Fiction: Strangers, Friendship, Romance (MxM) - Page 12

Kewai · 10-05-2011, 10:01 PM

OMG James, this is really great. I love your duel perspective Idea and I love the way it reads. You really deservd that 10,000 views and more. I love you, hope your going well!!!

Abmp · 10-06-2011, 05:26 AM

Wow. Your chapters are so mean!
I mean cliffhanger much!
But the dual perspective is interesting and effective.
Also an incredible storyline!
so to put is simply:
I LUV IT!
Seriously it's an excellent chapter and I can't wait for more.

Rachie · 10-06-2011, 06:18 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by J.M.N

Thank's Rachie for your comment and keeping watching over my story and clearing it up when needed lol

Urm yeah it's probably best if you just read it !

1- your welcome
2- was exactly what I did

(just read it)
3- superb love the way of telling it in both views and whoever suggested the colour text differential is wonderful, makes it so easy to read

LOVE RACHIE
x x x x

Saphir · 10-06-2011, 06:26 AM

sweeet :3

I'm really looking forward to the next chapter :3
and I learnt a new word :3 snuggling - and I love it :3 and hope your next chapter includes a lot of it :3 :P

*little hyper*

Love :3

C.K. · 10-06-2011, 08:42 AM

Ahhhhh write longer chapters dammit!!

love this so much

epic kobra · 10-08-2011, 02:47 PM

I've been lurking on this story for awhile now and I figured I should probably actually reply for once so I just want to say this is an excellent story and one of my favorites on the site.
EpiC

slutjuice · 10-17-2011, 02:37 PM

This is one of the sweetest stories on here.

J.M.N · 11-10-2011, 08:38 PM

Hiya everyone i'm back

Sorry for the delay and leaving the story on a terrible cliffhanger! I'll apologise more on a blog post later so keep an eye out for that !

I just wanted to get my new chapter up as soon as possible so here is chapter 23 ! I've gone back to just Ryan's perspectuve for this chapter as it wouldn't have been as good otherwise.

Chapter 23

“Well I suppose you were quite comfy as well, Want to reassume our snuggling position?”

Did he really just say that? My eyes widened with surprise at the thought that he may have just admitted he was gay to me. However this was a way to optimistic thought for me so I will have to probe some more to get a definite answer. But first let’s see what I should do now, yeah it’s obvious I want more “snuggling” as he put it, but I need to take things slowly………hmm………oh whatever, I want some more cuddling of a hot guy !

“Urm…” urm yes please you stupidly hot guy, I would like to cuddle you for the next 200 hours. In fact I think we would both be more comfortable cuddling naked so why don’t we do that! Hmm, no that sounds a bit………insane. “Well if you are tired I suppose we could.” Yes that’s ok not too mad sounding.

As James leaned against me one more time a giant grin spread across my face, this evening had gone much better than I would've expected.

I felt so at calm with him there beside me, like at this moment it was just the two of us and nothing else in the world mattered. The problems of the world flew away as James moved around trying to get comfortable and releasing a sigh when he was happy.

After a few hours which few by like minutes, James got up to face me.

“So you’ve probably guessed I’m gay haven’t you” he said looking down like he had something to be ashamed about.

“Yeah it was kind of obvious by the end.” I chuckled as I bent my head sideways trying to attract his eye line.

He looked up at me; I gave him a reassuring smile which he returned.

“So you aren’t mad at me for not telling you that I was gay when you told me?” his eyes opened as wide as a puppy dog’s.

“N~”

“It’s just that………I didn’t think it was the right moment to tell you after you had all those memories come back about your old school so I didn’t know if it would go down well or not,” He said raising his volume to interrupt me.

“Its fi~”

“Ah now I see that was a stupid mistake, I’m so sorry.” James said getting even louder.

I looked at him and gave him a facial expression that was both stern and joyful and the same time just to get him to stop talking. I realised then how much I had REALLY changed! My mind, body and soul felt different since I had joined this new school and it was down to two people, James and Ben.

With a silent James in front of me I whispered “there is no need to be angry with yourself, I’m just so glad that you can return the feelings I had for you as If you couldn’t I don’t know how I would bare to see you every day. You are amazing, and don’t let anyone else tell you otherwise. Everything you do make me smile. If I’m honest with you James, I think I love you.”

I let a large sigh of relief out as I had just unburdened all the feelings I had kept locked away. It felt good to have them out in the open but here was the moment I have been both excited for and dreading. I sat there waiting in silence like I was a defendant as a court case waiting for the verdict.

Unexpectedly a large grin started to replace James’ emotionally lacking face.

“Haha I am so surprised at this! I did not expect you of all people to admit all of that! I feel kind of embarrassed at what you said; no one’s ever been so sweet to me before.”

Our eyes met. I was captivated by his brown and blue eyes, another reason why he was special. I felt drawn in as I slowly leaned in closer, my hands shaking as I was so nervous. Being only a few centimetres away, we both leapt in for a kiss. My hands stopped shaking as my mind was overwhelmed with passion. Our tongues wrestled for supremacy until we pulled apart.

I gazed at him, the world could be getting destroyed outside but all I cared about was that first special kiss I had just shared. We both leaned in again locking lips for the second time and for the third……and the fourth……and the fifth.

The orgasmic contact continued until it was time for James to leave. We only ended up kissing because he knew I would like to take things slow.

After one final kiss he got up and whispered in my ear,

“Goodbye……boyfriend.”

Saphir · 11-12-2011, 05:02 AM

Awesome awesome awesome! :3

That was soo sweet

I love it <3

You are not going to write James point of view?
I don't see why it wouldn't have been as good to have both...

At this point...

Quote:

“So you’ve probably guessed I’m gay haven’t you” he said looking down like he had something to be ashamed about.

I really wanted to read first what there would've been written in James chap^^

But whatever

that's up to you :P

Love <3

daremaster 1 · 11-12-2011, 06:12 AM

I am really to enjoy this story!

slutjuice · 11-12-2011, 09:16 AM

aww!!! so adorible!!
really the only 3 words for this are adorible, sweet, and aww!!!!

pymani96 · 11-14-2011, 04:23 PM

This story is just so amazing! The pace is great, and so is the content.
Pymani

MarisaLaugh · 11-14-2011, 06:23 PM

It's just so beautiful.Cutecutecute!
Wow, it's been like two months since I've been on here.
No worries, still your biggest (...female...) fan!
Loooovvvveeeeee you and this story and the world and emo guys and rambling and rainbows.
Hooray!

pymani96 · 01-30-2012, 10:16 AM

I hate it when threads get abandoned...
Pymani

daremaster 1 · 01-30-2012, 03:57 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by pymani96

I hate it when threads get abandoned...
Pymani

I don't thank he abandon this, maybe taking a break.

10-05-2011, 10:01 PM	#166
Kewai getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Oct 2010 Posts: 372 Blog Entries: 8	OMG James, this is really great. I love your duel perspective Idea and I love the way it reads. You really deservd that 10,000 views and more. I love you, hope your going well!!! __________________ 18/M/Bi/New Zealand

10-06-2011, 05:26 AM	#167
Abmp Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2011 Posts: 125	Wow. Your chapters are so mean! I mean cliffhanger much! But the dual perspective is interesting and effective. Also an incredible storyline! so to put is simply: I LUV IT! Seriously it's an excellent chapter and I can't wait for more. __________________ Likes: masturbation, very mild pain, Internet, Dislikes: pee, poo, family This is a basic likes and dislikes, I will try somethings just ask

10-06-2011, 08:42 AM	#170
C.K. Account Banned Join Date: Aug 2011 Location: UK Posts: 54 Blog Entries: 3	Ahhhhh write longer chapters dammit!! love this so much __________________ I'm a free lil pup

10-08-2011, 02:47 PM	#171
epic kobra Junior Member Join Date: Sep 2009 Posts: 20	I've been lurking on this story for awhile now and I figured I should probably actually reply for once so I just want to say this is an excellent story and one of my favorites on the site. EpiC __________________ Likes: Pain,messy,pee, masturbation, Limits: family, illegal, crossdressing I do have a cam. 20/m/us

10-17-2011, 02:37 PM	#172
slutjuice Distinguished Member Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: USA Posts: 523	This is one of the sweetest stories on here. __________________ FAVORITE!: lesbian stuff (I have lovely female roommate to help) Likes: pain, friends, public, holding items, long term, ruined orgasms, bondage. Limits: illegal, some permanent, pics, cam. PM me anything you want me to write with sharpie on my body.

10-06-2011, 06:26 AM	#169
Saphir getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Dec 2010 Posts: 425	sweeet :3 I'm really looking forward to the next chapter :3 and I learnt a new word :3 snuggling - and I love it :3 and hope your next chapter includes a lot of it :3 :P little hyper Love :3

11-10-2011, 08:38 PM	#173
J.M.N Getdare's Head Whore Join Date: Jun 2011 Location: UK Posts: 1,401 Blog Entries: 14	Chapter 23 Hiya everyone i'm back Sorry for the delay and leaving the story on a terrible cliffhanger! I'll apologise more on a blog post later so keep an eye out for that ! I just wanted to get my new chapter up as soon as possible so here is chapter 23 ! I've gone back to just Ryan's perspectuve for this chapter as it wouldn't have been as good otherwise. Chapter 23 “Well I suppose you were quite comfy as well, Want to reassume our snuggling position?” Did he really just say that? My eyes widened with surprise at the thought that he may have just admitted he was gay to me. However this was a way to optimistic thought for me so I will have to probe some more to get a definite answer. But first let’s see what I should do now, yeah it’s obvious I want more “snuggling” as he put it, but I need to take things slowly………hmm………oh whatever, I want some more cuddling of a hot guy ! “Urm…” urm yes please you stupidly hot guy, I would like to cuddle you for the next 200 hours. In fact I think we would both be more comfortable cuddling naked so why don’t we do that! Hmm, no that sounds a bit………insane. “Well if you are tired I suppose we could.” Yes that’s ok not too mad sounding. As James leaned against me one more time a giant grin spread across my face, this evening had gone much better than I would've expected. I felt so at calm with him there beside me, like at this moment it was just the two of us and nothing else in the world mattered. The problems of the world flew away as James moved around trying to get comfortable and releasing a sigh when he was happy. After a few hours which few by like minutes, James got up to face me. “So you’ve probably guessed I’m gay haven’t you” he said looking down like he had something to be ashamed about. “Yeah it was kind of obvious by the end.” I chuckled as I bent my head sideways trying to attract his eye line. He looked up at me; I gave him a reassuring smile which he returned. “So you aren’t mad at me for not telling you that I was gay when you told me?” his eyes opened as wide as a puppy dog’s. “N~” “It’s just that………I didn’t think it was the right moment to tell you after you had all those memories come back about your old school so I didn’t know if it would go down well or not,” He said raising his volume to interrupt me. “Its fi~” “Ah now I see that was a stupid mistake, I’m so sorry.” James said getting even louder. I looked at him and gave him a facial expression that was both stern and joyful and the same time just to get him to stop talking. I realised then how much I had REALLY changed! My mind, body and soul felt different since I had joined this new school and it was down to two people, James and Ben. With a silent James in front of me I whispered “there is no need to be angry with yourself, I’m just so glad that you can return the feelings I had for you as If you couldn’t I don’t know how I would bare to see you every day. You are amazing, and don’t let anyone else tell you otherwise. Everything you do make me smile. If I’m honest with you James, I think I love you.” I let a large sigh of relief out as I had just unburdened all the feelings I had kept locked away. It felt good to have them out in the open but here was the moment I have been both excited for and dreading. I sat there waiting in silence like I was a defendant as a court case waiting for the verdict. Unexpectedly a large grin started to replace James’ emotionally lacking face. “Haha I am so surprised at this! I did not expect you of all people to admit all of that! I feel kind of embarrassed at what you said; no one’s ever been so sweet to me before.” Our eyes met. I was captivated by his brown and blue eyes, another reason why he was special. I felt drawn in as I slowly leaned in closer, my hands shaking as I was so nervous. Being only a few centimetres away, we both leapt in for a kiss. My hands stopped shaking as my mind was overwhelmed with passion. Our tongues wrestled for supremacy until we pulled apart. I gazed at him, the world could be getting destroyed outside but all I cared about was that first special kiss I had just shared. We both leaned in again locking lips for the second time and for the third……and the fourth……and the fifth. The orgasmic contact continued until it was time for James to leave. We only ended up kissing because he knew I would like to take things slow. After one final kiss he got up and whispered in my ear, “Goodbye……boyfriend.” __________________ [20:16:43] Jameser: ‹@J.M.N› don't worry you're definitely one of the lads here [22:05:21] 1Pupil: Best moderator of getDare to me One day when the light is glowing I’ll be in my castle golden But until the gates are open I just wanna feel this moment "Bdsm. That's were u get spanked!" I love weiners and nuts. "JMN is the one that most the tweenagers want to see in a kilt"

11-12-2011, 06:12 AM	#175
daremaster 1 getDare God Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: <3 Posts: 3,032	I am really to enjoy this story!

11-12-2011, 09:16 AM	#176
slutjuice Distinguished Member Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: USA Posts: 523	aww!!! so adorible!! really the only 3 words for this are adorible, sweet, and aww!!!! __________________ FAVORITE!: lesbian stuff (I have lovely female roommate to help) Likes: pain, friends, public, holding items, long term, ruined orgasms, bondage. Limits: illegal, some permanent, pics, cam. PM me anything you want me to write with sharpie on my body.

11-14-2011, 04:23 PM	#177
pymani96 getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Jan 2011 Location: - Posts: 354	This story is just so amazing! The pace is great, and so is the content. Pymani

11-14-2011, 06:23 PM	#178
MarisaLaugh Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2010 Posts: 161	It's just so beautiful.Cutecutecute! Wow, it's been like two months since I've been on here. No worries, still your biggest (...female...) fan! Loooovvvveeeeee you and this story and the world and emo guys and rambling and rainbows. Hooray! __________________ 19 <> Female <> USA <> (insert sexuality here) Likes: humiliation, clothing control, bladder control, anal Dislikes: Pet play, really big messes, and getting arrested

01-30-2012, 10:16 AM	#179
pymani96 getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Jan 2011 Location: - Posts: 354	I hate it when threads get abandoned... Pymani