[Fiction] A Hidden Voice

[fullofsecrets]

She was fifteen minutes late. Jared and William stood in the courtyard and watched her rush into the school building. They were skipping school, but couldn't help but to laugh at her for seeming to be so upset for being late. She wore a teal spaghetti strap dress that went down to just above her knee, showing the world her beautifully sculpted shoulders and legs She had dark hair, brown but it looked black, and green eyes. Her backpack was slung over her shoulder and within a minutes time she disappeared into the building.

William looked at Jared. "Why do you think Allie's in such a rush? Not like she's going to find out what she missed anyway; she doesn't talk."

"I don't know, maybe she's worried she might miss the psychology lecture," Jared laughed. "You know why she doesn't talk, don't you?"

"No, why?"

"She watched her mother being raped and murdered when she was twelve. People say that it was so traumatic for her she just stopped talking and hasn't said a word since."

William laughed and let a smug smile show from his lips as he spoke, "Too bad she doesn't get around with the boys. A girl who doesn't talk? Man, that's the perfect woman. Plus, with a body like that think about the things she could do."

They laughed together and walked to Jared's car. Before opening the driver's door Jared took a second look at William. "She could be a real pretty toy if someone ever took advantage of her."

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Allie sprinted into the auditorium and took a seat in the back. The lecture had just started so she hadn't missed much, she was thankful for this. She took her bag off her shoulder and set it down on the floor between her legs and let out a sigh of relief. Beside her, her friend Beth sat and smiled at her as they both looked at each other. They'd been friends since kindergarten and even though Allie hadn't spoken in seven years, it didn't change they're friendship; they would always have a special way of communicating with each other.

Allie looked down to the stage and listened to Mr. Montgomery give his lecture. "Sometimes it is hard for most of us to realize that there are things, feelings, that we may never understand unless we are put in precarious situations where we discover them. You never think that you might feel something incredibly sensational in a life threatening situation, but you never know until you are actually put in that predicament," he said. "Now, most of us will never actually experience these feelings or situations and will never learn from them, but some of us, some of us will."

[zac]

great start...i look forward to the rest xx

[daremaster 1]

Looks great, hope it will be as good as the last one.

[fullofsecrets]

Originally Posted by daremaster 1

Looks great, hope it will be as good as the last one.

Oh it will. You can count on it! And that last one isnt over yet

[Mr. Fun 21]

Like the looks of this one too. Nice start

[fullofsecrets]

After the lecture Allie and Beth left school because it was a half day and went to lunch at a local diner. They sat in a booth, each of them taking seats on opposites sides of the table. They took their menus and started searching through them for what they wanted to eat.

After a few minutes a waitress walked over. "Okay girls, what will it be?" she asked, taking a pen and pad of paper out of her apron.

"Hmmm, I'd like a hamburger, no pickles, with some fries and a cherry coke," Beth said and then looked at Allie, "Do you know what you want, Allie?" Allie nodded and pointed at a chicken tender meal. "Allie will have chicken tenders and fries with a cherry coke too."

The waitress nodded, took down what they ordered, and walked away to the kitchen. Allie and Beth folded their menus and put them at the far corner of the table. They smiled at each other and both stared out the window for a little while.

"You want to come spend the night with me tonight?" Beth asked. Allie nodded of course, it was hardly even a real question anymore; Allie went and stayed with Beth all the time. At home her father could never understand her, though she never thought he actually tried.

"I thought we could rent movies and kick off the weekend with some relaxation and girl time," she commented and Allie smiled.

The waitress returned and set down their orders. The girls ate. Out side in the parking lot Jared and William were watching the girls, rather Allie, through the diner windows, but the girls didn't notice.

"Why are we here?" William asked. "Its making me hungry just smelling the place."

"I want to observe her a little," Jared replied, climbing on top of his car and sitting on the hood.

William joined him. "Who? Allie?"

"Yes, stupid. I think she would be the perfect candidate for the experiment."

"She doesn't talk though..."

"Exactly. No one will hear her scream if we grab her."

"Dude, I'm pretty sure she'd still scream if we tried to kidnap her...."

"Just shut up!" Jared snapped. "Its my decision...."

[daremaster 1]

This is starting off awsome. I thank I may like it more then the last.

[Mr. Fun 21]

Oh my gosh, amazing!!! So great

[fullofsecrets]

"Dude, are you going to make a decision or not? They're finishing up their lunch, man..." William said, nudging Jared.

"Shut the fuck up! I'm thinking okay? I Have to consider that she has that other girl with her, you know? That one does talk and she could cause quite a scene if we just take Allie and run."

"Well..... Then why don't we take them both?" William asked.

"Because, stupid. He told us to only pick one."

"Okay, first of all quit ragging on me! And second of all I don't think he will get that mad, maybe he would even like the idea."

Jared thought for a minute. The idea could work. It was after all all of their experiment, not just the boss's. But if he didn't like the idea and then they came with the both of them he and William could be in a whole hell off trouble.

"Fine, we will take the both of them, but if he yells at us - it was your idea."

"You are being such a dick right now."

"Yeah, yeah. I know, I'm sorry. Its just this whole experiment thing is making my nerves shoot through the fucking roof." Jared watched through the window far off as the girls paid for their lunch and were now exiting the diner. "Shut up now, they're coming out."

[Mr. Fun 21]

Nice, but short, but its okay!!

[fullofsecrets]

The boys stared at each other, glancing down at the girls every other few seconds. "I... I don't know if I can go through with this, Jared.... It seems kind of cruel to me..." William whispered.

"Oh, quit being such a pussy. This is baby stuff. Besides he wouldn't have picked Allie if she couldn't handle it, you know how he is. Plus, if Allie can take it, I'm sure her friend can take it, too."

"Look, doesn't it seem a little wrong to you to being doing this to two girls who, one, we have never even spoken to, two, have never caused any harm to anyone at all, and three, probably don't deserve to go through this type of traumatic situation." William rubbed his hands against his jeans, getting the sweat from his nervousness rub off on them.

Jared pushed William on his shoulder and William stumbled backwards a bit. "Quit talking like that, you are starting to sound like one of those criminals that go absolutely crazy after they have already committed the crime."

"But that is just it! We are committing a crime here!" William shouted and Jared shoved him again and this time William fell onto the floor.

"Shut up! Shut up right now! You are seriously starting to piss me off," Jared commented and looked down at both of the girls, laying still and motionlessly asleep secured onto the tables. "I need a little relief from your nonsense." He walked over to Allie, significantly admiring the curvature of her slender body. Her skin was pale, just as it was before, and her legs were formed beautifully with firm thighs and strong calves.

His hands made their way down to touch her body. One caressed over one of her naked breasts and the other led its fingers through her almost ebony hair. He was getting aroused just thinking about the positions he would be able to see her in soon.

From behind him, William pulled Jared away from her and turned him to face him. "Knock it off. We will both be in trouble if he comes back in here and sees you messing with the both of them. This is his idea, his experiment, his creation; we have to respect his rules," William stated and walked to the closest wall of the room and sat down against it.

"I was just messing around a little. I'm just trying to have a little bit of fun. Besides, I wouldn't purposely try to ruin this for us, like the boss said, if everything goes well with the experiment he will pay us big bucks to use them around a little and I desperately need the cash."

"But is it really worth the money to harm someone, especially a girl?" William slung his head down and stared at the floor, contemplating to himself if this was still a smart idea or not.

"We aren't hurting anyone, no one will notice if they are gone or not. And then when they are actually gone no one will show any remorse." Jared gave a mean smile and looked back at the girls, going over their soon-to-be new experiences that they probably wouldn't enjoy, but he himself certainly would.

[katebabe21]

this is amazing! please continue it! I've missed not having new installments!

[Saphir]

I'm still not quite sure whether this is better placed in the 18+ section or not.

I wonder in how far the fact that one of the girls saw her mother being raped and murdered has a significant meaning for later chapters.... I think however this could influence the 18+ question a lot.

If this was just another kidnapped, fuck, done story, it probably wouldn't be as offensive as with that background (of that one girl and her mother)

Even though this is not exactly my favorite type of story, I really like that William shows doubt about what they are doing... would be nice if you keep it like that, it offers nice options for a story.

Love

[fullofsecrets]

Well I dont think I am going to continue this story. I got really upset when some people found it offensive and I dont want anyone to feel that way. So I think Im going to let it die

[katebabe21]

ohh :/ I thought it was really good. well thanks for the first few parts. I hope you will re-consider, but thanks for the creation of what you have! continue writing. I'll be looking forward to you other story now