Fiction: High Elevation Fun

abbymae · 08-11-2009, 11:18 PM

This is my first story. Not much action now, but I will continue soon.

Kevin was going to be a freshman and the only freshman on his school's boy's varsity cross country team. In fact, he was the only underclassman on the team. Kevin was asian, rather tall for an asian, and had beautifully tanned skin from running outside all the time. His parents had high expectations of him both in cross country and academics. He was a good kid, a bit shy, but well liked by his peers.

Anyways, it was August and Kevin and the rest of the cross country team were spending a week in the mountains. The high elevation is perfect for training, so the boy's team goes to the mountains every other summer.

Kevin was a little nervous about the trip because he really didn't have any friends on the team. All the other guys were juniors and seniors. A week before the trip, the boys had room sign ups with 4 boys to a room. Kevin didn't know anyone on the team, so the coach placed him in a room with three junior boys.

It was a monday that they left for the trip by bus. It was a long drive, made longer because the bus broke down. It was late afternoon when they arrived at the hotel type lodge they would be staying at. The boys checked in, unpacked, explored the hotel, got something to eat in the hotel's restaurant. Later that evening most of team decided to go swimming in the hotel's pool. Kevin joined in.

Everything started off fine. They were all having a great time splashing each other, and then one of the boys suggest they play Marco Polo.

"Who's going to be it?" someone asks.

"How about the freshman?" someone else jeers. All the boy's laugh. "The freshman" had become Kevin's nickname this summer, much to Kevin's dissatisfaction.

Kevin complies and the game goes underway. He closes his eyes and swims around shouting, "Marco," and he gets kind of tired after a few minutes, and he still hasn't caught anyone. When he stops to catch his breath, the other boys splash him and laugh. He continues chasing them, but they keep getting away. He stops again, threading water, when all of a sudden, Kevin feels a yank below, as someone removes his swim trunks. Kevin's eyes shoot open, he screams at the senior who pantsed him, but the senior just throws the trunks to another boy at the other end of the pool. The boys jokingly throw Kevin's trunks around despite Kevin's pleas.

Finally had enough with this torture, Kevin gets out of the pool. Ignoring the boy's mocking at his cock's size, he wraps his towel around his waist, puts on his sandals, grabs his cellphone and room key, and heads indoors.

Thankfully, it was late, so not many people were in the hotel lobby area when Kevin was inside. His room was on the second floor. He stepped inside the elevator, and just as it started to close, he heard a beautiful female voice, "hold the door!"

Normally Kevin would have complied for a woman, but considering the fact that he was only wearing a towel, he wanted to get to his room as soon as possible, so he pretended he didn't hear. Just before the door was about to close, however, a well-manicured hand slides in front of the closing doors to open them. Four teenage girls slide inside the small elevator, one of them asking kind of annoyed, "Are you deaf? I said hold the door!"

glue · 08-12-2009, 06:54 AM

this is good for a first story

7/10

abbymae · 08-12-2009, 10:55 AM

Okay time to continue. Still no real action yet.

The girls introduced themselves. They were all seniors at another high school, and they were also spending some time in the mountains for cross country training. Actually it was their last night, and they were going back home tomorrow. They had just come back from going out for a pizza dinner and bowling with the rest of their team.

Katie was the one who had put her hand in the door. She was a typical beauty. She was tall and slender, blonde, had flawless skin, bright blue eyes, and she was rather developed for just a teenager.

Emily stood next to her. She was the shortest of them all and a little bit stocky for a runner. She was asian, had cute, beady brown eyes, and had her silky black hair in a high, messy ponytail.

Danielle stood next to Emily. She had very fair skin, which looked even lighter compared to her hair, which was dyed dark brown and had crimson highlights. She was the most curvy of the girls, with full breasts and a nice ass.

Madison was the tallest of the girls. She was black and had boy-cut hair which suited her perfect bone structure. She had a huge smile with pearly white teeth.

Kevin was normally shy around girls, but considering that he was only wearing a towel, he was even quieter. He meekly introduced himself. When the elevator halted on the second floor, Katie asked Kevin if he wanted to come over to their room to watch some tv with them. Normally any boy would have jumped at the opportunity, but Kevin, more than anything just wanted to get to his room and put on some clothes.

"Thanks, but ummmm I uhhh have to wake up early tomorrow, and uhh so I should get to sleep now" Kevin said.

"Oh you pooper" Madison laughed.

They were making their way down the hall, and when they arrived at Kevin's room he said, "Here's my room....ummm it was nice meeting you all."

"Oh your room's right across from ours!" Emily said, as she turned the key to enter their room.

"So if you change your mind..." Danielle said with a smile and a wink.

They said their goodbyes, and the girls headed into their room to the right, and Kevin entered his room to the left. Kevin headed first into the shower. As stood there under the warm water, he wondered if the girls had noticed he wasn't wearing anything under his towel. He hoped they hadn't. He got out of the shower, dried off, and put on boxers and a white undershirt. He checked his cell, and had a message from one of his roommates. It said, "hey man, the teams really sry for stealing your trunks. but some hot girls are here now at the pool from some other school so u should come back!!!"

Kevin was still pretty pissed at the other boys. He shut off his phone, turned on the tv, and lied down on one of the two queen-sized beds. He turned on the disney channel. It was his guilty pleasure, but he would never admit it to his friends. Just as he was getting comfortable, there was a knock at the door. Kevin groaned. One of his roommates probably had forgotten his key. He got up and opened the door.

To his surprise it was actually Madison standing in the hallway in front of him. Standing there in just his boxers and a shirt, Kevin blushed crimson. Madison was wearing pink flannel pj bottoms and a black tank top.

"Hey ummm," she said shyly, "do you have any toilet paper? It's an emergency."

"Oh yeah," Kevin said disappearing into the bathroom, and returning just as fast with a fresh roll.

"Thanks!" Madison said flashing Kevin a big grin, "okay, well goodnight!"

"Yeah goodni.."

"Wait! You watch the disney channel?!" Madison interrupted.

"Ummm uhhh just flipping channels." Kevin answered shyly.

Madison laughed, "Mmmhmm sure. Well goodnight!"

Madison returned to her room. And Kevin returned to lying down on his bed. Just as he was getting comfortable again, there was another knock on the door. This time he turned off the tv before answering it.

It was Madison again. She smiled and said, "I really never needed this." She handed the toilet paper roll back to Kevin. "You see, we were playing truth or dare, and Danielle dared me to come over and ask you for it."

"Oh," Kevin laughed taking the roll back.

"You know we'd love for you to come play with us" Madison said sweetly.

"Oh, I don't know" said Kevin.

"Oh you pooper!" Madison laughed grabbing his arm playfully and pulling him into the hallway.

"Wait! Let me just change." said Kevin returning into his room. He slipped on a pair of jeans and followed Madison to her room.

Kevin entered and found the other three girls sitting comfortably on the two beds. They were all wearing pjs. They looked up at Kevin and in unison said in a sing-song voice, "Hi Kevin!"

callofduty4 · 08-12-2009, 11:51 AM

kool story keep it up

theone · 08-12-2009, 12:03 PM

It looks like it’s going to be a good story. I look forward to reading more. Don’t worry about the lack of action yet, that just builds the story up for when it doe's come. You are doing great.

abbymae · 08-12-2009, 01:59 PM

Danielle and Emily were sitting on the farther bed. Katie was leaning her body against the headboard of the closer bed. Madison sat down on the bed with Katie, and after she sat down, she patted the space next to her, gesturing for Kevin to come sit.

"I think I'll just sit over here," Kevin said, as he made himself comfortable in the armchair in the corner of the room.

"You pooper," exclaimed Madison, and the other girls laughed.

"Come on Madison," said Katie, "it's your turn to choose someone."

Madison looked over at Kevin and smiled. "Truth or Dare?" she asked, emphasizing the last word.

Kevin, not wanting to seem like a loser, chose dare.

"Ooooo," the girls cooed, "he's brave."

Madison stroked her fingers as she pondered what dare to give Kevin. Then she smiled and said, "Kiss me."

Kevin blushed. He had only kissed one girl in his life. Well, actually, she kissed him, and it was only on the cheek. He got up, stumbled over to Madison. She closed her eyes, pursed up her lips, and the other girls giggled. Kevin leaned in, closed his eyes, and pressed his lips against hers. It felt good. Her lips were soft. He could feel his cock hardening, and he didn't want Madison to notice, so he pulled his face away, as he opened eyes.

Madison remained with her eyes closed a moment longer. Then she opened her eyes and smiled. "Thank-you," she said and smiled again.

Feeling a little bit more confident now, Kevin forgot about the chair and intead, sat down on the bed next to Madison. This night had turned out to be really great. He had just kissed a hot senior girl!!

"Come on! We don't have all night," said Danielle, "It's your turn Kevin."

Kevin looked around. Who should he choose? Emily smiled at him. He hadn't noticed her dimples before, but now he did, and they reminded him of a girl he had a crush on in middle school.

"Emily," said Kevin.

"Yes, Kevin?" Emily said coyly.

"Oh, ummm truth or dare?" said Kevin.

"Truth," Emily responded.

"Wow," Kevin thought, "I could've chosen truth, and I wouldn't have seemed like a loser. But whatever, dare was worth it."

"Ummmmm," Kevin said, he wasn't quite sure what to ask her. Then he remembered playing truth or dare at an all boys summer camp last summer, and this one question was asked a lot.

"Are you a virgin?" asked Kevin.

Emily smiled. "Yes I am," she said. Kevin felt a little silly. I guess this question is only good when you ask a guy.

Emily wasted no time. "Katie," she said, "truth or dare?"

"Dare," Katie said bravely.

It was obvious Emily already had a dare in mind, because she wasted no time thinking. "I dare you to remove your bra and underwear," she said.

Katie was wearing a oversized Dodgers shirt that reached the top of her thighs and black sweat pants. She stood up and pulled her arms through her shirt, unclasped her bra, pulled her arms out of the straps, and in a swift motion, revealed her hot pink bra without flashing anyone. She threw the bra at Kevin. Without having time to react, it hit his face and landed on the floor. The girls laughed. Kevin blushed brightly, and then looked up at Katie. She was pulling her sweats down, and her black thong came down with them. Luckily for her, her oversized shirt was covering her. She reached down to pick up her thong, pulled her sweats back up, and threw the thong at Kevin. Kevin was expecting it this time, so he reached up and caught them. Feeling a little ambitious now, he lifted the panties to his face, took in a quick wiff, and then placed them on the bed beside him.

The girls cheered for Katie's wonderful performance, and she smiled and gave a little bow. Then she looked at Kevin, "Truth or dare?"

"Dare." said Kevin, more confidently then he had earlier.

Katie pondered for a moment. Kevin looked at her intensely, trying to avoid looking at the nipples that were bulging through Katie's shirt. Katie twirled her long blonde hair as she thought. Then she smiled an evil smile, that made Kevin suddenly wish he had chosen truth.

"My bra and panties which you like so much," Katie said, "I dare you to put them on, and model them for all of us."

"No," Kevin protested, "are you kidding me?"

"Oh, come on!" the girls hollered.

"You can change in the bathroom if you want," Katie suggested, "and it's just us. No one else will see you."

Sorry. Got to go. More later.

08-11-2009, 11:18 PM	#1
abbymae Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 11	High Elevation Fun This is my first story. Not much action now, but I will continue soon. Kevin was going to be a freshman and the only freshman on his school's boy's varsity cross country team. In fact, he was the only underclassman on the team. Kevin was asian, rather tall for an asian, and had beautifully tanned skin from running outside all the time. His parents had high expectations of him both in cross country and academics. He was a good kid, a bit shy, but well liked by his peers. Anyways, it was August and Kevin and the rest of the cross country team were spending a week in the mountains. The high elevation is perfect for training, so the boy's team goes to the mountains every other summer. Kevin was a little nervous about the trip because he really didn't have any friends on the team. All the other guys were juniors and seniors. A week before the trip, the boys had room sign ups with 4 boys to a room. Kevin didn't know anyone on the team, so the coach placed him in a room with three junior boys. It was a monday that they left for the trip by bus. It was a long drive, made longer because the bus broke down. It was late afternoon when they arrived at the hotel type lodge they would be staying at. The boys checked in, unpacked, explored the hotel, got something to eat in the hotel's restaurant. Later that evening most of team decided to go swimming in the hotel's pool. Kevin joined in. Everything started off fine. They were all having a great time splashing each other, and then one of the boys suggest they play Marco Polo. "Who's going to be it?" someone asks. "How about the freshman?" someone else jeers. All the boy's laugh. "The freshman" had become Kevin's nickname this summer, much to Kevin's dissatisfaction. Kevin complies and the game goes underway. He closes his eyes and swims around shouting, "Marco," and he gets kind of tired after a few minutes, and he still hasn't caught anyone. When he stops to catch his breath, the other boys splash him and laugh. He continues chasing them, but they keep getting away. He stops again, threading water, when all of a sudden, Kevin feels a yank below, as someone removes his swim trunks. Kevin's eyes shoot open, he screams at the senior who pantsed him, but the senior just throws the trunks to another boy at the other end of the pool. The boys jokingly throw Kevin's trunks around despite Kevin's pleas. Finally had enough with this torture, Kevin gets out of the pool. Ignoring the boy's mocking at his cock's size, he wraps his towel around his waist, puts on his sandals, grabs his cellphone and room key, and heads indoors. Thankfully, it was late, so not many people were in the hotel lobby area when Kevin was inside. His room was on the second floor. He stepped inside the elevator, and just as it started to close, he heard a beautiful female voice, "hold the door!" Normally Kevin would have complied for a woman, but considering the fact that he was only wearing a towel, he wanted to get to his room as soon as possible, so he pretended he didn't hear. Just before the door was about to close, however, a well-manicured hand slides in front of the closing doors to open them. Four teenage girls slide inside the small elevator, one of them asking kind of annoyed, "Are you deaf? I said hold the door!"

08-12-2009, 06:54 AM	#2
glue Distinguished Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Oxford, UK Posts: 735 Blog Entries: 6	this is good for a first story 7/10 __________________ WATCH OUT FOR A GLUE RATING OUT OF TEN glue would like to tell everyone reading this to stay sticky as life is to short to become unstuck I'm the Simon Cowell of GetDare Please add me at: Skype: Glue101 8 Years On Getdare!!!!!!

08-12-2009, 10:55 AM	#3
abbymae Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 11	Okay time to continue. Still no real action yet. The girls introduced themselves. They were all seniors at another high school, and they were also spending some time in the mountains for cross country training. Actually it was their last night, and they were going back home tomorrow. They had just come back from going out for a pizza dinner and bowling with the rest of their team. Katie was the one who had put her hand in the door. She was a typical beauty. She was tall and slender, blonde, had flawless skin, bright blue eyes, and she was rather developed for just a teenager. Emily stood next to her. She was the shortest of them all and a little bit stocky for a runner. She was asian, had cute, beady brown eyes, and had her silky black hair in a high, messy ponytail. Danielle stood next to Emily. She had very fair skin, which looked even lighter compared to her hair, which was dyed dark brown and had crimson highlights. She was the most curvy of the girls, with full breasts and a nice ass. Madison was the tallest of the girls. She was black and had boy-cut hair which suited her perfect bone structure. She had a huge smile with pearly white teeth. Kevin was normally shy around girls, but considering that he was only wearing a towel, he was even quieter. He meekly introduced himself. When the elevator halted on the second floor, Katie asked Kevin if he wanted to come over to their room to watch some tv with them. Normally any boy would have jumped at the opportunity, but Kevin, more than anything just wanted to get to his room and put on some clothes. "Thanks, but ummmm I uhhh have to wake up early tomorrow, and uhh so I should get to sleep now" Kevin said. "Oh you pooper" Madison laughed. They were making their way down the hall, and when they arrived at Kevin's room he said, "Here's my room....ummm it was nice meeting you all." "Oh your room's right across from ours!" Emily said, as she turned the key to enter their room. "So if you change your mind..." Danielle said with a smile and a wink. They said their goodbyes, and the girls headed into their room to the right, and Kevin entered his room to the left. Kevin headed first into the shower. As stood there under the warm water, he wondered if the girls had noticed he wasn't wearing anything under his towel. He hoped they hadn't. He got out of the shower, dried off, and put on boxers and a white undershirt. He checked his cell, and had a message from one of his roommates. It said, "hey man, the teams really sry for stealing your trunks. but some hot girls are here now at the pool from some other school so u should come back!!!" Kevin was still pretty pissed at the other boys. He shut off his phone, turned on the tv, and lied down on one of the two queen-sized beds. He turned on the disney channel. It was his guilty pleasure, but he would never admit it to his friends. Just as he was getting comfortable, there was a knock at the door. Kevin groaned. One of his roommates probably had forgotten his key. He got up and opened the door. To his surprise it was actually Madison standing in the hallway in front of him. Standing there in just his boxers and a shirt, Kevin blushed crimson. Madison was wearing pink flannel pj bottoms and a black tank top. "Hey ummm," she said shyly, "do you have any toilet paper? It's an emergency." "Oh yeah," Kevin said disappearing into the bathroom, and returning just as fast with a fresh roll. "Thanks!" Madison said flashing Kevin a big grin, "okay, well goodnight!" "Yeah goodni.." "Wait! You watch the disney channel?!" Madison interrupted. "Ummm uhhh just flipping channels." Kevin answered shyly. Madison laughed, "Mmmhmm sure. Well goodnight!" Madison returned to her room. And Kevin returned to lying down on his bed. Just as he was getting comfortable again, there was another knock on the door. This time he turned off the tv before answering it. It was Madison again. She smiled and said, "I really never needed this." She handed the toilet paper roll back to Kevin. "You see, we were playing truth or dare, and Danielle dared me to come over and ask you for it." "Oh," Kevin laughed taking the roll back. "You know we'd love for you to come play with us" Madison said sweetly. "Oh, I don't know" said Kevin. "Oh you pooper!" Madison laughed grabbing his arm playfully and pulling him into the hallway. "Wait! Let me just change." said Kevin returning into his room. He slipped on a pair of jeans and followed Madison to her room. Kevin entered and found the other three girls sitting comfortably on the two beds. They were all wearing pjs. They looked up at Kevin and in unison said in a sing-song voice, "Hi Kevin!"

08-12-2009, 01:59 PM	#6
abbymae Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 11	Danielle and Emily were sitting on the farther bed. Katie was leaning her body against the headboard of the closer bed. Madison sat down on the bed with Katie, and after she sat down, she patted the space next to her, gesturing for Kevin to come sit. "I think I'll just sit over here," Kevin said, as he made himself comfortable in the armchair in the corner of the room. "You pooper," exclaimed Madison, and the other girls laughed. "Come on Madison," said Katie, "it's your turn to choose someone." Madison looked over at Kevin and smiled. "Truth or Dare?" she asked, emphasizing the last word. Kevin, not wanting to seem like a loser, chose dare. "Ooooo," the girls cooed, "he's brave." Madison stroked her fingers as she pondered what dare to give Kevin. Then she smiled and said, "Kiss me." Kevin blushed. He had only kissed one girl in his life. Well, actually, she kissed him, and it was only on the cheek. He got up, stumbled over to Madison. She closed her eyes, pursed up her lips, and the other girls giggled. Kevin leaned in, closed his eyes, and pressed his lips against hers. It felt good. Her lips were soft. He could feel his cock hardening, and he didn't want Madison to notice, so he pulled his face away, as he opened eyes. Madison remained with her eyes closed a moment longer. Then she opened her eyes and smiled. "Thank-you," she said and smiled again. Feeling a little bit more confident now, Kevin forgot about the chair and intead, sat down on the bed next to Madison. This night had turned out to be really great. He had just kissed a hot senior girl!! "Come on! We don't have all night," said Danielle, "It's your turn Kevin." Kevin looked around. Who should he choose? Emily smiled at him. He hadn't noticed her dimples before, but now he did, and they reminded him of a girl he had a crush on in middle school. "Emily," said Kevin. "Yes, Kevin?" Emily said coyly. "Oh, ummm truth or dare?" said Kevin. "Truth," Emily responded. "Wow," Kevin thought, "I could've chosen truth, and I wouldn't have seemed like a loser. But whatever, dare was worth it." "Ummmmm," Kevin said, he wasn't quite sure what to ask her. Then he remembered playing truth or dare at an all boys summer camp last summer, and this one question was asked a lot. "Are you a virgin?" asked Kevin. Emily smiled. "Yes I am," she said. Kevin felt a little silly. I guess this question is only good when you ask a guy. Emily wasted no time. "Katie," she said, "truth or dare?" "Dare," Katie said bravely. It was obvious Emily already had a dare in mind, because she wasted no time thinking. "I dare you to remove your bra and underwear," she said. Katie was wearing a oversized Dodgers shirt that reached the top of her thighs and black sweat pants. She stood up and pulled her arms through her shirt, unclasped her bra, pulled her arms out of the straps, and in a swift motion, revealed her hot pink bra without flashing anyone. She threw the bra at Kevin. Without having time to react, it hit his face and landed on the floor. The girls laughed. Kevin blushed brightly, and then looked up at Katie. She was pulling her sweats down, and her black thong came down with them. Luckily for her, her oversized shirt was covering her. She reached down to pick up her thong, pulled her sweats back up, and threw the thong at Kevin. Kevin was expecting it this time, so he reached up and caught them. Feeling a little ambitious now, he lifted the panties to his face, took in a quick wiff, and then placed them on the bed beside him. The girls cheered for Katie's wonderful performance, and she smiled and gave a little bow. Then she looked at Kevin, "Truth or dare?" "Dare." said Kevin, more confidently then he had earlier. Katie pondered for a moment. Kevin looked at her intensely, trying to avoid looking at the nipples that were bulging through Katie's shirt. Katie twirled her long blonde hair as she thought. Then she smiled an evil smile, that made Kevin suddenly wish he had chosen truth. "My bra and panties which you like so much," Katie said, "I dare you to put them on, and model them for all of us." "No," Kevin protested, "are you kidding me?" "Oh, come on!" the girls hollered. "You can change in the bathroom if you want," Katie suggested, "and it's just us. No one else will see you." Sorry. Got to go. More later. Last edited by abbymae; 08-12-2009 at 02:46 PM.

08-12-2009, 11:51 AM	#4
callofduty4 Member Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: dont worry Posts: 76	kool story keep it up

08-12-2009, 12:03 PM	#5
theone getDare Succubus Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: UK (NE England) Posts: 1,951 Blog Entries: 2	It looks like it’s going to be a good story. I look forward to reading more. Don’t worry about the lack of action yet, that just builds the story up for when it doe's come. You are doing great.