[Fiction] Erin's Hell

[soccerninja]

Yes I did! When will you update this one?! I can't wait much longer!!!

[LeiNinja]

This is an awesome story, I love it and I can hardly wait for more.（＾∇＾）

[skjelner]

Hope you all enjoyed the first part of Next-Level Training. Before I update that story again, here's another part of this one! And you won't have to wait long for more, as another part is coming tomorrow. <3

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“Now, Isabel, I don’t believe you are familiar with the rule we gave Erin regarding her diet,” Jason began, circling the girls, “but it’s also applies to you, so listen up: you will eat and drink when and only when we tell you. Also,” he winked at Brian and Mark, “everything you eat or drink must contain some ingredient that was first inside a human body.”

Isabel let out a small gasp, then looked at Erin.

“They …” Erin started, “made me drink water filled with their cum.”

“Ooh, that sounds good,” Brian said, laughing at the disgusted look Isabel gave her friend. “I’ll have to get in on another one of those later.”

“Sure,” Jason confirmed, “but first I think it’s time we fed these girls today. After all, Erin was out awhile, and I don’t believe Isabel has eaten anything yet—and it’s already nighttime. Mark?”

Mark had already left the circle of light. Erin could hear water running somewhere in the near distance; after several seconds it shut off and Mark returned carrying several objects: a clear jug of water, a ball gag, a speculum dripping with thick liquid, and a small blue tin.

“Wh-What’s in the tin?” Isabel squeaked. Erin knew she was nervous, and she had every right to be: Erin herself felt worried, though she by now had gotten somewhat used to her captors’ methods.

“This tin,” Jason plucked it and the speculum from Mark’s hands, “contains your meal for the day, and perhaps other days too, depending on how good you are.” He twisted off the metal lid and bent down in front of the girls, slowly moving it past their faces so they could see what was inside.

“Oatmeal?” It came out as a question, but Erin didn’t mean it that way.

“Instant oatmeal, to be precise,” Mark confirmed.

“I hope you like it,” Jason continued. “Actually, scratch that, I don’t really give a shit because it’s what you’re going to be eating whether you like it or not. And in case you girls are just too thick to put this all together, we’re going to be mixing it up in your clean little assholes. Aren’t enemas great?”

Erin wanted to vomit: drinking semen-filled water and eating cum-covered toast were about as bad as she could have imagined, but those couldn’t compare to this. She didn’t even care for oatmeal much in the first place, and the idea of eating the gooey stuff after mixing it in her ass was absolutely sickening. Isabel caught her friend’s eye with a look of similar disgust: clearly this was not going to pleasant for either of them.

“We’ll start with you, Isabel, since your ass is so fresh and clean now,” Jason started to explain. “And since Erin did such a good job administering that enema, we’re going to have some fun by letting her be the one to mix the oatmeal.”

Before the girls had time to react, Brian grabbed Isabel’s head with both hands, holding her still so Mark could fasten the ball gag in her mouth. Meanwhile, Jason barked out orders: “Isabel, get down onto your forearms and put your ass high in the air. Erin, get behind her and start stretching her ass with your fingers.”

Erin obeyed the first command but hesitated once she was in position behind her friend.

“Come on slut, I already told you you would need to get to know your friend’s body, and this is the next step. I can see plenty of lube on her hole still; get two fingers in there and start spreading them. Now!”

Jason’s sternness snapped Erin into action: wanting to avoid any harmful wrath of her captor, she quickly but carefully slipped her left forefinger into Isabel’s wet anus, using her right hand to spread her cheeks. Isabel let out a muffled whine as her sphincter tightened around Erin’s finger.

“I’m sorry, Is, I’m so sorry,” Erin whispered, and gradually Isabel stopped breathing so heavily and began to relax. Ever so slowly, Erin pressed the tip of her middle finger against the soft, wrinkled skin of her friend’s anus, sliding it slowly in. She met with almost no resistance, as apparently the enema nozzle had stretched Isabel’s ass significantly, and soon Erin’s fingers rested comfortably inside her friend.

Erin, however, was far from comfortable. Even though Isabel’s ass was about as clean as possible, she was still revolted to be touching another person in this way, even her best friend. It was still someone’s ass, and Erin couldn’t help but think of it as dirty. She looked away as she began to stretch her fingers, pushing against the soft flesh of Isabel’s insides and causing her to moan again. She noticed Brian and Mark had taken off their pants and begun to masturbate once more, circling the girls like some kind of bizarre cult members.

Meanwhile, Jason began spreading the liquid over the speculum, and Erin realized he was lubricating it. “Do you know what this is?” Jason asked.

“Yes … of course. It’s a speculum."

“That’s right, my little helper, though this one is specially made for anal work. And you’re going to be using it. Now, I think you’ve stretched your friend enough, so let’s get started.” He held the device out to Erin, who gingerly slipped her fingers from Isabel’s ass and took it, turning it in her hands. She had had a speculum used on her before at the doctor’s but of course had never used one on someone else. I wonder if Isabel has, she thought to herself, she’s always been into kinky stuff like this.

“Know how to use that?” Jason asked.

“I— I think so. I can figure it out.” Erin leaned over her friend’s bare back. “Just relax, Isabel, I’ll be as gentle as I can.”

[hotstuf90]

This is amazing! I've spent the last week reading and absolutely love it. Sometimes it is a bit too brutal for me, but it is still fantastic. I can't wait for more

[skjelner]

Awesome, always glad to have a new reader! Here's the next part.

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Isabel craned her neck to look up at Erin, sniffed loudly, then nodded. Several tears scarred her flushed cheeks, and Erin almost couldn’t bear to continue. But she knew she must: disobeying her captors was not worth the risk. Gathering her composure, she leaned back and spread her friend’s ass cheeks with one hand, then carefully inserted the speculum into Isabel’s glistening hole. The device was a bit oddly shaped, but Erin had little trouble sliding it all the way in. When it was secure, she spun the little knob on the side of the speculum, slowly widening it. Isabel moaned at this but didn’t appear to be in pain, so Erin continued until the device had opened as far as it could go.

The result was undeniably interesting: having never been into kinky porn, Erin had never seen anything like it. She was staring directly into Isabel’s ass, which gaped open in what seemed like an impossible manner. A soft looking, dark pink mass peeked out from deep within, as if inviting her to touch it, but Erin tried to ignore it. Instead, she shuffled away from Isabel and looked up at Jason.

“Nice work, whore, I’m impressed at how quickly you figured out that speculum. Maybe you won’t be totally useless to us after all. Anyway, next comes the fun part.”

Mark handed Erin the tin of oatmeal and water jug. “Time to mix that oatmeal up real good. Might be easier to add some water first,” he said with a wink. Erin took his advice, first pouring a splash of water into Isabel’s ass, which contracted upon contact, but remained open due to the speculum. Thankfully the water is semi-warm, Erin thought, glad to not be causing her friend any more discomfort than necessary.

Next, she tilted the tin over Isabel’s ass and poured some of the dry oats into the water. They floated on top, and Erin realized she’d need to pour a lot more to make proper oatmeal: if this were going to be Isabel’s only meal for the day, she at least wanted to make it as filling as possible.

“Just relax, Isabel,” Brian advised. “Let the oatmeal fill your anal cavity as she pours it so she can add more. And Erin, don’t skimp on the oats: we’re making oatmeal here, not oat soup.”

Taking his advice, Isabel slowly relaxed, and indeed the water level inside the speculum receded. This time Erin poured a great deal of oats, then more water, repeating each time the oatmeal turned fully soggy. Finally, Isabel’s gaping ass was full, and Erin looked to Jason once more.
 “Excellent. Now take that speculum out and set it down. And be sure not to let any of the oatmeal spill like you did with our cum earlier, or else I’m gonna hurt you both.”

Erin was prepared for him to say something like this. “Is, stick your ass up as far as you can.” She pushed against Isabel’s thighs to help, then carefully slid the speculum out and placed it onto the concrete floor. Isabel’s anus slowly contracted around the oatmeal, eventually sealing nearly shut.

“Alright, now Isabel, just to make that oatmeal gets nice and mixed, stand up, face your friend, and do fifteen jumping jacks. Be sure to keep your ass tight so none of it spills out.” As Isabel struggled to her feet, Jason continued: “Erin, to help you get used to Isabel’s tiny little naked body, I want you to stay on your knees and watch. No blinking.”

Erin nodded in fearful compliance, then gazed up at Isabel, whose pale body glistened all over from sweat. As Isabel started the exercise, Erin’s eyes traveled from her friend’s flexing legs to her narrow hips to her tight stomach to her jiggling breasts. She never would have admitted it to anyone else, but Erin felt another pang of jealously: all of Isabel was so thin, yet so toned and supple. Isabel had the perfect dancer’s body, one that Erin knew she could never match. Soon her eyes reached Isabel’s tear-decorated face and messy red hair, however, and she realized she had to stop thinking such thoughts. We’re in this togethet, she thought. I have to remember that.

Erin had lost count, but eventually Isabel stopped and immediately pushed her legs together, presumably to stop any accidental leaks. All three men stepped toward the girls, and Erin realized they all were completely naked, their unsheathed penises standing straight out. Somehow they must have undressed during her fixation on Isabel’s jumping jacks.

Jason smiled broadly. “Great job, Isabel, you’re quite fit, as expected of a dancer. I hope your ass hasn’t gotten too comfortable holding all that oatmeal, though, because it won’t be in there much longer. Stand in front of me with your legs spread and turn to my left.” He gestured with one hand, and Isabel hurriedly stood where he indicated.

“Good. Now, Erin, lie down on your back with your face beneath her. It’s time for your friend to feed you your meal.”

[Hunterman36]

Loving the story... Keep Up the great work.

[Tor]

From the first 2 pages that I skimmed through it is clear that the author is:

1) a virgin (hence the endless & detailed scenes of "jerk me off");
2) was not paying attention during sex ed. at school & is clueless about female anatomy.

Please refer to the link below to finally discover what a uterus is and where it is located:

http://www.medterms.com/script/main/...rticlekey=5918

As you will see, uterus is not another name for vagina. It is located past vagina, and past cervix, so it is physically impossible to fuck it.

http://images.medicinenet.com/images/illustrations/female_structures.jpg"

...not to mention to stick one's tongue in it:

>>"sticking his wet tongue up her bruised uterus"

>>"thin barricade of her hymen stretch and, very painfully, shatter to pieces within her widening uterus"
Fo reals?

Judging by readers' reaction they are not too far off from the author's anatomical knowledge.
Is everybody on this site younger than 15 or is it just my opinion?

[Instinct]

Honestly, not many people know much about vaginas to start with. They just know they can fxck it and if you hit the cervix, it hurts & you went too far.
Age doesn't have much to do with it, considering there are adults who don't know where Iraq or Canada is..

[Hunterman36]

Actually everyone on this site is 18 or over. Also were enjoying the story... If you don't like it dont read it. And also if you don't like getdare don't join up its that simple

[Instinct]

Scroll up the page and there's a 14 year old right there.. and there's 13 year olds, and 15-17.. some lie about their age and claim they're older, but some are honest.

[soccerninja]

Well I think the story is still amazing either way. Can't wait for the next chapter!

[Tor]

Originally Posted by Instinct

Honestly, not many people know much about vaginas to start with. They just know they can fxck it and if you hit the cervix, it hurts & you went too far.

Great. But if you don't know much about vaginas you better learn about them ASAP, 'cause they don't just give pleasure or pain, but also sometimes give birth, or STD's and HIV too. Great many people get injured and injure others through ignorance. Will come as a surprise to most here, but something as common as vaginal fisting, if not done right, can lead to death (air embolism). Gee wiz, huh?

Originally Posted by Instinct

Age doesn't have much to do with it, considering there are adults who don't know where Iraq or Canada is..

My observation is that most people on this site lie about their age, but that's the Internet for you, whatever. I am more concerned about people who have sexual fantasies of rather intrusive acts and are too lazy to open a book (or Google for that matter).

BTW, earlier in the thread you stated:

Originally Posted by Instinct

I'm pretty sure urine is sterile

Urine is not sterile. Furthermore, by thinking that way & engaging in "golden showers" (with consumption), you could have just contracted somebody's urinary tract infections (the second most common type of infection in adults), Hepatitis, Chlamydia, and Gonorrhea. Oh, snap?

Didn't wanna be ranting or preaching, but knowledge is power (and safety). That's why I spoke out in the first place - the gross misinformation of the author about human anatomy was bothersome (amplified by the number of people following the story and not calling him out on his sh*t).

[skjelner]

Someone already pointed out that I got some anatomy wrong, and since then I've tried to do a better job. Next part coming soon.

[erick92]

Originally Posted by skjelner

Someone already pointed out that I got some anatomy wrong, and since then I've tried to do a better job. Next part coming soon.

Haters gonna hate. I personally enjoy the story, no matter if a few parts of the anatomy are messed up. It is, after all, a FICTIONAL STORY.

[archie21]

Originally Posted by Hunterman36

Actually everyone on this site is 18 or over. Also were enjoying the story... If you don't like it dont read it. And also if you don't like getdare don't join up its that simple

Hunterman... Kink Talk is 18 plus.... Get Dare is 13 plus..... but so few remember. It is one of the reasons I try to be careful about who I give dares too and why I will often ask ages on those who don't post them.

If any one is worrying about the content of this story I would remind you that you can find anything just as invasive in a corner shop or on line by following any number of tales like this on drawing sites, especially the Anime sites where female torture is a highly regard art form.