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Originally Posted by moretech
I think you might want to edit this part a little as I believe you put "under her" in there when it was not supposed to be
"Lexie put her hand under her hand under Vanessa’s shirt to stroke her side"
Either way, good story
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Thank you! I must have missed that. My Internet has been crapping out on me so I couldn't send this part through the grammar checker I have. I hope a little error doesn't ruin the story.
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