Community influecned story

Kah · 11-07-2019, 12:20 AM

Hello, I was hoping to get peoples opinion on a roleplay thread I've been hosting. This is the first roleplay thing I've ever committed to and I'm growing more and more invested in it by the day.

As well as trying to create an enjoyable experience for the people taking part I am also trying to input a underlying story which slowly unravels depending on the choices made by the players.

Because I don't have a lot of writing experience I would like the opinion of those of you who are more experienced with storytelling to offer me feedback on how to improve.

The link is below and I'm eagerly awaiting any and all feedback

https://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=375348

<3 Kah

11-07-2019, 12:20 AM	#1
Kah Account Banned Join Date: Apr 2018 Posts: 726 Blog Entries: 54	Community influecned story Hello, I was hoping to get peoples opinion on a roleplay thread I've been hosting. This is the first roleplay thing I've ever committed to and I'm growing more and more invested in it by the day. As well as trying to create an enjoyable experience for the people taking part I am also trying to input a underlying story which slowly unravels depending on the choices made by the players. Because I don't have a lot of writing experience I would like the opinion of those of you who are more experienced with storytelling to offer me feedback on how to improve. The link is below and I'm eagerly awaiting any and all feedback https://www.getdare.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=375348 <3 Kah __________________ 26/F/Bi [OWNED] Likes: Exhibitionism. Pain. Roleplay. Humiliation. Name calling. Bodywriting. Games. Dislikes: Bondage. Sensory deprivation. Edging. Cold showers. Limits: Illegal. Permanent. Pee/poo. Blood. Family/friends. Hi guys. I took a bit of a break for my mental wellbeing, but lately have been teasing the idea of coming back to GetDare. I return with a clean bill of health and am ready to experience the joys this website can bestow once again. PM DARES <3 Kah