Hey, how about that an actual story in the truth or dare stories that invovles truth or dare! But being an English major, here's where I need to see improvement. Very few mechanical errors and spelling errors, but not really bad enough to take away from the story. Next time before submitting something, and I find that this really helps me, is carefully look over your document before posting it. Constructing things like this in a word processing program such as Microsoft Word helps in this process. Going with dared to perfection's comment don't rush it, take your time, details really help a story's overall performance. So basically if you slow down, pan the details out more, and just look for gramattical or spelling errors before submitting it, the story will most likely be successfull. I will look forward to reading your next installment. Best of luck!
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