Wow. I didn't think about it being related to Peter Pan hahaha. Nice catch Nate. Even though I already commented on it...EXCELLENT JOB!!! One of the best written stories I've ever seen. Novel-like. Good job!!!!!!! I can't say it any other way besides..>WOW!
I READ THE FIRST CHAP!!! omg my comment seems pretty tame so im sorry, but OOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMMMGGGGGGGGGGGG PETER PAN!!!!!! im definately gunna be getting some wild tought about him when i watch the movie now xD omg PLEASEEEEE write on it soon!