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Old 05-29-2011, 04:25 PM   #27
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The first thing she knew of the real world outside of her own head after she found herself lost in the past, her emotions and the pleasure she still felt was a sense of longing as the stimulation stopped.

Slowly the room began to gain focus again- sliding back into its solid form- no longer a blur of colour and lights. she could see him now.... his beautiful eyes looking up at her with bemusement. His fingers were tracing lines on the inside of her legs as he rested his head on her crotch giggling a little.

“A stomach rumbling?” he smiled teasingly. “You have to be kidding me!?”

she looked up at him not knowing what to say or do but keep eye contact.

“Of all the noises you could give me in the height of your arousal you came up with that? a moan i could deal with, even a sneeze, but a stomach rumble?” He began to rub her tummy playfully as its rumble interjected once more- feeling the need to be heard. “In all my years I have NEVER heard that in such an intimate moment.”

She whispered mumbled apologies and began to stroke his hair playfully. burying her toes into the bedding so not to make him cold with them. “How about we take you downstairs now- and get some food inside you before you decide to eat me.” They both giggled, and Ethan pushed himself up from the bed to stand looking at her, still with his pants on, but his firm chest was bare. Anabelle just ached to touch it, to stroke the soft skin, feel it pressed against her.

She clambered up onto hands and knees out of the tangle of bedding and looked at him eagerly until he invited her to leave the bed. She Jumped from the duvet and found herself in his arms in a heartbeat. Locked in his warm embrace she couldn’t think of anywhere in the world she would rather be. Regardless of rain, and cold winds outside and all the problems of the world she was happy. Blissful. The word could fall apart around her and she would not care. But... her stomach had other plans.

Ethan threw her a big t-shirt and a pair of panties to put on- she wasn't usually allowed clothing in the house- but he was feeling in a generous mood. At the moment- the best she could do to please him was to be happy herself, his love of her was so deep today, so deep always that a simple smile on her face would make his day. Quickly she threw on the grey t-shirt and white panties and looked up at him, holding him tight once more. Her nipples poked through the soft material and felt comfort in feeling his muscles press against them with a strange sense of reassurance. A voice telling her he would always be there for her.

He picked her up in his arms, and held her tight still as he escorted her out of the room and down the stairs. They still lived in his small minimalist flat in Dublin- with its open plan living- meaning that he could easily treat her like his little princess some days without walking her into furniture and walls. As much as he wore the trousers in the relationship he was under no illusion she would complain endlessly if he walked her into a book case. He knew she would bitch and moan, and he hated it so much when she did that.

She kissed his neck and shoulders and cheeks as she lay across his arms- with her own wrapped tightly around his chest. Though it was secret to her, the kisses she gave him were still like magic to him. Sending jolts of pleasure through his body. Each and every one made him happy.

At the bottom of the stair he attempted to put the warm bundle of Anabelle onto the floor- but she grumbled and held on even tighter, shifting her weight as he dropped his hands so that her feet were round his hips. She looked at him just in time to catch his mock face of disappointment.

“Are you going to let go, my little Koala?” He asked smiling sweetly

She shook her head back and forward with a cheeky look radiating from her deep blue eyes. Her hair bounced back and forward as she moved, such that Ethan had to work hard to avoid it.

“You sure?” He gently kissed her nose and looked deep into her eyes- his vision blurring from such close proximity. She nuzzled his nose slightly before responding.

“Yesm, the floor is cold.”

He tickled her lightly causing her to squirm and squeal in his grasp “How would you know if the floor is cold. You haven’t been out of bed in almost 12 hours?” She giggled.

“It looks cold” They laughed and teased together as they made their way to the living room- where all the white furniture had been pushed out of the way. Anabelle screeched with joy as she saw the surprise that awaited her on their oak wood floor. A mix of excitement, love and apprehension washed over her as she bounced up and down in his arms, more excited than she could ever imagine being in her life:- but then again that happened a lot.
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