next part. Thanks for all the positive feedback everyone
Part 4 There were three of us left in the game. me, lisa and rachel. I woke up in manchester and looked at the tracking device. There was one person in plymouth and one in liverpool. i assumed one person had taken a getaway flight into john lennon airport. I checked my phone and saw there was a new message from rachel. This message was about to change everything. 'All three of us thought we'd be the last 3 in so how about we up the odds a bit to make it more interesting. The two losers have to become the winners no limits slaves for a week.' The mixed emotions started flooding through me, excitement, fear, nerves, anxiety. But i was only ever going to reply saying yes. I was never one to turn down a challenge, and i knew Lisa would do the same. I immediately text back to agree to the terms. I got ready quickly and left the hotel to head towards liverpool. I checked the tracking device and saw the person in plymouth was heading north quickly. they must have got a flight and i assumed it was either to manchester or liverpool. I jumped on a train and arrived in Liverpool at midday and began to search. Its always a weird sensation searching for someonewho is looking for you, like you are almost walking into their trap but thats the only way to succeed. At 4pm i still had no luck but knew now that all three of us were in liverpool. The three red dots were practically right over each other but still no luck. What if someone had seen me though. I knew it was too bigger risk to stay here for the night so headed for the airport. I crossed the city and as I entered I was in luck. right on cue Lisa walked in right ahead of me. I tried to follow, weaving through the airport, but lost her in the crowds. Damn. I knew i had to leave quickly before i wwas caught out so took the next flight out of there which was surprisingly to teeside. i was going back to where i started. i found a hotel and waited. At 8 pm both people were still in liverpool. I was getting anxious. What was going to happen. Would either person be eliminated. And at 9pm my phone buzzed and i was surprised at what I found. Lisa had been eliminated. Lisa, the person most of us expected to win this game was out. I was shocked. I checked the photo and sure enough there was Lisa cuffed to a bedpost being pounded in the ass with Rachel's smirking face behind her. Only two us left in the game now, I deleted the message and went to sleep with all my thoughts, strapons, slavery, ultimate control, no limits. What would happen. I woke up in the hotel and got ready. I checked the tracking device. Rachel was close by and definitely in teeside. I left my room at the hotel and made my way towards the stairs. I knew i had to be quick, Rachel could be anywhere so I had no time to think. I opened the door to the stairwell and took two steps forward. Its all i managed to take. I felt my arms grabbed from behind. I heard the sound of some handcuffs lock. Rachel was behind me and my head dropped. She led me back down the corridor i'd just come from and past my room and stopped in front of a door 3 rooms down from where i'd stayed. What were the chances, same town, same hotel, same floor, same corridor, 3 rooms away. And she just happened to walk out about 1 minute after me. I don't do probability but i knew the odds were small. But that small chance had cost me the game. And that meant three things. I was out, My ass was about to get the pounding of a lifetime, and me and Lisa were now Rachel's slaves for a week. Only one thought went through my head..... Oh Crap!! |
05-31-2012, 09:07 PM | #22 |
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decent story, I approve.
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05-31-2012, 09:26 PM | #23 |
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I love the story but the cliffhangers make it hard to wait for more to be posted
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06-09-2012, 10:12 AM | #24 |
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Good stuff this, very interesting read.
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06-13-2012, 02:19 PM | #25 |
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This is a great story.However when will the next part be uploaded.
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06-13-2012, 03:27 PM | #26 |
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Great story with a unique plot. Keep it going please.
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07-11-2012, 01:27 AM | #27 |
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Sorry i haven't posted in a while guys,
But this story is certainly not dead and hopefully never will be Hopefully will get anotoher part up soon Thanks for reading everyone Sarah xxxx |
07-12-2012, 12:44 AM | #29 |
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I love it so far, please keep writing
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07-14-2012, 05:50 AM | #30 |
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Thanks
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