Humanity Lost

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NOTE: I am a Sadist so there will be some pretty messed up stuff in this story. Just a warning to all. And yes, there will be characters under the age of 18 and so i just want to say that I DO NOT support any kind of child abuse or pornography. Thhis is all just some sick fantasy that i have in my head that will ALWAYS remain just a fantasy.


Ella was just a young and average 15 year old girl. She was flat-chested with short black hair in a fohawk with a few piercings in her ears and her tongue. She was very much a loner in all parts of her life such as school and and home, she didnt have a single friend. She was frowned upon by just about everyone in her class for her looks and choice of clothes. I guess you could say she was the only kid in her school of 2000 kids that any kind of dark first impression.

Every night she would just go home and up to her room, do her homework, then undress and just lay there in her room naked and masturbate. Over the years, she had built up her own private colection of toys and other sexually stimulating items of choice. She was a very lonely girl and she felt very depressed that no one would accept her the way she was.

The first day of school was finally here. She was moving up into the 10th grade. She woke up and took a shower. She was going to try and make a better first impression of some of the people in her classes and try to make some friends this year. She had let her hair grow out over the summer and now it was down to her shoulders. Ella had made sure to double-condition her hair to make it look extreamly silking and shiny, hoping to attract attention. She took all her peircings out besides the one in her belly button and her ear lobes. The week before, her mother took her shopping and she decided to get some clothes that werent a dark color, but instead, she got some white and pink skirts and shirts, a yellow jacket with a little bumble bee on it as well as some black thongs, just for fun.

Getting dressed, Ella decided on one of her new pink skirts with a white shirt to go along with it. slipping on her black thong and her new high heels, she glanced at herself in the mirror and actual had to look back to make sure she could recognize herself.

The bell was ringing for the first period classes to begin. She took her seat in the front, sitting next to a boy who she did not recognize at all from any of the previous years. "He's cute" she thought to herself. She knew right then that he was going to be the person she tried the hardest to get to like her.


Obviously this isnt all that exciting, its just getting it started. Its a silly thing to ask for with just this kind of start, but what do you think so far?

[kmacroxs]

Obviously this isnt all that exciting, its just getting it started. Its a silly thing to ask for with just this kind of start, but what do you think so far?

you're wrong, this is very exciting

this is so awesome

please continue

:cool: :clap:

please don't let me, a loyal fan, down

if you do let me down, I will go :eek: then :mad:

[doggy_slave]

i like it so far please continue

[down_under]

wow, wasnt expectiong those responses. ok. ill continue it later. i should be able to get a few posts up tomorow (like afternoon-ish) are there any sugestions you would like to make? things you liked and didnt like so far? (sorry, im just curious)

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Ella couldn't stop looking at this boy. "who is he?". "where is he from". "how long has he been here". She just kept asking herself all kinds of stupid quistions about him to herself.

"Ella? Ella. Ella!". Ella snapped out of her trance and looked up athe teacher. "yes miss?". Can you please take your eyes off of Jack and come to the board to answer problem number 6?". Ella instantly turned red in the face. "Yes ma'am". She stands up and begins to answer the question writeb on the board. Here legs slightly shaking, noticeably enough to where everyone in the first two rows could easily see she was shaken. A warmth grew between her legs but she didn't understand why exactly. She's been wet before, but she has never felt anything like this before. There were butterflies in her belly. She realized she was shaking from excitement and embarrassment.

Ella quickly finished and took her seat next to jack. Ella was beginning to lose her mind silently in her seat. She had never been excited by anything in class before, but being unable to touch herself was getting to be unbearable.

Jack raised his hand. "miss, would it be ok with you if Ella here showed me where the nurse' office is? I think I'm going to be sick.". He started to cough and looked as though he could barf at any moment. Ella quickly stood up and led jack out of the room. As soon as they left the room, jack stood up straight, cleared his throat, grabbed ella's hand nearly crushing it, and leading her to the parking lot of the school.

He led her to a far off corner of the school grounds and threw Ella into the dirt, getting her new skirt dirty. "I saw you up at the chalk board and I could tell that you were getting excited thinking about me. I want you to take off your clothes." ella was in total shock. She couldn't believe what she had just heard. "CLOTHES. OFF. NOW CUNT!". She didn't know what to do. Ella just sat there petrified, unable to move, hardly breathing. Jack kicks her to the ground and rips her clothes off, one piece at a time. "oh my my my. What a gorgeous body you have here. It's much to nice for you. I think we may just take it from you.
"we? Whis is "we""? Ella spoke aloud, but her words fell on deaf ears. All she knew for certain was that she was naked against her will outdoors in broad daylight, and that she was nearly certain she would not leave the parking lot with either her pride or hymen intact.

[kmacroxs]

nice

this story just got better

please let this story get even better

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Jack pulled a knife out from his sock and pushed poor Ella to the ground, hitting her head. Holding her down, he started to choke her with one hand, and began carving into her chest. Ella tried to scream out, but all that came out was just a choking noise and very little air. In her chest now was the number 3410156. 3 for his own recruiter number, 4 because she is the fourth girl he has captured this year, 10 for the year 2010, and 156 for the the 156th girl he's captured in his life. Blood was running down her chest onto the ground. She was obviously terrified, but she could also feel her legs becoming soaked with something. She couldn't tell if she had peed herself from fear or if she was just excited. Jack was practically reading her mind and he stuck a finger down between her legs and began to finger her violently. There was nothing pleasurable about what he was doing to her. Digging his nails into her inner walls of her pussy, scraping the skin off from the inside until it was all just raw skin. Needless to say her insides were now severly reactive to pain. She let out the tiniest little yelp and jack's faced became full of rage. He hammered down on her throat nearly crushing her windpipe. He let up and she tried to speak, but to no avail. He hadn't killed her but she was now unable to speak any words of human beings. He pulled his cock from his pants, laughing loudly as he did it.
"I'm going to have some fun with you before I go and collect my payment for finding such a hot young thing". He lifted her legs up and without any lubrication besides her own juices and blood, rammed his 8 inch hard dick up into her pussy all at once. She wanted to scream. She wanted nothing else but to scream out in pain, but all that came out was scratchy air. He thrusted against the raw skin of her inner pussy walls, causing more pain and nerve damage as he went on. He didn't cum in her but he pulled out and pulled something out of his pocket.

"you see this bitch? This is what is going to keep you in line from now on". It was a little tiny vibrator about half an in long and only 2 centimeters wide. Jack took his knife and began cutting her litter pussy lips skin from her, revealing her clit. Using his knife, he dug started cutting a hole into the center of her clit. This drove Ella wild with pain. If she hadn't known better, she would have thought that her tears were being made of her own blood and fear. The pain was the worst pain she had ever felt in her life. Jack placed the little vibrator into her clit and stappled it shut with a little hand held stapler. He clog began go buzz. Getting more intense as time passed. She was in ecstasy. It was such a wonderfully feeling having er clit stimulated from the inside. Her euphoria quickly turned to anger, and pain when her clit began receiving shocks. It was almost as excruciating as having it drilled into. "this vibrator has a battery that runs on heat, luckily for you, your body will be getting hot quite a bit. Haha". He picked her up and walked her over to his truck. "are your parents home". She shook her head. He probably already knew the answer and she didn't want to lie to him. "good, let's go get some of your things. You won't be coming back here again". She looked at him in terror, sobbing into her hands silently. They started to drive and she thought to herself, "why me"

[Ozpossum]

keep posting please

[the body man]

Wow Very Exciting... Keep goin!!!!

[down_under]

sorry everyone. im in college and as you know, its a busy life, will try and get a post out soon. Have a nice night all.

[down_under]

Thanks for all your patience everyone. Here's the next part.



Ella was scared out of her mind. Her chest hurt like a branding iron had been shoved down her throat and burned her own heart. "what is going on" she thought. Her mind was racing, and she couldn't breath. Jack had shoved a tube down her throat to supply her lungs with oxygen so that she wouldn't suffocate. The tube was slightly barbed so taking it back out would hurt her a lot unless the barbs are retracted. Which of course only jack knew how to do.

They pulled up to her house and jack pulled Ella by her hair across the car and out by the drivers seat. "go inside and get some clothes. Only bring one set of clothes. It's all you will need". He watched her through her door to make sure she was doing it. She looked around the corner and noticed that he wasn't watching her. Her heart began to race and she knew this would be her chance. She quickly wrote a little note on a sheet of paper to her parents explaining the situation briefly and placed it halfway under one of her pillows. She came out dressed in jeans, panties, a white bra, t shirt and sandals. "here you go. Put this note in your room cunt" Jack said. "and do not open it". She did not dare disobey him and placed it on her pillow, using it to slightly cover her real note. She walked out holder her oxygen tank in her arm and knelt down in front of him waiting for him to say something. " he looked angry when he came back and kicked her to the floor and dragged her across the floor by the roots of her hair. Turning the vibrator on, her began to soak itself. This was going to be a long car ride to wherever we are going she thought.

He throws her into the trunk and smashes her hands in the door if the trunk before opening it again and pushing them back in. She could scream. She could only cry. Now her hands were not just broken, but shattered. She could almost feel the bone dust rattling around in her fleshy hand. She began to cry so hard that she wet herself. "great" she thought, knowing she would have to deal with the smell the whole way and that jack would probably be mad at her. She didn't care anymore. Her spirit was already broken.

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Just read the whole thing. Please continue.