I'm usually not one to comment on a story every time there's a new installment, but yeah this is good and accurate. I've dabbled on craigslist a few times and the feeling is of nervousness and thankfuly I can say nothing of this extremity has happened to me before, and I plan to keep it that way. It's also good that you're not blatantly promoting craigslist because I can guarantee that there are some people out there like that. Still a couple of word usage errors but like I said nothing to take away from the story, I'm sure there's some in mine as well. Also cliffhangers...got to love them, makes me excited to see where this goes next.
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