Betty, I can honestly say I wouldn't stop writing this story. I don't get to say this about a lot of stories on here but I seriously do not see any flaws. Mechanics are good, spelling is flawless, content is smooth, you're not rushing things, idea is original, details are rampant...in short it's a great story. If you're worried about how to write certain people, pm them or contact them some way and shoot ideas with them. This is a story that I, as well as many others, don't want you to give up on. I hope you continue on it.
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