Fiction: Bellezza Nascosta (Uncommon Desire)

cara.loverin1989 · 07-08-2010, 03:56 PM

Okay, so here we go. I have been thinking about writing a story, but wanted to do something a little different. So we shall see if you like this one. Here is a little bit to see if it catches your intrest. Let me know what you think!!

It was the time of elegant gowns and the era of royals. Nobles rode in horse draw carriages, and Knights rode on their battle horses while young maidens swooned at the sight of their glory. All was beautiful in the Kingdom of Bellezza Nascosta. The kingdom was at peace with itself.

The ruler of Bellezza Nascosta was a Queen “as beautiful as the land she ruled” as the people said. Her name was Avron. She was young, a mere 19, had long waves as gold as the sun that flowed down her back. She was sweet and kind, she was everything that the people desired and they loved her, sometimes to a fault. Each would lay down their lives for her pleasure and needs. Beneath her beautiful appearance however, lay a desire that her kingdom was more than willing to fill; no matter how out of the ordinary it was.

sekai · 07-08-2010, 04:21 PM

Sounds nice. Great writting skills and I can't wait for more

cara.loverin1989 · 07-08-2010, 07:50 PM

Okay dokey, here is some more. Tell me what you think...

There was a big secret in Bellezza Nascosta, which all of the people obligingly kept. The people loved their queen so much that it was as if a spell veiled the entire Kingdom. No one disobeyed the beloved Queen Avron. About this fact, she was very happy. Like all Kingdoms, inside the castle there was a dress code according to your level. However, unlike most Kingdoms, this dress code varied in a few places. Also, a portion of the castle was forbidden to anyone who except the Queen herself, or those who lived in that specific section. It should be said that no one besides the Queen herself knew of the people in the private section. They were her little secret.
In the morning, when the Queen’s personal maids and ladies came in to wake and dress her, there was a certain dress code. They would enter through the main room doors and enter a small side room. This is where they removed their regular clothing and replaced it with the uniform that the Queen picked out for them. The new uniform for the maids was a lace waist apron and a matching chest bodice. For the ladies in waiting, because they were of higher class, wore tiny, dainty panties tied on with ribbon that dangled down their bare hips. One time the Queen mentioned how she admired women who had pierced nipples, dropping the hint. The next day the ladies in waiting arrived, nipples newly pierced, to find nipple jewelry and connecting chains. Of course they were delighted at how, when they came out in their new accessories, the Queen smiled at them.
The queen was very good at dropping such hints to get what she wanted. She always got what she wanted willingly for the people wanted to please her. However, this was not enough. In the private part of the castle, things that went on were not always done willingly at the drop of hints.

timetoshine · 07-08-2010, 10:36 PM

This is very interesting. I want to see were this goes. keep writing.

**Mandi** · 07-09-2010, 06:39 PM

I am so intrigiuged! (however you spell that word..)

cara.loverin1989 · 07-09-2010, 06:42 PM

Why thank you! I will add some more later, i have been kind of busy! Ciao!

**Mandi** · 07-09-2010, 06:47 PM

I will be looking forweard to it(:
but there is no rush(:

DHK-eh · 07-10-2010, 08:15 PM

I'm glad to see anything this original on getdare, and it's well written on top of that, please go on.

molten man · 07-28-2010, 04:33 PM

Nice start.. Keep it going!!

Dicedarefan666 · 07-30-2010, 01:52 AM

I mean, yeah, as long as molten already bumped it, I wouldn't mind seeing another part or 7 of this story :P

equilibrium · 08-14-2010, 11:46 PM

love it, but so short.

07-08-2010, 03:56 PM	#1
cara.loverin1989 Account Banned Join Date: Jun 2010 Location: The United States Posts: 265 Blog Entries: 13	Bellezza Nascosta (Uncommon Desire) Okay, so here we go. I have been thinking about writing a story, but wanted to do something a little different. So we shall see if you like this one. Here is a little bit to see if it catches your intrest. Let me know what you think!! It was the time of elegant gowns and the era of royals. Nobles rode in horse draw carriages, and Knights rode on their battle horses while young maidens swooned at the sight of their glory. All was beautiful in the Kingdom of Bellezza Nascosta. The kingdom was at peace with itself. The ruler of Bellezza Nascosta was a Queen “as beautiful as the land she ruled” as the people said. Her name was Avron. She was young, a mere 19, had long waves as gold as the sun that flowed down her back. She was sweet and kind, she was everything that the people desired and they loved her, sometimes to a fault. Each would lay down their lives for her pleasure and needs. Beneath her beautiful appearance however, lay a desire that her kingdom was more than willing to fill; no matter how out of the ordinary it was. __________________ Hello! I love to chat with people but if you are a guy looking for a slave or a master, STOP now.Thanks! “You can never cross the ocean unless you have the courage to lose sight of the shore.” - Christopher Columbus “Half of the troubles of this life can be traced to saying yes too quickly and not saying no soon enough.” - Josh Billings

07-08-2010, 04:21 PM	#2
sekai Account Banned Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Poland Posts: 251 Blog Entries: 4	Sounds nice. Great writting skills and I can't wait for more __________________ "Who controls the past controls the future: who controls the present controls the past." [SIGPIC][/SIGPIC] "What a beautiful woman! Would you mind showing me your panties?" - One Piece

07-08-2010, 07:50 PM	#3
cara.loverin1989 Account Banned Join Date: Jun 2010 Location: The United States Posts: 265 Blog Entries: 13	Okay dokey, here is some more. Tell me what you think... There was a big secret in Bellezza Nascosta, which all of the people obligingly kept. The people loved their queen so much that it was as if a spell veiled the entire Kingdom. No one disobeyed the beloved Queen Avron. About this fact, she was very happy. Like all Kingdoms, inside the castle there was a dress code according to your level. However, unlike most Kingdoms, this dress code varied in a few places. Also, a portion of the castle was forbidden to anyone who except the Queen herself, or those who lived in that specific section. It should be said that no one besides the Queen herself knew of the people in the private section. They were her little secret. In the morning, when the Queen’s personal maids and ladies came in to wake and dress her, there was a certain dress code. They would enter through the main room doors and enter a small side room. This is where they removed their regular clothing and replaced it with the uniform that the Queen picked out for them. The new uniform for the maids was a lace waist apron and a matching chest bodice. For the ladies in waiting, because they were of higher class, wore tiny, dainty panties tied on with ribbon that dangled down their bare hips. One time the Queen mentioned how she admired women who had pierced nipples, dropping the hint. The next day the ladies in waiting arrived, nipples newly pierced, to find nipple jewelry and connecting chains. Of course they were delighted at how, when they came out in their new accessories, the Queen smiled at them. The queen was very good at dropping such hints to get what she wanted. She always got what she wanted willingly for the people wanted to please her. However, this was not enough. In the private part of the castle, things that went on were not always done willingly at the drop of hints. __________________ Hello! I love to chat with people but if you are a guy looking for a slave or a master, STOP now.Thanks! “You can never cross the ocean unless you have the courage to lose sight of the shore.” - Christopher Columbus “Half of the troubles of this life can be traced to saying yes too quickly and not saying no soon enough.” - Josh Billings

07-09-2010, 06:39 PM	#5
Mandi getDare Succubus Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: United States Posts: 1,512 Blog Entries: 30	I am so intrigiuged! (however you spell that word..) __________________ F/19/bi I am a little princess, be nice <3 I am only on this site for FRIENDS. Nothing else. Please don't ask. Ask Me Anything Thread

07-09-2010, 06:42 PM	#6
cara.loverin1989 Account Banned Join Date: Jun 2010 Location: The United States Posts: 265 Blog Entries: 13	Why thank you! I will add some more later, i have been kind of busy! Ciao! __________________ Hello! I love to chat with people but if you are a guy looking for a slave or a master, STOP now.Thanks! “You can never cross the ocean unless you have the courage to lose sight of the shore.” - Christopher Columbus “Half of the troubles of this life can be traced to saying yes too quickly and not saying no soon enough.” - Josh Billings

07-08-2010, 10:36 PM	#4
timetoshine Distinguished Member Join Date: Mar 2010 Location: Canada Posts: 559	This is very interesting. I want to see were this goes. keep writing.

07-09-2010, 06:47 PM	#7
Mandi getDare Succubus Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: United States Posts: 1,512 Blog Entries: 30	I will be looking forweard to it(: but there is no rush(: __________________ F/19/bi I am a little princess, be nice <3 I am only on this site for FRIENDS. Nothing else. Please don't ask. Ask Me Anything Thread

07-10-2010, 08:15 PM	#8
DHK-eh Member Join Date: Feb 2010 Location: Around Posts: 54	I'm glad to see anything this original on getdare, and it's well written on top of that, please go on.

07-28-2010, 04:33 PM	#9
molten man Distinguished Member Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Mumbai, India Posts: 946	Nice start.. Keep it going!! __________________ MMan 26/m/straight Skype: molten_man007 Kik: molten_man

07-30-2010, 01:52 AM	#10
Dicedarefan666 getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Feb 2009 Posts: 403	I mean, yeah, as long as molten already bumped it, I wouldn't mind seeing another part or 7 of this story :P __________________ Likes: Light to moderate pain - Giving dares - Asking questions Dislikes: Hard pain - Jacking off - Semi-public - Wedgies Hates: Extreme pain - Urine - Full Public - Involving other people Limits (Will never do these) Permanent damage - Involving Family - Scat - Involving Animals - Crossdressing - Eating Gross stuff

08-14-2010, 11:46 PM	#11
equilibrium Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2010 Posts: 141 Blog Entries: 1	love it, but so short. __________________ [CENTER] Girl Switch limitsno scat, messy things vomit illegal, beastiality public, family wedgies