10-07-2009, 04:32 AM | #1 |
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my sister knows
Hey this is my forst story so any feedback would be appreciated
Dan----16 year old, loves football but most of all likes crossdressing lucy----15 year old, loves horse riding Dan's sister It was a tuesday afternoon, Dan had got home from college watchd some television and eaten his family out of house and home! He got bored by the time he had listed to al his favourite songs, so he did what he always did when he got bored...went into his mums room. He pulled out a thong, tights, skirt, and bra. He took his time putting it all on taking in the pleasure it bought to his body. Half an hour later he was dressed and admired himself in mirror...he was a proper lady. Suddenly he heard a key turn in the door. He dashed up the stairs....but it was too late. He heard Lucy, his sister laughing her head off at him. "Hello Dan...or should i say Dani" "Hello sis ", he replied. "nice outfit, I'm sure mum would like to see ou like that..." 'Snap!' the sound of the shutter on the camera lens. "No please Lucy" "You know i will Dani do't you" "Yes Lucy" "Right you have two options... one i can show this to mummy when she gets home or option two...you can be my little 13 year old daughter ", she said this with an evil smile. "Well i don't want mum to see so i suppose i'll be your daughter " he said reluctantly. "Good girl, righ then we can't have you looking like a slut at your age can we go put some of my pink panties on" "Yes Lucy" "Pardon?", retorted Lucy. "I mean yes mummy" To be continued... |
10-07-2009, 06:06 AM | #2 |
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awesome start keep going
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10-07-2009, 06:36 AM | #3 |
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cool i love it keep going its cool i cant wait to see what happens next my dad saw what i was looking at and laughed and said it was good
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10-08-2009, 02:07 PM | #4 |
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This sounds familiar to "brother's torture" and so far you have you Misspelled "don't" and "right" didn't capitalize "I" plus the icons in my opinion are annoying and make it hard to read. Other than that it's ok
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10-08-2009, 04:05 PM | #5 |
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Hmm a 16 year old in college? Just fixing an error .
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10-08-2009, 04:08 PM | #6 |
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10-08-2009, 05:18 PM | #7 |
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10-09-2009, 12:41 AM | #8 |
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what error? You can go to college any time after the age of 16
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