Old 11-14-2018, 07:32 PM   #31
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your story is amazing. please keep up the good work
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Old 11-26-2018, 12:30 PM   #32
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Please keep going. I’m loving the plot changes you include. It gets me so horny every time I read a chapter! Great work
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Old 11-29-2018, 04:29 AM   #33
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Chapter 23


Lucy took the phone and nervously spun the app. She knew that the dare she just gave to Ashley probably changed the game up a bit, making it easier for the others to follow up with giving similar dares.. “A dare... from Luke.”

“Ready for this one Lucy?” Luke said mockingly. “Your dare is to go to one of the furthest away neighbours in the nude, and tell them that you passed out at a party and woke up like that. Then ask them if they have something you can wear and let you call a friend to pick you up. Then we can come pick you up in Ashley’s mom’s car. Is that alright Ash? I assume you are allowed to borrow it from time to time?”

“Sure, it should be fine for this short drive.” Ashley answered.

Lucy wasn’t really surprised anymore about how far the dares could go, but she was still unsure if she would dare to do this. “I don't know about this guys...” She looked at the others, one by one.

“It’s not that hard really if you think about it.” Ashley tried to be supportive. “You just have to expose yourself a little bit, and i’m sure most of the families around here would not hesitate to help a young naked girl in distress.”

Lucy sighed. She tried to gather some courage and stood up and walked towards the door. The others followed close behind. She looked out the window and the weather was still as bad as it had been all night. “How far do i have to go?”

“Do you see that white house around the corner at the end of the street there?” Ashley pointed.

“Yeah?”

“I don’t think i’ve ever met the people who live there, which means they shouldn’t know me or have ever seen you around here before. So that should be fine.”

“Okay...” Lucy placed her hand on the handle and slowly opened the door. The rain was pouring down outside, and she could not see any movement around anywhere nearby. But her feet refused to move. “I'm sorry... i don’t think i can do it." She paused for a few seconds before closing the door again. "I’m gonna forfeit the dare.”

“No problem Lucy.” Ashley placed her hand on her shoulder. “At least i’m not the only one who have to do something after the game now.”

They got back around the table again.

“My turn then.” Luke said and spun the wheel. “Shit!... it’s another group dare.”

Ashley passed him the dare jar, and Luke pulled the next group dare.

“Let’s see...” He unfolded the paper and read it out loud. “Put all four names in the wheel app, then roll. The person who get’s chosen will receive oral sex from the other three in a rotation of one minute each, starting with the one who drew this dare if he or she is not the chosen one. If the person who drew this was chosen, then the person to the left will start. This will go on until ten minutes have passed, and the one giving oral cannot stop even if the person who receives it is cumming.”

Nobody said anything, but they all looked at each other nervously while Luke plotted their names in the phone and spun it.

The second the wheel stopped, Luke announced it. “The one who will receive oral sex from the others for ten minutes is...”
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Old 11-29-2018, 07:13 AM   #34
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great story, i was really waiting for the new chapter
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Old 12-05-2018, 05:00 AM   #35
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Cool storry. I hope you'll continue soon.
But please dont let it end with such an cliffhanger again
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Chapter 24


“Josh!” Luke showed them all the result of the wheel spin, before quickly realizing that he was going to be the one who had to give Josh a blow-job for four minutes in total, since he was the one who drew the dare, meaning he had to start the first minute.

An awkward silence went through the room for a few seconds before Ashley broke it “Luke? You’re up first, so i’d say we just get to it. Are you ready Josh?”

Josh gave her a nervous look back before giving a quick glance over to Luke. He was about to have his cock sucked by his best friend and wasn’t exactly sure how to deal with this situation.

“I... i think i’m going to forfeit this dare.” Luke announced quietly, avoiding eye contact. “I just don’t think i can force myself to do it.”

“But it’s a group dare? Can you even forfeit it?” Lucy asked confused.

Ashley didn’t want to let any conflict start over this so she quickly came up with a solution. “Since we weren’t clear on that from the start, then i guess forfeiting your part in a group dare should be fine. So Luke will get a punishment he has to do after the game, and we will continue the dare without him. But since Luke dropped out, he won’t get to witness it either, so the three of us can go upstairs to the bathroom and do it. Does that work for everyone?”

Luke gave a quick nod back, and the others agreed to the terms as well.

“Good.” Ashley said and got up. “Let’s head upstairs then.”

Josh and Lucy caught up with her as they entered the bathroom, and Ashley had picked up an electric razor that she held in her hand. “You ready Josh?”

“Uhm, what is that thing for?” He asked nervously.

“Well... i figured since this dare is supposed to last for ten minutes, we can spend the first four minutes to shave off that tropical forest you have down there.” Ashley pointed at his crotch with the razor. “I don’t think it’s fair that we should have to do Luke’s four minutes as well as our own, so we can start with this. Then we do the six final minutes how the dare was supposed to go. Is that alright with you?”

Lucy seemed intrigued with this idea as well and just smiled at him, eagerly waiting for his response.

“Sure. That’s fine.” Josh said in approval. He was just relieved he didn’t have to have the awkward interaction with Luke in this dare. And he didn’t admit it openly to them, but the thought of the two girls shaving his privates for him was a surprise he welcomed with open arms.

“Okay, good to have it all sorted out then. Oh and Josh, make sure to keep your hands on your back until we are done. Remember, no stopping.” Ashley said and turned the razor on. “I guess we should just start then. Lucy, are you ready?”

“Yup.” She answered back, and the two of them got down on their knees in front of Josh. “I’ll start the timer. Ten minutes, starting now.”
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Old 12-07-2018, 12:21 PM   #37
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Thanks for the update...I just wish it was longer!
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Old 12-12-2018, 05:02 PM   #38
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Really good, keep it up
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Old 12-25-2018, 12:33 AM   #39
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Great story. Please keep writing.
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Old 12-27-2018, 06:38 PM   #40
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Please please please continue. I want to know what happens!!! PS - love the story . . . Obviously.
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Old 01-19-2019, 09:15 AM   #41
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Holy, I am reading this while on a bustrip (I hate traffic) and I'm just hard as fuck reading this, please continue, this story is so amazing. Also, I'm impressed that you actually role everything yourself, I'd love somethung like this happen to me IRL😅
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Old 01-20-2019, 07:39 AM   #42
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Hi everyone, sorry this isn't a new chapter yet, but i don't want to leave those who wait for new chapters in the dark either.

I just wanted to say that i haven't stopped this yet. I know how i want to continue it, i just haven't been in a mindset lately to write what i have in my head. Also i just want to say thank you to everyone who have given such positive feedback to the story.

Every time i write and post something i'm worried that someone won't like it. I know that is a bad mindset to be in, but that is just the way my mind works. I'm worried that things seem unrealistic at times, or just wrong or badly written. Even though this is all fiction, and i could write about a sudden alien appearing in the story if i wanted to, and it would be fine. (this won't happen though, not in this story at least.)

I can't even remember how many of these chapters in this story that i deleted before posting and rewrote them because i wasn't happy with them. Also even the smallest typo i let past me annoys me greatly, but i know that it shouldn't.

I am going to try to continue this as soon as i can. Just wanted to check in and say that i have not abandoned it, and i keep thinking about what to write next all the time. I am my worst enemy when it comes to this writing stuff.

Thanks again for reading so far, and i'll try to be back soon.
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Your writing style is fantastic, its so easy to follow along =D
I love the way you tease along the male/male interaction, love stories with that reluctant and slow build up.

Thank you for writing this story.
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Old 01-23-2019, 07:48 PM   #44
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This story is really enjoyable and your writing is exceptional. I look forward to you being able to start again.
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Chapter 25


“Stand still Josh!” Ashley stopped the electric razor for a second as Josh collected himself. “We haven’t even gotten to the worst parts yet.

“Sorry... i’m just really ticklish there, and the vibrations of the razor is really high.” He took his hand and felt around the area they had shaved so far, but Ashley quickly slapped his hand away.

“Keep your hands on the back remember! Now let us finish this. We still gotta do your balls. Lucy, could you help move them as needed? I don’t wanna accidentally hurt him.” Ashley looked up at Josh with a smirk on her face. “So make sure you stand still, okay?”

“Okay...” Josh said quietly and took some deep breaths. “I’m Ready.”

Ashley started the razor again and gently went across his balls, while Lucy dragged them in all kinds of directions to make the surface area as smooth as possible for the razor, to make the shaving easier for Ashley.

Having his balls and cock touched and dragged around like this only made Josh more horny than he wished to be. He saw his cock bounce from excitement as the two girls kept working him and he felt the pre cum come out of the tip of his cock. He knew he wasn’t going to last long whenever the second part of the dare would start, and he felt himself become more and more nervous.

“There we go...” Ashley stopped the razor and wiped away the loose hairs that was still not already on the floor. “Nice and smooth. And we still got a few seconds left before our six final minutes start so i’ll allow you to feel the end result. We did a pretty good job right?”

Josh moved his hands to the front and felt it. “Yeah that actually feels really smooth to touch. And uhm... if you don’t want to do it, we could skip the next part and just say that you did it when we go back down to Luke. It’s okay with me. Really.”

“You’re such a nice guy Josh, but a dare is a dare. You can forfeit it if you want. But if not, we will keep going. Right Ash?” Lucy answered and looked over at Ashley.

“Right...” Ashley answered back. For once she actually hoped she’d get a free pass here, but Lucy put a stop to that. She knew both her and Lucy figured that Josh wouldn’t even last the first minute at this point, and since she was the first to give him a blow-job she knew she was most likely going to be receiving his load inside her mouth soon enough.

“Ten seconds until you start then Ash.” Lucy announced. “Get ready Josh, hands on your back again!”

Josh closed his eyes and counted down from ten, while taking as many deep breaths as he possibly could to try and relax.

Lucy looked at the timer, and as soon as the first four minutes had passed, she announced it was time to Ashley to start her first minute. “Okay Ash. Start now!
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