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ShinyDemon · 09-21-2009, 12:04 PM

The story itself has potential, however it's quite difficult to read due to the formatting. It would certainly help to include paragraphs to make it easier on the eye.

09-21-2009, 12:04 PM	#4
ShinyDemon getDare Sweetheart Join Date: May 2008 Posts: 277	The story itself has potential, however it's quite difficult to read due to the formatting. It would certainly help to include paragraphs to make it easier on the eye. __________________ Check out my stories... Sister's Sleepover - T or D - http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=11496 COMPLETE Sister's Sleepover - The Sequel - http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=28060 COMPLETE Sister's Sleepover - The Sub Plot - http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=31635 COMPLETE Sister's Sleepover - The Trilogy Concludes - http://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=107154 - IN PROGRESS