Thread: Fiction: an obedient slave boy
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Old 01-01-2013, 08:43 PM   #2
OwnMe8
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Hey, it's a good start. Just don't rush it. Take your time and really work through what you want to say until it flows. And proofread! :P I look forward to the next chapter.
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