Truth Or Dare In the Swimming Pool [Fiction]

sparky12345 · 08-22-2009, 11:45 AM

This is a story of my truth or dare with my friend in the pool.

My name is Tyler and I am 14 when i was hanging out in the pool with my friend Melissa. Melissa is 14 also, I had a crush on her since the sixth grade. She was a brunette and had a sexy body. We were just chilling when she said out of the blue, "Why don't we make this interesting. Wanna play some good old truth or dare?" If i had said no, then she would think i was chicken so i reluctantly said yes.

The game started out with pretty low key stuff, mostly truths. It was Mel's (Melissa's nickname) turn and she asked, " Have you ever had sex?" This made me a little red. I said shamefully, "No" I saw her giggle a little. It was then my turn. "truth or dare?". "dare", she said. I wanted to spice things up a little bit. I said, " I dare you to un clip your bikini strap.

If i get feedback, I'll continue it

chris_here · 08-22-2009, 12:18 PM

its a good start, if anything your rushing it. i like it though so far. kudos

aicul434 · 08-22-2009, 12:20 PM

good story so far

sparky12345 · 08-22-2009, 04:16 PM

Thanks for the feedback!!

..She sighed, " Fine" She didn't have reveal anything, just hold her bikini on. She then asked me the obvious question, which i replied, "Dare". "OK, i dare you to turn the other way (facing away from her) and take your trunks off for ten minutes" My face got intensely red as soon as she said it. I then proceeded to turn around, then slowly take off my trunks. When they were finally off i asked her truth or dare, at this point, we were saying dare every time." I dare you to strip down and face me" She surprisingly didn't over react and stripped down, i couldn't see her but i knew she did because she threw her tops and bottoms towards me." She then dared me to turn around and i couldn't cover up my dick.
I then obeyed her dare and reluctantly turned around to see her naked sexy body. i immediately got hard and she was well aware of that.

I will continue after i get 3 comments, thanks!

aicul434 · 08-22-2009, 04:46 PM

maybe you should slow it down a litle bu other then that its good

Mick · 08-22-2009, 05:28 PM

Please continue

it's pretty good.

Nicknchewy · 08-22-2009, 06:07 PM

Awesome story

please continue

wedgiebrown · 08-22-2009, 06:30 PM

Amazing!!!! Contuine NOW!!!!!

sparky12345 · 08-24-2009, 09:00 AM

Once again thanks for the awesome feedback!!

I then obeyed her dare and reluctantly turned around to see her naked sexy body. i immediately got hard and she was well aware of that.

i saw her giggle at the sight of me. It was my turn now. " I dare you to do a handstand and let me finger you for ten seconds". "No way!!!" she protested. "A dare is a dare Mel." "Fine, lets just get this over with" She went under and then proceeded to do a handstand that exposed her shaved pussy. I was so excited for this golden opportunity. I swam over and fingered her for the best ten seconds of my life. She finally resurfaced. It was her turn now, "I dare you to do the dead mans float, so your dick is standing straight up for 2 min." I argued but to no prevail. i then floated on the surface of the pool, with my dick standing straight up in the air. I had my eyes closed so i couldn't see what she was gonna do next..

I hope you enjoyed!! i will continue after 5 comments

SAMaster · 08-24-2009, 10:03 AM

good story please continue

Mr Very Daring · 08-24-2009, 10:45 AM

love it- brilliant -keep going

dan_dude · 08-24-2009, 01:43 PM

its very good but it needs to be longer

firenight · 08-24-2009, 04:19 PM

go on its alsome make it longer

Dylan xX · 08-25-2009, 04:17 PM

Quote:

go on its alsome make it longer

Thats what she said. :P sorry hadda do that.

Love the story dude, if anything ur rushing it and its too short.

Writing mechanics: 8/10

Background: 5/10

Main Idea: 8/10

Length: 1/10

Total:11/20 not bad, just make it a bit longer and no thats not what she said..... :P

iTunes · 08-25-2009, 11:51 PM

What's with all these writers demanding feed back and not just continually writing? Personally, I think it is annoying, all the feedback ever is is good job keep writing so that you will proceed, if someone has tips or advice they should just say it, and it definately shouldn't be expected, think of each one as a gift, you can't just demand gifts.

Well that's my two bits

08-22-2009, 11:45 AM	#1
sparky12345 Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 3	Truth Or Dare In the Swimming Pool [Fiction] This is a story of my truth or dare with my friend in the pool. My name is Tyler and I am 14 when i was hanging out in the pool with my friend Melissa. Melissa is 14 also, I had a crush on her since the sixth grade. She was a brunette and had a sexy body. We were just chilling when she said out of the blue, "Why don't we make this interesting. Wanna play some good old truth or dare?" If i had said no, then she would think i was chicken so i reluctantly said yes. The game started out with pretty low key stuff, mostly truths. It was Mel's (Melissa's nickname) turn and she asked, " Have you ever had sex?" This made me a little red. I said shamefully, "No" I saw her giggle a little. It was then my turn. "truth or dare?". "dare", she said. I wanted to spice things up a little bit. I said, " I dare you to un clip your bikini strap. If i get feedback, I'll continue it

08-22-2009, 05:28 PM	#6
Mick Member Join Date: Feb 2009 Posts: 30 Blog Entries: 1	Please continue it's pretty good. __________________ likes: nudity, public, cross dressing, streaking, pics, outside Dislikes: pee and poop, mess, pain, cam, gay stuff, anal 16/male [email protected] email mee

08-22-2009, 06:30 PM	#8
wedgiebrown Member Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: Unknown Posts: 52	Amazing!!!! Contuine NOW!!!!! __________________ Likes: WEDGIES,, messy, down underwear, mini. pain, and meduim pain in balls Wont DO!ublic, sexual, anything my parents can find about, pee/poo, crossdressing, naked, illegal CANT DO: Hanging, dangling, shoving stuff up my buttoks, ice 13/Male

08-24-2009, 10:03 AM	#10
SAMaster Member Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: South Africa Posts: 94	good story please continue __________________ Luvs: Edging, Milking Likes: Nudity, masturbation, semi public, light pain Limits: Family, scat, blood, needles, fire, illegal Everything else is prob a soft limit, which I like to see how far I am willing to go...

08-24-2009, 01:43 PM	#12
dan_dude Member Join Date: Jul 2009 Location: Birmingham, England Posts: 84	its very good but it needs to be longer __________________ PM ME WITH DARES TO DO i have been a very, naughty cross-dresser and deserve to be punished! Likes: cross dressing, anal, slight humiliation Limits: extreme pain, illegal, scars, scat and family

08-22-2009, 12:18 PM	#2
chris_here Account Banned Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 2	its a good start, if anything your rushing it. i like it though so far. kudos

08-22-2009, 12:20 PM	#3
aicul434 Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 4	good story so far

08-22-2009, 04:16 PM	#4
sparky12345 Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 3	Thanks for the feedback!! ..She sighed, " Fine" She didn't have reveal anything, just hold her bikini on. She then asked me the obvious question, which i replied, "Dare". "OK, i dare you to turn the other way (facing away from her) and take your trunks off for ten minutes" My face got intensely red as soon as she said it. I then proceeded to turn around, then slowly take off my trunks. When they were finally off i asked her truth or dare, at this point, we were saying dare every time." I dare you to strip down and face me" She surprisingly didn't over react and stripped down, i couldn't see her but i knew she did because she threw her tops and bottoms towards me." She then dared me to turn around and i couldn't cover up my dick. I then obeyed her dare and reluctantly turned around to see her naked sexy body. i immediately got hard and she was well aware of that. I will continue after i get 3 comments, thanks!

08-22-2009, 04:46 PM	#5
aicul434 Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 4	maybe you should slow it down a litle bu other then that its good

08-22-2009, 06:07 PM	#7
Nicknchewy Junior Member Join Date: Nov 2008 Posts: 7	Awesome story please continue

08-24-2009, 09:00 AM	#9
sparky12345 Junior Member Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 3	Once again thanks for the awesome feedback!! I then obeyed her dare and reluctantly turned around to see her naked sexy body. i immediately got hard and she was well aware of that. i saw her giggle at the sight of me. It was my turn now. " I dare you to do a handstand and let me finger you for ten seconds". "No way!!!" she protested. "A dare is a dare Mel." "Fine, lets just get this over with" She went under and then proceeded to do a handstand that exposed her shaved pussy. I was so excited for this golden opportunity. I swam over and fingered her for the best ten seconds of my life. She finally resurfaced. It was her turn now, "I dare you to do the dead mans float, so your dick is standing straight up for 2 min." I argued but to no prevail. i then floated on the surface of the pool, with my dick standing straight up in the air. I had my eyes closed so i couldn't see what she was gonna do next.. I hope you enjoyed!! i will continue after 5 comments

08-24-2009, 10:45 AM	#11
Mr Very Daring getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Mar 2009 Posts: 255	love it- brilliant -keep going

08-24-2009, 04:19 PM	#13
firenight getDare Sweetheart Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: mi Posts: 370	go on its alsome make it longer

08-25-2009, 11:51 PM	#15
iTunes Junior Member Join Date: Mar 2009 Posts: 17	What's with all these writers demanding feed back and not just continually writing? Personally, I think it is annoying, all the feedback ever is is good job keep writing so that you will proceed, if someone has tips or advice they should just say it, and it definately shouldn't be expected, think of each one as a gift, you can't just demand gifts. Well that's my two bits