Romeo and Juliet Rap

[slutpup]

Hey guys! Well for an extra credit project for school, I had the option of making a Romeo and Juliet rap. I finished it and I want to know if it's any good or not because I think I have to preform it in front of the class!! So I'm going to type it up and it would be really helpful if you would post if you like it or not and if I need to change it, how I should change it. Thanks!

Romeo and Juliet Rap:

So get ready
And listen with yo ears
Im gonna tell you bout a tragedy
Written by William Shakespear

Its about this dude
His name is Romeo
He had this love with the girl
Like the world has never known

The chicks name happened
To be Juliet
Theres just one problem
She came from family Capulet

Now Romeo
Was a Montague
His and her familys
Had a bitter feud

Now the Montes and the Capeys
Fighting was nothing new
Against all odds
Romeo and Juliets love grew

And just to give you an idea
Of how bad it got
Tybalt killed Mercutio
And Romeo killed Tybalt

Now Mercutio
Was Romeos family friend
Tybalt was a cousin
Of Juliet till the end

Now for Romeo killing a Capulet
He was banished from Verona
By order of Prince Esculas
Which was just balonga

As it turns out
Juliet was promised
To marry Paris
Who just wanted a wife
And thought Juliet was fairest

Juliet takes a potion
To make her look dead
It was Friar Laurences plan
As it was said

Friar Laurence was the guy
Who married the young couple
And gave Juliet the potion
To try to end the quarrel

Romeo had a servent
His name was Balthasar
He saw Juliet dead
He told Romeo
And Romeo thought in his head
Why stars why
Did you take from me
Juliet oh Juliet
How can this be

Juliet gets buried
In the Capulets tomb
Next to Tybalt
and soon Romeo too

Romeo goes to see her
At her tomb
And when he gets there
Paris is there too

Paris and Romeo
Start to fight
Romeo gets mad
Pulls out his knife

Romeo stabs Paris
And he dies
But his final words are
Let me lie
Next to my Juliet

Romeo finally sees
Juliet dead
Starts to cry
Pulls out poison
With one last kiss
And he dies

Juliet wakes up
Sees Romeo dead
Grabs his knife
Stabs herself in the chest

It took two star-crossed lovers
To take their life
For the Montagues and Capulets
To end their fight

[small_penis2141]

damn. That is good

[slutpup]

Originally Posted by small_penis2141

damn. That is good

Thanks It took me 4 hours and I finally got it!

[PerfectlyImperfect]

that was legit and educational.