Alex's Luck Changes [FICTION]

amy.32 · 07-27-2008, 10:55 AM

This is my first story so you can give me ideas if you want. It is just the intro, so abit short

OK, Background
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Alex was ok. He wasn't very popular at school, not because he looked or acted strange, but because of a rumor. A rumor that hap been spread by
the "best" group of girls in his school, the "hot" ones. He had no idea how this had started, because none of them had anything against him.
So life was hard. But all set to change.

The start
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One day, he noticed the girls where standing in a circle around James, one of the "rude boys". Normal, Alex thought. Suddenly one of the girls
reached out and slapped James full on across the face. He went red and started crying. Alex just walked on to his next lesson. Everyone seemed
to be leaving him alone today.

The next day was Saturday. He was having his breakfast and the doorbell rung. It was Alice, one of the girls who had been spreading rumors.
"What do you want?” Alex spat.” Calm down," she said "I can explain". "Ok" said Alex Suspiciously. "Well..."
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Shall I carry on? I know it’s a bit short but its the intro.

Amy

07-27-2008, 10:55 AM	#1
amy.32 Junior Member Join Date: Jul 2008 Posts: 26 Blog Entries: 1	Alex's Luck Changes [FICTION] This is my first story so you can give me ideas if you want. It is just the intro, so abit short OK, Background ++++++++++++++ Alex was ok. He wasn't very popular at school, not because he looked or acted strange, but because of a rumor. A rumor that hap been spread by the "best" group of girls in his school, the "hot" ones. He had no idea how this had started, because none of them had anything against him. So life was hard. But all set to change. The start +++++++++ One day, he noticed the girls where standing in a circle around James, one of the "rude boys". Normal, Alex thought. Suddenly one of the girls reached out and slapped James full on across the face. He went red and started crying. Alex just walked on to his next lesson. Everyone seemed to be leaving him alone today. The next day was Saturday. He was having his breakfast and the doorbell rung. It was Alice, one of the girls who had been spreading rumors. "What do you want?” Alex spat.” Calm down," she said "I can explain". "Ok" said Alex Suspiciously. "Well..." _________________ Shall I carry on? I know it’s a bit short but its the intro. Amy