Day under Freddie

vivala_dare · 03-28-2009, 10:52 AM

I jogged the last mile on the treadmill I hopped of my mate Freddie past me a bottle of water. I and Freddie had been going to the gym every Friday for a while now it was good fun. We went into the locker rooms we sat on the bench against the wall. Freddie opened are lockers and chucked me my bag. We talked about the day events. I and Freddie are 17 and he has short black hair quite tall and muscle all over. I am slightly taller with blond brownish hair and have muscle on legs and arms but a flat stomach. We walked over to the showers me and Freddie usually wore trunks when we shower but today Freddie got naked and started to shower I walked over and he told me to shower naked to. You’re allowed to shower naked you know said Freddie. We had seen each other naked a few times and mutual masturbated on occasions. So I stripped down and started to shower. It was a big open shower; a guy walked in had a quick shower and walked out. I looked at
Freddie his penis was longer than mine by a good inch he never teased me he just said that’s the way it is get over it. He had shaven all over and his package looked magnificent. I have a trimmed bush and shaven balls mine looked the way I liked it.

Fancy a bet? Said Freddie.

Yes what kind of bet I said.

We both do push ups which one of us ever drops first has to do whatever the other one says for a day said Freddie.

Sounds great I said.

We both got down and started doing push ups after 27 I dropped on my cock. Freddie did to 50 then said next Friday we would meet at the gym at dinner and I would be his slave for the day. Friday came round all too quick. We met at gym I we had made arrangements. The locker room was empty. Freddie walked up we had a quick chat we agreed if I did everything what he said then I would get an award later. But I had to do everything he said.
I had to get naked I stood there with an erection. I was told to go shower Freddie watched me. The locker room has Lockers and cubicles all over and the big open shower. We walked over to one of the cubicles in the middle of them all. It was near the far wall away from the showers and door way entering the gym. I was still naked two people saw me but dint rely notice as most people walked around naked. The gym was busy but not packed. He opened the door of the cubical they are quite small with a seat in. He entered and sat down he placed his bag next to him. I entered and shut the door. The cubical has a roof on and the door was low so you can’t see under and the other 3 walls touch the floor as they attach to the cubicles next to it. So it’s like a tight box can’t see in cant see out. Freddie told me to kneel down. Freddie stood up stripped and sat back down. Your first job is to suck my dick he said.

As I was kneeling down my head was close to his crotch I was nervous. He lent back stretched his legs so there was more access to his penis. I had a hard on I grabbed his floppy penis he closed his eyes. I tugged on it I went up and down his erect shaft. I closed my eyes I had lost the bet and this experience could be fun. I fort of all the porno’s I watched of girls sucking guys of. So I set to work. I placed my lips on his dick and went down and up I spat on his cock and licked his balls. I went up and down faster and faster I played with his balls. I went all the way down and felt his dick touch the back of my throat. I sucked and licked his penis I was enjoying this. I could feel his cock throbbing. I licked his bell end steaming hot cum shot in my mouth I sucked him dry I licked him all over his package. I looked down streaming hot cum fired out of my own penis wow it was mind blowing. Freddie smiled and winked.
There would be more to CUM

Hope you enjoyed after feedback I will write more if any suggestions feel free to post. More soon

Viva

Daredevil999 · 03-28-2009, 11:26 AM

MY GRAMMER SENSES ARE TINGGLING

It's a really good story but..
you need speech marks; 'yes' said bob
our, not are
thought not fort
it sounds like i'm moaning now.. seriously, i do really think that it's a great stroy and i like it but better grammer would make it easier to read

but please carry on

03-28-2009, 10:52 AM	#1
vivala_dare Distinguished Member Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: earth lol Posts: 551 Blog Entries: 12	Day under Freddie I jogged the last mile on the treadmill I hopped of my mate Freddie past me a bottle of water. I and Freddie had been going to the gym every Friday for a while now it was good fun. We went into the locker rooms we sat on the bench against the wall. Freddie opened are lockers and chucked me my bag. We talked about the day events. I and Freddie are 17 and he has short black hair quite tall and muscle all over. I am slightly taller with blond brownish hair and have muscle on legs and arms but a flat stomach. We walked over to the showers me and Freddie usually wore trunks when we shower but today Freddie got naked and started to shower I walked over and he told me to shower naked to. You’re allowed to shower naked you know said Freddie. We had seen each other naked a few times and mutual masturbated on occasions. So I stripped down and started to shower. It was a big open shower; a guy walked in had a quick shower and walked out. I looked at Freddie his penis was longer than mine by a good inch he never teased me he just said that’s the way it is get over it. He had shaven all over and his package looked magnificent. I have a trimmed bush and shaven balls mine looked the way I liked it. Fancy a bet? Said Freddie. Yes what kind of bet I said. We both do push ups which one of us ever drops first has to do whatever the other one says for a day said Freddie. Sounds great I said. We both got down and started doing push ups after 27 I dropped on my cock. Freddie did to 50 then said next Friday we would meet at the gym at dinner and I would be his slave for the day. Friday came round all too quick. We met at gym I we had made arrangements. The locker room was empty. Freddie walked up we had a quick chat we agreed if I did everything what he said then I would get an award later. But I had to do everything he said. I had to get naked I stood there with an erection. I was told to go shower Freddie watched me. The locker room has Lockers and cubicles all over and the big open shower. We walked over to one of the cubicles in the middle of them all. It was near the far wall away from the showers and door way entering the gym. I was still naked two people saw me but dint rely notice as most people walked around naked. The gym was busy but not packed. He opened the door of the cubical they are quite small with a seat in. He entered and sat down he placed his bag next to him. I entered and shut the door. The cubical has a roof on and the door was low so you can’t see under and the other 3 walls touch the floor as they attach to the cubicles next to it. So it’s like a tight box can’t see in cant see out. Freddie told me to kneel down. Freddie stood up stripped and sat back down. Your first job is to suck my dick he said. As I was kneeling down my head was close to his crotch I was nervous. He lent back stretched his legs so there was more access to his penis. I had a hard on I grabbed his floppy penis he closed his eyes. I tugged on it I went up and down his erect shaft. I closed my eyes I had lost the bet and this experience could be fun. I fort of all the porno’s I watched of girls sucking guys of. So I set to work. I placed my lips on his dick and went down and up I spat on his cock and licked his balls. I went up and down faster and faster I played with his balls. I went all the way down and felt his dick touch the back of my throat. I sucked and licked his penis I was enjoying this. I could feel his cock throbbing. I licked his bell end steaming hot cum shot in my mouth I sucked him dry I licked him all over his package. I looked down streaming hot cum fired out of my own penis wow it was mind blowing. Freddie smiled and winked. There would be more to CUM Hope you enjoyed after feedback I will write more if any suggestions feel free to post. More soon Viva

03-28-2009, 11:26 AM	#2
Daredevil999 Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: UK Posts: 110	MY GRAMMER SENSES ARE TINGGLING It's a really good story but.. you need speech marks; 'yes' said bob our, not are thought not fort it sounds like i'm moaning now.. seriously, i do really think that it's a great stroy and i like it but better grammer would make it easier to read but please carry on