G.s.p. [fiction]

[abbydancer626]

G.S.P.
girls
sleepover
party



Invent List

Jessica
Abby
Lauren
Heather
Brittney
Jackie



I (abby) was out side jessica's house door ready for this party
so i went in all us went in her bonus room and she locked the doors. creepy huh? so jess is like we will pick the slumber slave out of this hat she picked a name ..............It is.................

part 2 coming soon........................

[Soraslight]

Too short, may have potential though. Just have to wait and see.

[Manbearpig]

i actually like the shorter post 1st part of a story. It is normally an intro to the story and really doesn't need to get indepth, yet....

[Musty 21]

it can go somewhere, except it was short. please use a diffrent color too. Good story so far.

[Glutgod]

Yea good story but a bit short.

[TrekBoy008]

Although I am not a fan of "girl-on-girl" stories and will probably not read the next installment to this (nothing personal, just not my thing), I would suggest that you use a darker colored font so that it will be easier for others to read.

[Powerstrip]

Yeah, I had to highlight the text to read it.

Otherwise:

Keep it up :D

[depp=noob=lol]

i hope that there will be a new part soon so that we can judge a bit.!

[Smile Guy]

I've changed the colour to red, to make it more legible. Looking forward to the rest of the story!

[depp=noob=lol]

I've changed the colour to red, to make it more legible.

and that is why i think that you re such a great mod.

[Musty 21]

I havn't really seen smile guy post anything that is related to the site except mod stuff. I miss his wonderful posts.

Anyway

is this person even active anymore?

and thank you for changing it to red :D Now its easier to read!

[Manbearpig]

i see her on all the time. i hope we get a story soon, if u have time ;)

[Musty 21]

maybe someone should pm her......