Old 06-14-2013, 02:14 PM   #1
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Robert: 18. Sub. Smooth defined body, abs, small tight ass, lean, athletic.
Tom: 56. Master. Looks unimportant.


Robert had not been a sub before. He was good at sport, and took pride in his performances in running especially. He could run for hours without the need to rest. He was also slightly rebellious and had several times in the past been ear-clipped by his teacher for talking in class or nodding off at a key point in lessons. But that all seemed like an age ago now. As Robert ran slowly across the field and back towards the house, he started to realise how far he had come since he had first met Tom when replying to his online local ad. When they had first met Robert had gotten nervous and had left within five minutes of the meeting having gotten cold feet. He had only deided to reply to the ad in order to satisfy his curiosity and partly to see what someone who had described themselves as a Master actually looked like. Robert was a virgin but had always mainly looked at girls in a sexual way, though his experience was very limited indeed. In many ways he was a curious young man in more ways than one, even when thinking about sex. Trying something new kind of appealed to him, since he also had an enquiring mind. He remembered how nervous he had been when he and Tom hand met for that first time and how stupid he had felt when he had left prematurely. But Robert also felt a sense of pride when he realised that he hadn't given up with the situation, and had picked up the phone to call Tom and arrange to meet again, and how much less nervous Tom had made him feel by the time they had next met.

Robert moved ever more closely to the house and knew what he had to do on his return. This was only the second time that Robert had received clear orders from his new Master. He knew what was expected of him, but Robert's rebellious character started to kick in and so he circled the house, still running in his shorts and training vest, not entirely sure of what to do. It wasn't that he had second thoughts about his orders, but rather that he was having niggling thoughts about how well he might do them and even whether he wanted to do all his Master had wanted. He had had problems with the instruction that he call Tom "Sir" at all times that day and that if he didn't he might be subject to some kind of punishment. Was he doing the right thing by submitting to him? He wondered feetingly and ran around the house slowly again. Then there was the issue of Tom's age - he was much older than him, slightly tubby with thinning hair. Robert breathed in some fresh air deep into his lungs. No, he was absolutely sure. He wanted to submit to this Master. All those things he had doubted about him - his age, his looks, his sincerity maybe, were all the things he knew he really actually wanted. Robert wouldn't care if he was the ugliest man in the town, or even the oldest. Robert stopped in his tracks and remembered what he had been told earlier. This would be the start of his new life as a slave. He opened the unlocked front door and strode in.

Robert stood up against the wall. He didn't move. His Master sat down about ten feet in front of him motionless but staring at Robert's face. Robert looked back at him and after a few seconds began to do what was expected of him. He began to remove his sweaty t shirt as he had been told. Yes, he remembered now. He folded that t shirt into four and placed it on the side cupboard about two feet away to his left. Robert was still sweating a little but was now breathing with ease. A trickle of sweat ran down to his navel and he felt it rest there and dissolve. Robert then removed his running shorts and stood naked before his Master. As Robert stared at his Master his cock began slowly to harden and rise and within about a minute it stood up proud and fully erect. He knew his Master was exporing his body, the one he had worked so hard to perfect. And it was all for this man in front of him. Tom said nothing. He didn't need to. Robert had his orders and was simply carrying them out. The stare of Tom made Robert realise that he must serve and obey this Master the best way he could for as long as he could. His cock jerked slightly as he realise he was submitting the whole of himself to this man and willingly so. Tom would own him. The thrill of standing before his Master naked, fully erect and ready to do whatever he wanted was something he had been dreaming about and that had been a secret desire for such a long time. He had never told anyone. Robert fully understood his position now, and he only had to glance at Tom's face to know that he had no option but to submit fully and he appreciated every second of his submission. This man could ask him to do just about anything and he would surely do it, willingly, fully and to the best of his ability. He knew that now. It was his priveledge to serve this Master and he no longer had any hesitation. So began Robert's long and fulfilling service to his Master Tom.
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Old 06-14-2013, 02:26 PM   #2
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A nice bit of background there, the story has good potential, everything is very well explained and I could really get a good picture of the scenarios you described.

It could be a bit longer and maybe if you spaced it out a bit it would be easier to follow and read, other than that I think it's really good and will be reading more
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Old 06-14-2013, 02:35 PM   #3
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Thanks. Its my first time in writing narrative, well at least for many years. I'll try to add more later.
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