Fiction: The Transformation

WAMXdresser · 05-04-2014, 05:55 PM

This is just a short intro to my new story. I hope you guys like the setup and would love to hear some feedback, good and bad. I plan on putting up a new chapter every week, they will be longer than this one. Thanks for your feedback.

The Transformation
Chapter 1

This is the story of a boy named Brandon and his transformation in the summer of 2020. Brandon was just an average 18-year old guy. He had a girlfriend, played a few sports, and got decent grades. His graduating class was about 50 people. Even though he was in the top half of his class, Brandon had no plans on going to college, he just wanted to work on his dad’s farm. That all changed when he went to his girlfriend’s house on the first day of summer.

Brandon’s girlfriend, Jessica, was one of the hottest girls at school. She had decent breasts, but her butt really got a lot of attention from the guys at school, especially when she wore yoga pants. It was May 20th and the seniors had just had their graduation. Brandon went over to Jessica’s house like he always did, but this was going to be different. Jessica had been preparing for this since the beginning of the school year. She had tons of bondage equipment, adult toys, women’s clothing, makeup, and a fair few wigs; all of this would be used to aid in Brandon’s total transformation into a girl.

WAMXdresser · 05-11-2014, 01:34 PM

Do you guys like where this is going? If not, I probably won't write anymore. There's a few hundred views which is nice, but no feedback as of yet.

garrasdevil · 05-11-2014, 01:53 PM

I say continue. There wasn't much to judge it on but the premise seems very interesting.

Vodin30 · 05-11-2014, 02:49 PM

I say continue as well.

iceman713 · 05-12-2014, 12:39 PM

I say write it because you want to, not because of the feedback that you get from others. A lot of people on here wont comment til the story has started.

But It sounds good to start with.

05-04-2014, 05:55 PM	#1
WAMXdresser Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2014 Location: Midwest, U.S. Posts: 164 Blog Entries: 4	The Transformation This is just a short intro to my new story. I hope you guys like the setup and would love to hear some feedback, good and bad. I plan on putting up a new chapter every week, they will be longer than this one. Thanks for your feedback. The Transformation Chapter 1 This is the story of a boy named Brandon and his transformation in the summer of 2020. Brandon was just an average 18-year old guy. He had a girlfriend, played a few sports, and got decent grades. His graduating class was about 50 people. Even though he was in the top half of his class, Brandon had no plans on going to college, he just wanted to work on his dad’s farm. That all changed when he went to his girlfriend’s house on the first day of summer. Brandon’s girlfriend, Jessica, was one of the hottest girls at school. She had decent breasts, but her butt really got a lot of attention from the guys at school, especially when she wore yoga pants. It was May 20th and the seniors had just had their graduation. Brandon went over to Jessica’s house like he always did, but this was going to be different. Jessica had been preparing for this since the beginning of the school year. She had tons of bondage equipment, adult toys, women’s clothing, makeup, and a fair few wigs; all of this would be used to aid in Brandon’s total transformation into a girl. __________________ 18/M/US Cocklette Size: 4" hard Likes, Limits, etc. Crossdressing Clothes PM Dares Toys My Kik is: WAMXdresser My Fetlife is: WAMXdresser I love getting fucked in my tight sissy pussy! Love to be covered in cum from head down to my toes! P.S. Especially love it in my mouth Last edited by WAMXdresser; 05-04-2014 at 05:58 PM.

05-11-2014, 01:34 PM	#2
WAMXdresser Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2014 Location: Midwest, U.S. Posts: 164 Blog Entries: 4	Do you guys like where this is going? If not, I probably won't write anymore. There's a few hundred views which is nice, but no feedback as of yet. __________________ 18/M/US Cocklette Size: 4" hard Likes, Limits, etc. Crossdressing Clothes PM Dares Toys My Kik is: WAMXdresser My Fetlife is: WAMXdresser I love getting fucked in my tight sissy pussy! Love to be covered in cum from head down to my toes! P.S. Especially love it in my mouth

05-11-2014, 02:49 PM	#4
Vodin30 getDare Devil Join Date: Jun 2010 Location: SoCal Posts: 1,262 Blog Entries: 4	I say continue as well. __________________ Teamup Calendar I am a baby and should be treated like one Baby's Likes: i am just starting my foray into abdl, teach me. LIKES Limits: family, friends, animals, scat, under age, social suicide. Permanent markings. feel free to send me an email, PM, or kik me KIK vodin11

05-12-2014, 12:39 PM	#5
iceman713 getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 262	I say write it because you want to, not because of the feedback that you get from others. A lot of people on here wont comment til the story has started. But It sounds good to start with. __________________ Likes: masterbation, cross dressing, risky, driving dares, nudity, bondage Limits: small anal, shallowing myself, public, friends NO - NOs : illegal, family, pain, poop, pee, perment damage, death

05-11-2014, 01:53 PM	#3
garrasdevil Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2008 Posts: 209 Blog Entries: 1	I say continue. There wasn't much to judge it on but the premise seems very interesting.