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03-20-2011, 07:17 PM | #1 |
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Her birthday game of truth or dare and his nightmare
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Kyle: Tall nice slim and fit body.(14) Natalie: Nice sexy body perfect size boobs and ass.(14) Adri: Very slim and flat chested.(14) Beth: Also very slim and flat chested ( birthday girl )(14) Madi: Chubby(14) It was beths birthday and she invited her friends Natalie,Adri,and Madi to spend the night. When they all arrived that afternoon they sat around ate dinner and opened presents. Beth recieved: a anal beads from Madi, 2 huge bras(32 D) from Natalie, and a makeup kit from Adri. When they finished opening presents they got bored so they decided to walk over to Kyle's house (about 1/2 mile away) to see if he want to hang out. When they arrived they invited Kyle to come over to hang out at Beths. Kyle being a 14 year old boy couldnt help but to accept. When they got back to beths they sat around talked a little but about life when Madi suggested they play Truth or Dare. Im sorry that this is so short it is my first story and I want to make it good so please give me some feed back!!!
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03-21-2011, 03:48 PM | #2 |
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Pymani96 says...
I love it. Please continue
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03-21-2011, 06:58 PM | #3 |
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i like it so far please continue.
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03-23-2011, 09:06 PM | #4 |
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Okay so i have decided to continue as long as i get some encouragement because i am not an artist. So here it goes.
So the game starts and we set out the rules. 1. You have to answer truthfully if answered untruthfully it will result in a dare. 2. You have to do a dare or otherwise you be a slave to the rest of the people of the game. Round 1 Natalie: Beth truth or dare? Beth: Truth Natalie: Do you have any fetishes? Beth: Yes, i like to have be in full bondages. Madi: Adri truth or dare? Adri: Truth Madi: Do you have a "thing" for anyone? Adri: (since she told most people here about her crush she had to answer truthfully) Yes I do... Kyle...... Will continue soon please tell me how you like it
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03-24-2011, 07:27 AM | #5 |
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This is supposed to be a thread where you post stories. Those usually consist of "chapter" installments. If you're using MS Word, usually 3 pages in Word translates to a good "chapter" posting in your story. These "updates" usually cover several hours of story "time".
The first two segments you posted only seem to have covered a few minutes of "time" in each one. Make your "chapters" much longer! Use some of the extra space to develop your characters more -- physical descriptions, feelings, desires, how they interact with each of the other characters, etc. If you haven't read any other stories on getdare, please look at some of the ones labeled 5-stars. This will give you a better understanding of writing a compelling story! |
03-24-2011, 08:17 PM | #6 |
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i like it so far but longer chapter do get more people in to it
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03-25-2011, 03:22 PM | #7 |
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Great story so far!!
did it all really happen? |
03-25-2011, 07:15 PM | #8 |
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Yes this did really happen and hopefully tonight i will do a LONGER chapter and use word for grammor ect. fyi i know i spelt things wrong in this text
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08-17-2011, 09:30 PM | #9 |
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I will continue if I may.
Kyle was so surprised that Adri had a crush on him because he was in fact in love with her. He thought se was so beautiful her eyes body and everything. So now it was Adri’s turn and she still couldn’t believe that she had admitted her crush to all her friends and Kyle himself. But besides that she wanted to make things interesting so she decided to ask her crush. Adri: So anyways, Kyle truth or dare? Kyle couldn’t believe it. First she admitted that she had a crush on him and now she was asking him. But wanting to make things a little bit more interesting considering all the beautiful girls in front of him he decided to pick dare. Kyle: Lets change things up a bit I’m going to go with dare. Now this got Adri excited she had the boy that she was crushing on at the mercy of her. But now what to dare him to do there is endless possibilities. She realizes that the pace of this this game is at the fate of her. Then it came to her thinking back to Beth’s birthday presents. Adri: Okay Kyle I got something for you. Adri was smiling so much it made Kyle rather nervous. Kyle: Okay I’m waiting. Adri: I dare you to wear Beth’s new panties and bra that Natalie got her for her birthday. (Natalie had gotten Beth a 34D pink bra with matching pink lacey panties. Kyle couldn’t believe it. He was being dared by his crush to wear panties and bra in front of a bunch of beautiful girls. Kyle had always had a fetish for female under garments but he wasn’t sure that he wanted to release that fetish to all the girls. But considering all odds Kyle decided to… Okay I am trying to right in chapters… at least longer sections but I hope its not to late to start this story back up please remember all feedback is accepted.
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08-17-2011, 11:53 PM | #10 |
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Good Story keep itup.
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08-18-2011, 06:32 PM | #11 |
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Pretty good, like to seee more.
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09-21-2011, 04:50 PM | #12 |
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What happend? Why did it stop now it is beginning to be interesting? ;-)
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6 years later...
Up to this point the story is true as I am not the original author, the rest is merely fiction of how I believe it happened. Continued... After what felt like hours but more accurately 10 seconds Kyle decided. Looking back at all the gleaming eye balls of the girls staring back at them he could not help but wonder what he was doing here, none the less he said, "Fine, I'll do it but from now this is a dare only game, deal?" After some quick glances between the girls they reluctantly agreed. In defeat Kyle grabs the bra and panty set from Beth's hang and started to walk to the bathroom when he was started by Adri's voice sternlly telling him, "No you have to change here in front of us." This made Kyle's face turn beat red as he turned back to face the eager girls. Sensing his nervousness Adri assured him it would be fine everyone here has seen a boy naked. This only made Kyle more nervous because of his like of size below the belt. Kyle stood in the middle of them for what seemed like an hour before he finally awoke by Madi screaming, "Strip Bitch!" this made all of the girls laugh and made Kyle's face turn redder if that was possible. None the less, Kyle first took off his shirt, and with his toned upper body this caused "ooo's and aaa's" from the crowd which built up his confidence. Kyle then quickly pulled his pants down to his ankles and stepped out of them. Now the crowd was silent with anticipation. Now for the moment of truth, he pulled his boxers down to his ankles and stepped out of them when he did everyone including Adri bursted out laughing. This caused a reaction that Kyle couldn't explain and gave him a raging boner. Which of coursed caused even more laughter. After the laughter died down finally Adri asked, "Well are you going to finish the dare?" Embarrassed Kyle reached down and pull up the pink lace panties over his swollen penis and with the snickering help of Beth put on the Bra. As he turned to face everyone there was bright flash that blinded him followed by more hysterical laughter. Once the laughter calmed down the girls realized that they were done with truth or dare and that they were going to forward the picture they had just taken to the whole school followed by more laughter. Kyle worried and still unsure of what was going on asked "what picture" then Natalie showed him a picture of him in the pink bra and panty set with a clear boner. After seeing this Kyle began to cry and beg,"Please don't send that picture around, ill do your homework, ill bring you lunch, I will do anything. At that moment all of the girls turned to look at him and repeated, "Anything?". To be continued... Hey guys this is all I am going to write today. Feedback is appreciated so I know there is an interest in me continuing this story. Thanks.
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05-12-2017, 09:19 AM | #14 |
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I like it so far, and I hope that the girls will take him outdoors in public and play with him
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