The Doctor
02-19-2010, 08:41 PM
Hi, again, this is my second story for GetDare, after I peaked to soon on my last one and didn't know how to recover it (I have heard that many a time!) However, my original story remains a 5 star and so after much reading of others stories I have decided to try again, however this one starts in the mature section. (Special thanks to Headhunter_T, Swirly, strippednakedmale, Officelover, and many more for your inspiring stories). Anyway story time folks.
Part 1
Kimberly was 16, 5' 8” with long raven black hair, she was a sweet and fun loving girl, very popular at school, but she could always find time to talk to anyone no matter what there popularity. She lived at home with her mum and was an only child. Her mum worked as a nurse and so often worked long days and nights and so pretty much left kim to her own thing. One friday after catching the bus home from school she decided to log onto her live messenger as she got changed, just as she pulled her jeans on, a message popped up saying, “Shadowmaster666 has added you as a friend, would you like to accept and add this person or block all communication?” she hit add thinking it was probably a friend from school who had changed their email, almost instantly a message popped up “hello kim, how are you?”
“I'm great thx” she replied “who is this btw?”
“I am a friend”
“any specific friend?”
“I have a proposal for you, I know of your secret, I would like to to take part in it”
“...ok...what secret? Who are u?”
“Your desire to be a slave”
“i dnt know what u are tlkin about”
“I have been watching you, I know. However if you want I will leave right now and we will not speak again, just give me the message”
Kim thought for a moment, it was true and what did she have to lose.
“ok you have me interested, continue”
“Ah good, I am currently a master without a slave, and would like you to fill this vacuum, I will give you the option to leave at any time, just say the word, however from what I have seen I believe you will enjoy this as much as I will”
“ok, so are there like rules or somit?”
“I will send you more precise rules at a later stage, however for now I would like you to refer to me as master, and I will refer to you as slave, also are relationship will remain strictly confidential including any and all material produced during are realtionship unless both parties agree otherwise”
“ok, master, so like dont tell anyone and does that mean like any pics taken will stay prvate?”
“yes slave”
“ok master, I look frward to your other rules”
“ok slave I will contact you later”
Kim leaned back in her chair and smiled.
Sorry I have used (my little knowledge of) internet speak for the messenger bits to try to make it realistic, would appreciate your thoughts on whether I should carry on with this or use real, proper English for these sections. Also any other thoughts or comments on the story are welcome, naughty or nice. Many thanks, The Doctor.
Part 1
Kimberly was 16, 5' 8” with long raven black hair, she was a sweet and fun loving girl, very popular at school, but she could always find time to talk to anyone no matter what there popularity. She lived at home with her mum and was an only child. Her mum worked as a nurse and so often worked long days and nights and so pretty much left kim to her own thing. One friday after catching the bus home from school she decided to log onto her live messenger as she got changed, just as she pulled her jeans on, a message popped up saying, “Shadowmaster666 has added you as a friend, would you like to accept and add this person or block all communication?” she hit add thinking it was probably a friend from school who had changed their email, almost instantly a message popped up “hello kim, how are you?”
“I'm great thx” she replied “who is this btw?”
“I am a friend”
“any specific friend?”
“I have a proposal for you, I know of your secret, I would like to to take part in it”
“...ok...what secret? Who are u?”
“Your desire to be a slave”
“i dnt know what u are tlkin about”
“I have been watching you, I know. However if you want I will leave right now and we will not speak again, just give me the message”
Kim thought for a moment, it was true and what did she have to lose.
“ok you have me interested, continue”
“Ah good, I am currently a master without a slave, and would like you to fill this vacuum, I will give you the option to leave at any time, just say the word, however from what I have seen I believe you will enjoy this as much as I will”
“ok, so are there like rules or somit?”
“I will send you more precise rules at a later stage, however for now I would like you to refer to me as master, and I will refer to you as slave, also are relationship will remain strictly confidential including any and all material produced during are realtionship unless both parties agree otherwise”
“ok, master, so like dont tell anyone and does that mean like any pics taken will stay prvate?”
“yes slave”
“ok master, I look frward to your other rules”
“ok slave I will contact you later”
Kim leaned back in her chair and smiled.
Sorry I have used (my little knowledge of) internet speak for the messenger bits to try to make it realistic, would appreciate your thoughts on whether I should carry on with this or use real, proper English for these sections. Also any other thoughts or comments on the story are welcome, naughty or nice. Many thanks, The Doctor.