09-16-2011, 02:36 PM | #46 |
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Nice ending!
I agree with Carl about description of feelings and how they touch and all that romantic stuff... could've been longer :P It's very nice tho! Love |
09-18-2011, 02:08 PM | #47 |
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This is going somewhere very nice...
Only criticism (as you asked for some) would be to be sure to keep filling us in on the emotional side of things. Just a minor criticism though. Otherwise, keep it up!! ;D
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09-18-2011, 07:06 PM | #48 |
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Niiiiiiceeeee!
Honestly I thought in that last chap, the worst part would be the transitions, but you pulled it off quite nicely. I would say not quite enough detail, but still enough that I thoroughly enjoyed it. Great job Koty, great job -Dylsterr, a proud consultant :3
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09-18-2011, 07:14 PM | #49 |
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Thank you SOOOO much to everyone that commented on my story, Especially you, Dylan (Sorry, everyone else, he's #1 to me). I really appreciate the criticism. Thank you for helping me help you help me all. (Props to the first person who can figure out where that quote comes from (hint: I changed a word or 2 to prevent you from just googling it)).
Anyways, I don't know when exactly, I'll have the next chapter up. Hopefully by the weekend. Marching band is taking all my time. Thanks for reading my story so far. Ya'll come back, now.
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09-18-2011, 07:27 PM | #50 |
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Love this story, thank Dylan for indirectly directing me towards reading this. Love it so far!
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09-23-2011, 12:56 PM | #51 |
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Hey guys. Sorry about the delays. Just a quick update: I'm gonna be pretty busy this weekend. I'll try to have the next chapter up by Sunday, but I can't guarantee anything. At the very latest, the next chapter should be up by about Wednesday. I promise I'll do my best to get it up soon. Have I lied to you? (pause)...I mean, in this room?
Anyone know where that quote's from?
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09-24-2011, 08:51 AM | #53 |
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Update it! It is just so good.
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09-29-2011, 01:17 AM | #54 |
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Good so far, keep up the good work.
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10-10-2011, 06:41 PM | #55 |
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Hey guys, I'm sorry it's been almost 2 weeks, but I literally have 2 days a week free that I don't have marching band practice or competitions. I've definitely not given up on this story, I just need a little time. Sorry!!!!
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10-10-2011, 10:04 PM | #57 |
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Thanks for sharing, enjoyed reading this
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10-20-2011, 09:46 AM | #58 |
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Good story. Please keep it up
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10-20-2011, 02:37 PM | #59 |
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hey, I'm SO SO SO sorry that i haven't posted. Drumline is KILLING ME (but on the bright side, we did win 2nd place in music and 1st place drumline at our competition ). Anyways, I'm not sure that I'll be able to update until band season is over in a couple of weeks. I'll do what I can, but I'm stuck between a rock and a hard on (wait did I get that phrase right? oh well...). Thanks so much for your patience.
Much love, Koty
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