An Unforgettable Trip - FICTION

waslostnowfound · 12-05-2008, 03:17 PM

Hi, this is my second story on Getdare.com, I hope you enjoyed my first, ‘Teenage Sleepover’, this new story is called, ‘An Unforgettable Trip’. I hope this story is even better than my last one. Some characters from my last story may be included, but it is not a sequel. They haven’t had that adventure from my last story, thanks.

Gary – 15 Year Old – Not very sexually interested in much, gets tired a lot, quite daring, very funny.

Jack – 15 Year Old – Quite sexually, will do good dares if others are also willing to, very friendly and accepting.

Liam – 15 Year Old – Very sexually, but hides it, not very daring (or is he?), not very funny, always awake.

Joe – 14 Year Old – Acts very sexually, very daring if others do the dare, not acceptant of other people not doing dares.

At the beginning of the story, the group of 4 are in a youth hostel on a school trip in Germany, they all share the same room; they have never done anything sexual with each other. The furthest they have gone is strip to boxers. It is 6.00pm and they have free time in their room. My name in this story is Liam, which is not my real name. Part One is just a teaser; the best and longest is yet to come. I hope you enjoy.

PART ONE

“I know! Lets play strip poker!” Jack laughed. I didn’t like the sound of this; it was only our first day on the trip.
“Truth or Dare is better, everyone must play, agreed?” Joe said, everyone nodded their heads, even I did I though it could be quite fun. We all agreed that the dares would have to be done inside the room or else we would be chucked off of the trip by the teachers. Joe decided that he should start, as it was his idea to play the game. We decided to wait half an hour as we all still needed to shower. Gary decided to get into the shower first, we all planned to try and do something to him or his bed while he was in the shower, but what would we do?

blaise1 · 12-06-2008, 12:45 AM

its okay a bit short but he thats just you I would like it not to hhave black mail in it us alot of stories do its okay if theres a little

.Keep it up

x.Emma.x · 12-06-2008, 05:52 AM

Yeah a tad short, but there's potential. You've rushed this part. I hate spontaneous stories that are suddenly like "Strip", "Sure". Careful not to rush it. But keep it going.

iwant2move2hawaii · 12-06-2008, 08:00 AM

yeah keep it going! sounds very interesting

Coyote · 12-06-2008, 09:18 PM

not fair i hate teasers

12-05-2008, 03:17 PM	#1
waslostnowfound Junior Member Join Date: Nov 2008 Posts: 18	An Unforgettable Trip - FICTION Hi, this is my second story on Getdare.com, I hope you enjoyed my first, ‘Teenage Sleepover’, this new story is called, ‘An Unforgettable Trip’. I hope this story is even better than my last one. Some characters from my last story may be included, but it is not a sequel. They haven’t had that adventure from my last story, thanks. Gary – 15 Year Old – Not very sexually interested in much, gets tired a lot, quite daring, very funny. Jack – 15 Year Old – Quite sexually, will do good dares if others are also willing to, very friendly and accepting. Liam – 15 Year Old – Very sexually, but hides it, not very daring (or is he?), not very funny, always awake. Joe – 14 Year Old – Acts very sexually, very daring if others do the dare, not acceptant of other people not doing dares. At the beginning of the story, the group of 4 are in a youth hostel on a school trip in Germany, they all share the same room; they have never done anything sexual with each other. The furthest they have gone is strip to boxers. It is 6.00pm and they have free time in their room. My name in this story is Liam, which is not my real name. Part One is just a teaser; the best and longest is yet to come. I hope you enjoy. PART ONE “I know! Lets play strip poker!” Jack laughed. I didn’t like the sound of this; it was only our first day on the trip. “Truth or Dare is better, everyone must play, agreed?” Joe said, everyone nodded their heads, even I did I though it could be quite fun. We all agreed that the dares would have to be done inside the room or else we would be chucked off of the trip by the teachers. Joe decided that he should start, as it was his idea to play the game. We decided to wait half an hour as we all still needed to shower. Gary decided to get into the shower first, we all planned to try and do something to him or his bed while he was in the shower, but what would we do?

12-06-2008, 12:45 AM	#2
blaise1 Member Join Date: Oct 2008 Posts: 31	Okay its okay a bit short but he thats just you I would like it not to hhave black mail in it us alot of stories do its okay if theres a little.Keep it up

12-06-2008, 05:52 AM	#3
x.Emma.x Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: UK Posts: 223	Yeah a tad short, but there's potential. You've rushed this part. I hate spontaneous stories that are suddenly like "Strip", "Sure". Careful not to rush it. But keep it going. __________________ Luv George Sampson sooo much!!! George Sampson & Eoghan Quigg are fittt!! 18/F mistress from England! Xx Looking to mistress any guys or girls that are together. So I'd dare two guys, two girls, or one guy and one girl. If there's two of you and you're interested, let me know! I'd LUVV to mistress you!

12-06-2008, 08:00 AM	#4
iwant2move2hawaii Junior Member Join Date: Dec 2008 Posts: 14	yeah keep it going! sounds very interesting __________________ F/19/US

12-06-2008, 09:18 PM	#5
Coyote getDare Addict Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: USA Posts: 2,110 Blog Entries: 14	not fair i hate teasers