[sexualfeelings]

I like it so far, but it could be better.

Some 'thoughts' and "speech" can be added between the characters.
The biggest thing that turns me away from a story is the lack of paragraphs. No one wants to read a huge wall for text, trust me.
Don't be afraid to bold some words and italics.
Lastly, colors used in moderation will only enhance your story.
I made some edits what you have posted as an example.
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I think there were three main reasons I did it. I mean what self respecting male would think how I do? I guess the first reason would be that I'm shy and introverted, so I don't have many friends and those I do have live hours away. It made it easy to slip into a world of porn and perversion.

Since I arrived at university I found it so much easier to delve into this world rather than one of normal social interaction. Secondly, the lack of any intimacy or relationships made it very easy to lose the ability to see any self-worth in myself or that I may be worth something more. Finally being naturally submissive sealed my fate.

Growing up I had an abnormal relationship with my father, he was a troubled man and I guess somewhere between the periodic abuse, both physical and mental, and my submissive tendencies I formed an attraction to older men, in particular those who are on the surface mean.

So I guess that it how I got here, browsing the casual encounters section on craigslist. As a virgin this is where I sometimes come to dream, knowing many of the ads are probably fake anyway.

Scrolling down I see an ad from a 41 year old dominant male who was looking for an innocent virgin sissy. Of course this peaked my interest and I saw that the post had pictures attached, so I clicked on it. What first caught my attention were the pictures.

They were all in hotel rooms and they were all of 'girls' like me. Looking through the pictures I could tell each were of different 'girls', some were bound, some were bruised and that turned me on.

As I read the ad, I saw it mentioned that he was an experienced dominant who was looking for a new 'girl' to train and that he was willing to travel and pay for a hotel for the night.

I went back to the pictures and on the last one was a picture of a cutie with her make up done with what must have been his cock in her mouth. It was a mesmerizing cock, it was around 7 inches and very thick. The girl in the picture was struggling to get to half way.

I was scared but so excited, I hoped it was real. I got a confidence I have never had before and messaged him, "Hey"...