My poem
Hi all,
I've already posted this in TheLittleStrawberry's poem-thread (here), but I'm actually pretty proud of myself I finally dared to make a poem public
It's also the only one I think deserves to go public, all the est just sucks (I'm talking about my poems, not the ones posted in this thread.
Partir à tout jamais...
Sans regretter de t'aimer...
Ne m'oublie pas...
Je veillerai sur toi...
Je vais partir...
Ne plus revenir...
Ce n'est pas à cause de toi...
Mais la vie ne veut plus de moi...
Continue à m'aimer...
Comme tu le fais...
Je vais mourir...
Mais de moi ne garde que mon sourire...
Thanks again for the correction, Chloe
I've already posted this in TheLittleStrawberry's poem-thread (here), but I'm actually pretty proud of myself I finally dared to make a poem public
It's also the only one I think deserves to go public, all the est just sucks (I'm talking about my poems, not the ones posted in this thread.
Partir à tout jamais...
Sans regretter de t'aimer...
Ne m'oublie pas...
Je veillerai sur toi...
Je vais partir...
Ne plus revenir...
Ce n'est pas à cause de toi...
Mais la vie ne veut plus de moi...
Continue à m'aimer...
Comme tu le fais...
Je vais mourir...
Mais de moi ne garde que mon sourire...
Thanks again for the correction, Chloe
Total Comments 4
Comments
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Posted 06-29-2008 at 08:37 PM by Fiendish -
Posted 06-30-2008 at 02:01 AM by Hampers -
Posted 07-01-2008 at 07:56 AM by lordlight -
wonderful
Tu es francophone apparemment...? Ou parfaitement trilingue
Anyway, your poem is a little gem to be cherished !Posted 07-05-2008 at 12:19 AM by mafiaka