I could see myself reading this seeing that I'm partially bi. I don't consider myself a veteran writer but as of starting a story I do have a few tips. Make sure that you know who your main characters are going to be, what they look like and what their personalities are. Instead of blatantly stating what your chracter's personalities are like though try and reveal these through their actions. Don't be afraid to include details. Readers like to be able to visualize stories in their mind's eye, or at least I do. Also I say this to every author always proofread your stories before you submit them. Don't rely solely on spellcheck and grammar check. These aren't always completely reliable. Read over your story carefully and look for common spelling mistakes, usage errors, or parts of the story that are just sort of "eh...this doesn't really click." Just take your time and enjoy your writing process. Hope this helps.
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