3 Boys and a game if tord, the sequel!!!!!

angusnbrian1 · 02-16-2010, 11:16 AM

Hi guys I'm currently thinking about different ideas for the sequel to my first story I want to make it alot better than the story so does anybody have any ideas? So far I think I am going to set it 6 months later and it will writtern in the 3rd person. Ryan and Craig play tord often and are in a secret sexual relationship ( the end of the first story hinted towards this happening) and Ryan and Craig both have gfs now and the four of them have a game of tord. That's basically where I'd like it to go. Please reply with suggestions.
Thanks

angusnbrian1 · 02-16-2010, 11:21 AM

Sorry about the type o in the title it's meant to say of tord not if tord and I don't know how to change it. If any moderators can change it that would be really helpful. Thanks

angusnbrian1 · 02-16-2010, 03:46 PM

Hi guys here's chapter 1 again sorry about the type o in the thread title not sure how to change it ( if any one knows how to change it please let me know). So here's part one please read the intro.
Chapter 1:
Introduction- This Is the sequel to 3 boys and a game of tord. It is set 6 months later and the main characters are still Rysn and Craig. They now often play dares together and are in a secret sexual relationship. They both now have girl friends (who you will meet) and have been keeping their games of tord a secret from them.

Ryan ejaculated. Him and Craig had just been watching a porno together and had been jacking it other off. They had been doing this quite often since that game of truth or dare 6 months ago. Craig ejaculated too "I don't think we should be doing this any more Ryan, what if someone finds out?"
"You always say that but we still do it no one will find out, anyway it's just a bit of fun." said Ryan whilst redressing. He was going out with his girlfriend Jess later that day and was going to head home to get ready. Jess was a athletic girl with blonde hair and blues eyes. Ryan still couldn't believe he had got with a girl so hot. "Me and Jess are going to the cinema, we are gonna sit on the back row if you know what I mean Craig" Ryan said with a smile as headed out the door. Craig led Ryan to the door and they arranged to meet again soon. Craig loved it when Ryan came round, sometimes they would play dares, maybe have a wank but sometimes they would do it. That happened rarely but when it did Craig was normally on top. His girlfriend was coming round later and he hoped to get lucky as his parents were away. His girlfriend was called Emma she had long brown hair and hazel eyes. Craig loved her ass and they often played tord together but nothing sexual ever happened like when he played with Ryan. She was coming round in an hour. Just enough time to get changed and have a game of halo he thought.

Thanks for reading please comment!

angusnbrian1 · 02-16-2010, 05:14 PM

Hey here's part 2:
chapter 2:
Emma turned up just as Craig finished his match halo. They watched tv for a while until they both got bored "let's play truth or dare Emma"
"Ok but only if we play extreme dares, like getting naked n stuff!" Craig had always wanted to play these kinds of dares with emma but he didn't know if she would be in to it. Normally they dares like tobasco sauce on your younger and stuff, Craig found those kinds of dares pretty boring. Craig went first and dared Emma to strip for him. She stood up and slowly started removing her t shirt. She then took off her bra to reveal her breasts. Craig's hand was down his trousers at this point, he never missed the chance to have a wank.Emma continued to strip until she was completely naked. "my turn, I dare you to strip as well!". So Craig stood up and removed his t shirt to reveal his well tonned body. He then took of his trousers to reveal his White boxer briefs. Emma could clearly see his boner but just smiled she relised her strip must have really turned her on. Once naked Craig sat down again. Emma stroked his dick, he got harder still. Next Craig dared Emma to lick his ball sack and she did so quite willingly. But she didn't stop there she started sucking his dick. Craig felt her hot ass and smiled. This was awesome he thought.

Mr Very Daring · 02-17-2010, 09:38 AM

good start but a few major errors

Quote:

Originally Posted by angusnbrian1

on your younger and stuff
k.Emma (should be a space here)
d. "my (should be a new line here)
her strip must have really turned her on. should be him on

angusnbrian1 · 02-17-2010, 09:57 AM

Thanks for the comment I'll try not to it again lol!

02-16-2010, 11:16 AM	#1
angusnbrian1 Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: England Posts: 22	3 Boys and a game if tord, the sequel!!!!! Hi guys I'm currently thinking about different ideas for the sequel to my first story I want to make it alot better than the story so does anybody have any ideas? So far I think I am going to set it 6 months later and it will writtern in the 3rd person. Ryan and Craig play tord often and are in a secret sexual relationship ( the end of the first story hinted towards this happening) and Ryan and Craig both have gfs now and the four of them have a game of tord. That's basically where I'd like it to go. Please reply with suggestions. Thanks __________________ It's just a waffer thin mint! Pythonists add me!

02-16-2010, 11:21 AM	#2
angusnbrian1 Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: England Posts: 22	Sorry! Sorry about the type o in the title it's meant to say of tord not if tord and I don't know how to change it. If any moderators can change it that would be really helpful. Thanks __________________ It's just a waffer thin mint! Pythonists add me!

02-16-2010, 03:46 PM	#3
angusnbrian1 Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: England Posts: 22	Chapter 1: Hi guys here's chapter 1 again sorry about the type o in the thread title not sure how to change it ( if any one knows how to change it please let me know). So here's part one please read the intro. Chapter 1: Introduction- This Is the sequel to 3 boys and a game of tord. It is set 6 months later and the main characters are still Rysn and Craig. They now often play dares together and are in a secret sexual relationship. They both now have girl friends (who you will meet) and have been keeping their games of tord a secret from them. Ryan ejaculated. Him and Craig had just been watching a porno together and had been jacking it other off. They had been doing this quite often since that game of truth or dare 6 months ago. Craig ejaculated too "I don't think we should be doing this any more Ryan, what if someone finds out?" "You always say that but we still do it no one will find out, anyway it's just a bit of fun." said Ryan whilst redressing. He was going out with his girlfriend Jess later that day and was going to head home to get ready. Jess was a athletic girl with blonde hair and blues eyes. Ryan still couldn't believe he had got with a girl so hot. "Me and Jess are going to the cinema, we are gonna sit on the back row if you know what I mean Craig" Ryan said with a smile as headed out the door. Craig led Ryan to the door and they arranged to meet again soon. Craig loved it when Ryan came round, sometimes they would play dares, maybe have a wank but sometimes they would do it. That happened rarely but when it did Craig was normally on top. His girlfriend was coming round later and he hoped to get lucky as his parents were away. His girlfriend was called Emma she had long brown hair and hazel eyes. Craig loved her ass and they often played tord together but nothing sexual ever happened like when he played with Ryan. She was coming round in an hour. Just enough time to get changed and have a game of halo he thought. Thanks for reading please comment! __________________ It's just a waffer thin mint! Pythonists add me!

02-16-2010, 05:14 PM	#4
angusnbrian1 Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: England Posts: 22	Chapter 2: Hey here's part 2: chapter 2: Emma turned up just as Craig finished his match halo. They watched tv for a while until they both got bored "let's play truth or dare Emma" "Ok but only if we play extreme dares, like getting naked n stuff!" Craig had always wanted to play these kinds of dares with emma but he didn't know if she would be in to it. Normally they dares like tobasco sauce on your younger and stuff, Craig found those kinds of dares pretty boring. Craig went first and dared Emma to strip for him. She stood up and slowly started removing her t shirt. She then took off her bra to reveal her breasts. Craig's hand was down his trousers at this point, he never missed the chance to have a wank.Emma continued to strip until she was completely naked. "my turn, I dare you to strip as well!". So Craig stood up and removed his t shirt to reveal his well tonned body. He then took of his trousers to reveal his White boxer briefs. Emma could clearly see his boner but just smiled she relised her strip must have really turned her on. Once naked Craig sat down again. Emma stroked his dick, he got harder still. Next Craig dared Emma to lick his ball sack and she did so quite willingly. But she didn't stop there she started sucking his dick. Craig felt her hot ass and smiled. This was awesome he thought. __________________ It's just a waffer thin mint! Pythonists add me!

02-17-2010, 09:57 AM	#6
angusnbrian1 Junior Member Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: England Posts: 22	Thanks Thanks for the comment I'll try not to it again lol! __________________ It's just a waffer thin mint! Pythonists add me!