James' Home

italia13calcio · 10-11-2011, 04:30 AM

Hey everyone,
Here goes my second attempt at writing a story. It will be more frequently updated than my other story, but it will also be less in depth and more fragmented. Anyways, here the starting bit. More to come tonight. Hope you enjoy.
*
James was just another normal kid. He was seventeen years old, five foot eleven, with straight brown hair that fell to around his ears. His eyes were brown, and he worked out in the gym, so although he was not jacked, he was sculpted. He lived at home with his brother Mike, who was 19, and his two sisters, Mary, who was 18, and Jane, who was 15.

Like many other kids these days, his parents were separated; his dad having left the family ten years ago, so now just his mother was around. Luckily, she came from a relatively wealthy family so she did not have to work two or three jobs, but she managed to make ends meet with just one.

Mike, his brother, was a football player, and stood at six foot one and was all muscle, much more so than James. He definitely was jacked. He had short blonde hair with brownish green eyes, and him and James had always been close together, bonding over the hole their father had left.

Mary, James’ older sister, was five foot eight, tall for a girl. She had black hair and brown eyes, with a nice figure; large C 24 breasts, a round ass, and a toned stomach. When their father had left, she in turn had drifted closer to Jane, their other sister.

Jane was fifteen and about five foot three. She had blonde hair, the only one in the family with that color hair. Her eyes were a type of hazel green. She too had a nice figure, with smaller B 36 breasts, but with just as nice an ass and stomach.

Saphir · 10-11-2011, 04:58 AM

Hey,
your writing style is quite good and I'm really looking forward to your new story.
Your last one (Cousin T or D game) is quite awesome and hot.

But you should let a mod remove your other project or something, it's definately not nice and I don't get why it is not removed already.

You ignored all comments about it and in my opinion that's definitely the wrong way.

No offence meant.

Have a nice day.

italia13calcio · 10-11-2011, 07:34 PM

Looking for a few replies before the next post....
The adventure began one Friday afternoon. James was returning from his soccer practice, happy at last to have it be the weekend. It had rained that day, and he was soaked thoroughly. He jumped out of his friend’s Tommy car, who could legally drive him as off one week, and hurried up to the door.

He opened the door and was about to go in when his mother appeared out of nowhere and stopped him.

“Oh no. You’re not coming in here that wet. Take them off.” She said, motioning towards his drenched clothes.

James stared at her in disbelief. “Mom… they’re not that wet!”

“Yes they are honey. Now take them off.”

“Outside?”

“Yes… now hurry!”

James glared at his mom but put down his soccer bag. He had no choice, he knew. If he didn’t strip now his mom would just refuse to let him in. It had happened a few times before when he was younger, so he also knew not to just push by his mother. That would just get him grounded.

He peeled off his wet and muddy t-shirt, revealing his pale but toned stomach. A little paler than he would have liked, but not much he could do about that living up in Maine. His mother just continued to stare at him.

He then bent down and pulled off first his shoes, and then his long soccer socks. They too were mud encrusted, and James could see why his mother didn’t want them inside.

Finally he was left in in his shorts. He pulled them down too, leaving him just in in his boxers. He glanced at his mother, who just nodded. He pulled them down, and then quickly covered himself.

His dick was a little small for his age, or so her thought, about four inches long when soft, about six inches when hard. Right now it was completely soft, and even a little shriveled from the wetness. He didn’t shave his pubic hair either, and while it wasn’t that much it did cover the base of his dick a little. He hurriedly gathered up his clothes and used them to hide his penis. He then waited for his mother to move out of the way, which she did eventually.

“Remember,” she remarked as he passed her, “Go put those clothes in the laundry room. Right away.”

James marched through the hall all the way down to the laundry room, on the other end of the house. He quickly deposited his clothes there and then turned around and walked back to the staircase, which was in the middle of the house. Without any clothes, he had nothing to cover up with but his hands, but doing that would have made it awkward to walk, so he just walked normally, admittedly a little hurried.

His mom, having shut the front door, caught sight of him once more as he walked down the hallway, and he briefly saw her eyes looking at his dick before he turned and went up the stairs. At the top of the stairs he took a right to get to his room. His family was lucky enough to have a large enough house where everyone had their own room. They were all on the top floor, arranged in a sort of rectangle with the stair case in the middle.

As he turned towards his room, his sister Jane came out of her room. She instantly caught sight of James, and almost instinctively her eyes flickered to his dick. He blushed and picked up his pace, and when she didn’t look away he covered up his penis with his hands. That snapped her back to reality and she turned bright red, gave a squeal, and went back into her room, slamming the door behind her. Hurriedly James went to his room and got dressed.

thefunman · 10-11-2011, 07:42 PM

Story is good so far keep up the great work.

colomale · 10-12-2011, 03:15 AM

This is good. Keep going please!

10-11-2011, 04:30 AM	#1
italia13calcio Account Banned Join Date: Mar 2011 Location: USA Posts: 178	James' Home Hey everyone, Here goes my second attempt at writing a story. It will be more frequently updated than my other story, but it will also be less in depth and more fragmented. Anyways, here the starting bit. More to come tonight. Hope you enjoy. * James was just another normal kid. He was seventeen years old, five foot eleven, with straight brown hair that fell to around his ears. His eyes were brown, and he worked out in the gym, so although he was not jacked, he was sculpted. He lived at home with his brother Mike, who was 19, and his two sisters, Mary, who was 18, and Jane, who was 15. Like many other kids these days, his parents were separated; his dad having left the family ten years ago, so now just his mother was around. Luckily, she came from a relatively wealthy family so she did not have to work two or three jobs, but she managed to make ends meet with just one. Mike, his brother, was a football player, and stood at six foot one and was all muscle, much more so than James. He definitely was jacked. He had short blonde hair with brownish green eyes, and him and James had always been close together, bonding over the hole their father had left. Mary, James’ older sister, was five foot eight, tall for a girl. She had black hair and brown eyes, with a nice figure; large C 24 breasts, a round ass, and a toned stomach. When their father had left, she in turn had drifted closer to Jane, their other sister. Jane was fifteen and about five foot three. She had blonde hair, the only one in the family with that color hair. Her eyes were a type of hazel green. She too had a nice figure, with smaller B 36 breasts, but with just as nice an ass and stomach. __________________ My story: http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=76217 My story contest: http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthrea...742#post515742

10-11-2011, 07:34 PM	#3
italia13calcio Account Banned Join Date: Mar 2011 Location: USA Posts: 178	Looking for a few replies before the next post.... The adventure began one Friday afternoon. James was returning from his soccer practice, happy at last to have it be the weekend. It had rained that day, and he was soaked thoroughly. He jumped out of his friend’s Tommy car, who could legally drive him as off one week, and hurried up to the door. He opened the door and was about to go in when his mother appeared out of nowhere and stopped him. “Oh no. You’re not coming in here that wet. Take them off.” She said, motioning towards his drenched clothes. James stared at her in disbelief. “Mom… they’re not that wet!” “Yes they are honey. Now take them off.” “Outside?” “Yes… now hurry!” James glared at his mom but put down his soccer bag. He had no choice, he knew. If he didn’t strip now his mom would just refuse to let him in. It had happened a few times before when he was younger, so he also knew not to just push by his mother. That would just get him grounded. He peeled off his wet and muddy t-shirt, revealing his pale but toned stomach. A little paler than he would have liked, but not much he could do about that living up in Maine. His mother just continued to stare at him. He then bent down and pulled off first his shoes, and then his long soccer socks. They too were mud encrusted, and James could see why his mother didn’t want them inside. Finally he was left in in his shorts. He pulled them down too, leaving him just in in his boxers. He glanced at his mother, who just nodded. He pulled them down, and then quickly covered himself. His dick was a little small for his age, or so her thought, about four inches long when soft, about six inches when hard. Right now it was completely soft, and even a little shriveled from the wetness. He didn’t shave his pubic hair either, and while it wasn’t that much it did cover the base of his dick a little. He hurriedly gathered up his clothes and used them to hide his penis. He then waited for his mother to move out of the way, which she did eventually. “Remember,” she remarked as he passed her, “Go put those clothes in the laundry room. Right away.” James marched through the hall all the way down to the laundry room, on the other end of the house. He quickly deposited his clothes there and then turned around and walked back to the staircase, which was in the middle of the house. Without any clothes, he had nothing to cover up with but his hands, but doing that would have made it awkward to walk, so he just walked normally, admittedly a little hurried. His mom, having shut the front door, caught sight of him once more as he walked down the hallway, and he briefly saw her eyes looking at his dick before he turned and went up the stairs. At the top of the stairs he took a right to get to his room. His family was lucky enough to have a large enough house where everyone had their own room. They were all on the top floor, arranged in a sort of rectangle with the stair case in the middle. As he turned towards his room, his sister Jane came out of her room. She instantly caught sight of James, and almost instinctively her eyes flickered to his dick. He blushed and picked up his pace, and when she didn’t look away he covered up his penis with his hands. That snapped her back to reality and she turned bright red, gave a squeal, and went back into her room, slamming the door behind her. Hurriedly James went to his room and got dressed. __________________ My story: http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=76217 My story contest: http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthrea...742#post515742

10-11-2011, 04:58 AM	#2
Saphir getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Dec 2010 Posts: 425	Hey, your writing style is quite good and I'm really looking forward to your new story. Your last one (Cousin T or D game) is quite awesome and hot. But you should let a mod remove your other project or something, it's definately not nice and I don't get why it is not removed already. You ignored all comments about it and in my opinion that's definitely the wrong way. No offence meant. Have a nice day.

10-11-2011, 07:42 PM	#4
thefunman getDare Succubus Join Date: Sep 2009 Location: Florida, USA Posts: 1,766	Story is good so far keep up the great work.

10-12-2011, 03:15 AM	#5
colomale Junior Member Join Date: Oct 2011 Posts: 28	This is good. Keep going please!