[Fiction] Johns Servitude

[trust-no-1]

Hi,
This is the long awaited sequel to "Johns Slavery", You can read it here: http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=23143

I will write chapter 2, but I wont post until I get some feedback, Enjoy


Chapter 1: The Beginning.
Johns phone rang, and he answered it, it was his new master Alyssa.
“John, I want you to meet me at school tomorrow at the music rooms during second period”, before he could say anything she hung up.
He went straight to his computer, and looked at his only photo of her, She is slightly fat, with DD boobs, and a big ass.
When the second period bell rang, John didn't waste any time and went straight into the music room to meet his master. He looked around, saw some computer's, some pianos, a sound board, some guitars and his new Master.
“Yes Master?” he asked.
“There will be a sports lesson today, at period 4, are you in it?” she asked.
“No Master” he answered.
“Good, you will meet me next to the female change rooms 10 minutes after the bell sounds” she said, and with that, she kissed him and walked off, leaving John wondering, what could be happening?
Alyssa walked off thinking about her new pet, A slight 6-pack, longish brown hair and a nice tan.

[Ozpossum]

this si good pls psot more

[Ozpossum]

and maybe make the chapters longer

[trust-no-1]

It was a small chapter to build tension, the next ones will be bigger

[Ozpossum]

good i am glad somebody is contiuning the story

[Dare-Master]

Do a good job! From what I read you're gonna have to put in a little more detail and not let it be so fast. I know it's the beginning but that's the part that people rush when it needs the most attention. Also use John's Slavery as a reference to people and descriptions so that it follows along well, doing so means less writing but means looking through and finding what you need. So far it is good and if you keep it up I hope it turns out just as good as the first. Just promise us something...no cliffhangers!! Ok maybe a bit but not a huge one at the end ok? Anyway keep it up!

[trust-no-1]

thanks for the tips
i will consider no cliffhanger at the end, but maybe a few big ones

[storyboy]

Finally! The story! I know you will do great, keep it up.

[trust-no-1]

Thanks, Im am typing the second chapter now, should be up soon.

[trust-no-1]

Ok, here we go, Im sorry Dare-Master, There is a big cliffhanger


Chapter 2: The Female Change-rooms

John was waiting next to the change rooms, he got a weird look from a few girls when Alyssa walked up.
“Good, you came. I will see if it is empty, Come in if I knock on the wall 3 times” she said, walking around, John heard 3 knocks and walked in. This was the first time he had ever seen the female change rooms, they were nicer than the male change room, They had separate showers, and smelt nicer and were cleaner, he look around more, and saw some bags, obviously left by the PE class, some clothes laying on the ground, some underwear and pantyhose, he got an instant erection at the sight.
His master pulled the bag off her shoulders, “what if somebody comes in Miss?” he asked.
“Your problem, not mine, I'm allowed here, remember?” she asked pulling some rope out.
She walked over to some bags of clothes and started looking, she found a sexy bra and panty set, in other bag she got a garter belt and some thigh high stockings. She threw them at John and ordered him to put them on, She then tied his hands to the low roof, and spread his legs to some benches so he could not move.
“Miss, But I could get expelled” he said.
“SHUTUP, I own you, you do as I wish bitch” she said pulling out a whip, and whipping him.
She then found some makeup on the ground, and made him up with it, foundation, mascara, lipstick, blush and eye-liner, “You look, Cute. I'm going to get some food, Ill be back later, you better hope nobody comes” she said as she skipped out, leaving John alone, defenceless, cold and humiliated.
John thought about ten minutes had passed, he heard a few people walk really close, they only went to the water fountain, they didn't come in. A few more minutes after that, a group of girls walked in, and went straight to the toilets, fortunately they didn't see him, he heard them talking, and listened in,
“Shit” one girl said.
“what is it?” said another.
“I'm in the middle of my period, and I'm out of tampons” she said frustrated.
“I have some in my bag, ill get them for you, hang on” the other girl replied.
John went mental, he would be discovered, what would he say, and do?

[Bidz4321]

Great story, can't wait to hear more!

[trust-no-1]

Next chapter:

Chapter 3-The humiliation

As the girl got around the corner and saw John, she let out a little squeal.
“Please, don't tell anybody,” pleaded John, nearly crying.
“I'm not going to. We should have some fun. Alyssa said you would be here and ready to use you until she got back. Luckily for her, we are both on our periods. Right Sophia?” said the girl.
“I here ya Jen,” said Sophia as Jen walked out to her bag and pulled out a pink toiletry bag and went back to where the toilets were.
“Thanks babe,” said Sophia kissing Jen as the returned to his body.
“We have 20 minutes before the lesson ends,” said Jen to Sophia. Sophia then whispered some things to Jen. Jen then went up into her skirt and pulled her bloody tampon out and Sophia pulled one out from behind her back.
John went crazy. He had a mortal fear of blood, let alone someone else's used tampons. The two girls walked over to him and started to draw lines on his chest with the tampons. Sophia made John suck her tampon dry while Jen placed the one she had up his ass.
Jen then got Sophia to help her up onto his stomach so she could mount and fuck him while Sophia took photos.
Someone else walked in, but John couldn't see who it was. Jen and Sophia walked out leaving him alone again.
He then fell on the ground. After the ropes holding his hands were cut, the ropes holding his legs were cut and he saw who it was.
“Thank you Miss,” he said and she just walked out.
John didn't know what to do. He looked at the clock and saw there was 10 minutes before the lesson would end. The students get released 5 minutes early every day so there is enough time to change before the next lesson. He had 5 minutes to get all the makeup off, the tampon out, the clothes back, have a shower, get dry and dressed.
John took off the lingerie and pulled out the tampon. He put the prior back into the bag and the tampon in the bin. He found some makeup remover and got most of it off but he only had about 2 minutes left at that stage. He quickly got dressed and ran out just as people where leaving the gym.

[storyboy]

I miss daredaredare's stories

[trust-no-1]

I hope I can fill that void

[Ozpossum]

trust your stories are good but you need to bring up the stanard longer chapter mroe cruelty and difrent dares daredaredare were better when they were at the house, yours is good but to many cliff hangers.