Tradeable Goods

Collared_Slave · 03-15-2009, 10:12 AM

Chapter 1: you can buy anything, if you have the money.

He laid on his bed, staring up at the ceiling. His hand went to the collar around his neck, it had been strange and alien to him at first, but after six months he had come to love it as part of himself.
The six months had been difficult, with intense training, a range of light to severe punishment and lots of degradation and humiliation. His humiliation has started with his identity being changed to a number: 187549. He had thought of trying to escape many times, but had never plucked up the courage to try it. It would not matter if he escaped, he would most likely be caught, returned here and punished.
A voice came over the tannoy. "All slaves at attention! Potential buyers approaching."
He got off the bed and stood in the middle of the room as he had been trained to do. A door in the corridor outside opened. Two men and a girl walked in.
"And what sort of slave are you looking for Sir Ovakian?" said one of the men to the other.
"As it is a present for my daughter Laura, you should ask her, I am only here to pay the money." said Sir Ovakian.
The man turned to the girl, Laura, "What sort of slave are you looking for Miss Ovakian?"
She thought for a moment then decisively said "I would like a male, about my age, so roughly sixteen to seventeen and white with brown hair."
The man input these details into a hand-held device he was carrying. "We have at least twenty that match your description. The first one is here Miss Ovakian. Number 146872." he said gesturing towards a cell.
Laura looked in through the window in the door and shook her head. "Next."
The man checked the device and gestured to another cell. "187594."
Laura looked in and saw the slave she was after. "This one looks good, what are his stats?"
The man checked his device and read out. "Slave 187594. Six foot in height, six to seven inch penis, medium pain tolerance, very obedient but some minor persuasion occasionally needed."
"I'll take him."
"Very good, Miss. What wrapping would you like him in?"
"Just give me the standard wrapping."
"How much is he?" asked Sir Ovakian, taking out his wallet.
"Very reasonable actually, 3000 credits." The man said, preparing the transaction.
Sir Ovakian handed over his Credit Card.
Meanwhile Laura has been watching her slave. A black pair of briefs and tight jeans had arrived through the delivery system. She had watched while her slave stripped naked and put on the clothes.
A voice behind her brought her back to what was going on.
"Here is the leash Miss." he said, opening the cell's door.
Laura took the leash and walked into the cell.
"Slave, you are now called Cas, understand?"
Cas, knelt with his head bowed. "Yes Mistress."
"Good." she said, attaching the leash to his collar.
"Ready?" asked Laura's father.
"Yes." came Laura's response as she led Cas out of the cell.
"A pleasure doing business with you sir." said the man as he showed them out.

Nick · 03-15-2009, 10:19 AM

This is different in a very good way.
Kinda has a sci-fi feel to it, anyone else get that?
Keep going, I can't wait to see how it turns out

Collared_Slave · 03-15-2009, 10:22 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Nick

Kinda has a sci-fi feel to it, anyone else get that?

The few people on msn I gave the link to said that.

Collared_Slave · 03-15-2009, 12:42 PM

Chapter 2: Some fragile goods get damaged in transportation.

Cas followed behind Laura, trying to take in what had happened, it had all occurred too fast. He looked at Laura, she was only about five foot eight, with long black hair and with some nice breasts and a really nice ass.He was brought back to reality by Laura tugging sharply on the leash.
"I know its nice and if you are good, you may get some." came her teasing voice.
Cas decided to have a look around instead. He saw an advert advertising extra slave training in cooking and other essential skills. Another advert was for something which scared cas greatly, a razor edged whip."One look is enough to get any slave to obey." the advert read. Cas knew that he wasn't going to argue with anyone brandishing that. He was concentrating more on the advert than where he was going and tripped over his own feet. Landing at Laura's feet he looked up to see her with a whip. She had picked it up from the market stall behind her.
"May I try this out?" she asked the stall owner.
"Certainly." He smiled "It will show the quality of them."
Laura turned to Cas. "Pull down your clothes exposing your ass and get into position" she ordered.
Cas quickly pulled down his trousers and briefs and rearranged himself on the floor. The pavement was quite cold and he shivered slightly. Then WHACK! the whip struck him, again and again it struck, he tried to count how many stokes but all he could think about was the pain. Eventually she stopped, his ass glowing red. Laura looked satisfied and turned to the stall owner.
"I'll take this one. How much is it?"
"50 Credits normally Miss" he replied."but you can have it for free for the excellent display you put on."
Cas was still lying on the floor while people crowded round, looking at his ass and then purchasing a whip of their own. Laura happy with her purchase, tugged on the leash. Cas got up, carefully pulling up his briefs and trousers. He made sure that he knew where he was going for the rest of the walk home.

BettyBoop · 03-15-2009, 01:12 PM

This is good. I like the fact it's in a whole new world if you see what I mean. A S/M world. The billboards etc. You should continue I always like a story that is different.

CollaredBlondie · 03-15-2009, 01:37 PM

Totally agree with Betty Boop, this is really unique and I want more!

Smile · 03-15-2009, 03:38 PM

This is a great story, and I am looking forward to more

One thing:

Quote:

Originally Posted by Collared_Slave

187549
187594
187594

Spot the difference

Collared_Slave · 03-15-2009, 04:03 PM

Damn my dyslexia!

Coyote · 03-15-2009, 06:50 PM

after talking to you in chat i decided to read it and im glad i did. nice work.

monkeysrock · 03-19-2009, 11:51 AM

When will the next installment come ??

I can't wait anymore!!!!!!

03-15-2009, 10:12 AM	#1
Collared_Slave Distinguished Member Join Date: Apr 2007 Posts: 736 Blog Entries: 6	Tradeable Goods Chapter 1: you can buy anything, if you have the money. He laid on his bed, staring up at the ceiling. His hand went to the collar around his neck, it had been strange and alien to him at first, but after six months he had come to love it as part of himself. The six months had been difficult, with intense training, a range of light to severe punishment and lots of degradation and humiliation. His humiliation has started with his identity being changed to a number: 187549. He had thought of trying to escape many times, but had never plucked up the courage to try it. It would not matter if he escaped, he would most likely be caught, returned here and punished. A voice came over the tannoy. "All slaves at attention! Potential buyers approaching." He got off the bed and stood in the middle of the room as he had been trained to do. A door in the corridor outside opened. Two men and a girl walked in. "And what sort of slave are you looking for Sir Ovakian?" said one of the men to the other. "As it is a present for my daughter Laura, you should ask her, I am only here to pay the money." said Sir Ovakian. The man turned to the girl, Laura, "What sort of slave are you looking for Miss Ovakian?" She thought for a moment then decisively said "I would like a male, about my age, so roughly sixteen to seventeen and white with brown hair." The man input these details into a hand-held device he was carrying. "We have at least twenty that match your description. The first one is here Miss Ovakian. Number 146872." he said gesturing towards a cell. Laura looked in through the window in the door and shook her head. "Next." The man checked the device and gestured to another cell. "187594." Laura looked in and saw the slave she was after. "This one looks good, what are his stats?" The man checked his device and read out. "Slave 187594. Six foot in height, six to seven inch penis, medium pain tolerance, very obedient but some minor persuasion occasionally needed." "I'll take him." "Very good, Miss. What wrapping would you like him in?" "Just give me the standard wrapping." "How much is he?" asked Sir Ovakian, taking out his wallet. "Very reasonable actually, 3000 credits." The man said, preparing the transaction. Sir Ovakian handed over his Credit Card. Meanwhile Laura has been watching her slave. A black pair of briefs and tight jeans had arrived through the delivery system. She had watched while her slave stripped naked and put on the clothes. A voice behind her brought her back to what was going on. "Here is the leash Miss." he said, opening the cell's door. Laura took the leash and walked into the cell. "Slave, you are now called Cas, understand?" Cas, knelt with his head bowed. "Yes Mistress." "Good." she said, attaching the leash to his collar. "Ready?" asked Laura's father. "Yes." came Laura's response as she led Cas out of the cell. "A pleasure doing business with you sir." said the man as he showed them out. Last edited by Collared_Slave; 03-15-2009 at 02:55 PM. Reason: spelling

03-15-2009, 10:19 AM	#2
Nick Distinguished Member Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: Ohio Posts: 835	This is different in a very good way. Kinda has a sci-fi feel to it, anyone else get that? Keep going, I can't wait to see how it turns out __________________ 32/ Male/ US/ Switch Likes: Underwear, Jockstrap, Embarrassing, Webcam or Pics, Naked, Semi-public, slight risk, strip games, dice dares, wedgies, clothing/cum control, anal, light humiliation Dislikes: Piss, Body Writing, messy Limits:Really public, family, friends, scat, gross, pain. *Impossible:* Crossdressing. I own NO girls clothes. kik: nick.undies Skype: nick.undies SnapChat: SnapNickR

03-15-2009, 12:42 PM	#4
Collared_Slave Distinguished Member Join Date: Apr 2007 Posts: 736 Blog Entries: 6	Chapter 2: Some fragile goods get damaged in transportation. Cas followed behind Laura, trying to take in what had happened, it had all occurred too fast. He looked at Laura, she was only about five foot eight, with long black hair and with some nice breasts and a really nice ass.He was brought back to reality by Laura tugging sharply on the leash. "I know its nice and if you are good, you may get some." came her teasing voice. Cas decided to have a look around instead. He saw an advert advertising extra slave training in cooking and other essential skills. Another advert was for something which scared cas greatly, a razor edged whip."One look is enough to get any slave to obey." the advert read. Cas knew that he wasn't going to argue with anyone brandishing that. He was concentrating more on the advert than where he was going and tripped over his own feet. Landing at Laura's feet he looked up to see her with a whip. She had picked it up from the market stall behind her. "May I try this out?" she asked the stall owner. "Certainly." He smiled "It will show the quality of them." Laura turned to Cas. "Pull down your clothes exposing your ass and get into position" she ordered. Cas quickly pulled down his trousers and briefs and rearranged himself on the floor. The pavement was quite cold and he shivered slightly. Then WHACK! the whip struck him, again and again it struck, he tried to count how many stokes but all he could think about was the pain. Eventually she stopped, his ass glowing red. Laura looked satisfied and turned to the stall owner. "I'll take this one. How much is it?" "50 Credits normally Miss" he replied."but you can have it for free for the excellent display you put on." Cas was still lying on the floor while people crowded round, looking at his ass and then purchasing a whip of their own. Laura happy with her purchase, tugged on the leash. Cas got up, carefully pulling up his briefs and trousers. He made sure that he knew where he was going for the rest of the walk home. Last edited by Collared_Slave; 03-15-2009 at 03:00 PM. Reason: spelling

03-15-2009, 01:12 PM	#5
BettyBoop Angel of Dare Join Date: Apr 2008 Location: England. Posts: 8,249 Blog Entries: 105	This is good. I like the fact it's in a whole new world if you see what I mean. A S/M world. The billboards etc. You should continue I always like a story that is different. __________________ ★Boop Boop de Boop.★ female, engurrland. Ask me anything, click. My tumblr. 18+ ▼

03-19-2009, 11:51 AM	#10
monkeysrock getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: London, UK Posts: 276	When will the next installment come ?? I can't wait anymore!!!!!! __________________ Now there's a guy who really knows where his towel is! http://www.humansexmap.com/showmap.p...f6ea2.75805559

03-15-2009, 04:03 PM	#8
Collared_Slave Distinguished Member Join Date: Apr 2007 Posts: 736 Blog Entries: 6	Damn my dyslexia!

03-15-2009, 06:50 PM	#9
Coyote getDare Addict Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: USA Posts: 2,110 Blog Entries: 14	after talking to you in chat i decided to read it and im glad i did. nice work.