Story: The Real Monster
This work is completed and is 10 pages long, about 5,000 words. Every week on Mondays, I will be releasing a new chapter (1-6).
Do not read if under 18. Violence and Sexual Content.
Brian has been abused all of his life. He has been on the losing end of the stick. Well this year he is about to level the playing field. Through every tactic and resource at his disposal he will humiliate and destroy any opposition.
It does have truth and dare as a explanation to how he made his plan, but please note that this is not a strong element in the story.
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If you think this story is worth reading please reply on this forum saying so, and give it a decent rating. Please report constructive criticism after all 6 chapters have been released. After the entire story is posted I would like people to provide feedback on how to improve the story. Information on the pace, grammar, etc.
If I feel no one in the community is interested in this story then I will stop posting new chapters***
Link here:
http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthrea...598#post580598