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Let start off with an apologise. I've left my previous story to basicaly die off, but rest assured, I am still writting it, but after some persuasion from a particular somebody I decided to get cracking on this story.

If you've read my other story, you'll see that it's mostly fiction. This one though is exactly the opposite, mostly non fiction. Keep in mind that ages, names and exact condiditons of situations have been changed for the privacy of the people within this story.

Just so you can know if you'd like to keep on reading, this story will be about what me and two of my friends have been doing over the course of the past summer. This story might not start off apearing as a TorD story, but these few beggining chapters are needed for setting the tone, time, place and giving information about the main characters. So without furthur mumbo jumbo, the story:

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Chapter 1: That Angel…

Only one minute left and I’m outa’ here! I kept thinking as I glanced at my watch for the final time that turning point that was the end of my last year in high-school; summer was now only thirty seconds away.

“…So, I hope you guys have a great summer, and good luck with them collages next year!”

Miss Christine said. Those were hopefully the last words I would ever hear coming from the mouth of a teacher for just less than three months. My entire class rushed out of the classroom the second that the bell rung. The entire school seemed to be shaking from the stomping of the 1000 students running about, trying to reach the stairs that led to the exit.
After I managed to get out, I separated myself from the rest of the group and waited for Natalia and Logan. Us three had been friends for a long, long time. I grew up next door to Natalia, and became friends with Logan at my first year in primary school. Turns out he didn’t live too far away from me either. It seemed like we never got bored of each other, even though we knew each other for more than a decade.

I still haven’t changed a whole lot since then, apart from gaining some height and weight and having the tone of my voice get a bit lower. I couldn’t be described as one of the best looking guys in the classroom, but I had my fair share of luck with the ladies. I was just a hair above six feet and weighed about 70 kilos. My built was not that muscular but not too skinny either and I did exercise regularly. I would really want to say that I have green eyes and blond hair, but that would be lying. I had hazel eyes and light brown hair.
Natalia though has changed dramatically since then, she has grown into a gorgeous woman, but I can still spot her cute past self when I look at her. Back then she stood at five foot three inches, which wasn’t half bad. I had absolutely no idea how much she weighed and still don’t have a clue even today. Yes, we practically grew up together, but I learned to never ask a woman about her weight. Her hair changed color and style at least once per month, and I always had something to say about it. Of course she knew that I was joking; oh we had learned each other so well over the years. At that point her hair was just hanging plainly on her back and had a light brown color, similar to mine. It took me some time to find out the color of her eyes when we were kids, being hidden behind what seemed to be an inch of solid glass. Yes, she wore glasses, but I finally made out that she had bright blue eyes that, with a good stare, can make you shut up in no time. It took until her thirteenth birthday for her parents to buy her a new pair of glasses, and thankfully, they looked perfect on her, unlike those ancient ones she used to wear. Over our ‘friendly’ relationship I got to experience more, if not all, of her figure, but I won’t go into detail about that just yet.

Logan was half Italian, from his father’s side and, having mostly his father’s genes, they looked extremely alike. This worked a lot to his advantage when it came to getting in and out of relationships. If you were to compare me and Logan, in my opinion he would take the good-looks trophy with ease. This didn’t make him a jerky asshole like most of the other guys I knew that had comparable looks. He was a very down to earth guy. Natalia and I used to tease him by calling him our ‘eyes in the sky’. He was so tall that we could make out if he was coming just by finding a head poking out of the rest of the crowd. He was just under seven feet and he had the weight to go with it. At that time he was 90 kilos, but it was all mostly because of how tall he was. He had dark brown eyes and dark black hair, but it all seemed to fit perfectly with his appearance.

I spotted Natalia first as she emerged from the rushing crowd of students, and waved for her to come over. She approached me and turned around looking for Logan, not that we needed too much effort to spot him. After a few seconds we saw a head floating above everyone else and we both Natalia and I waved at Logan who came over to us. Logan turned around, or should I better say turned down, and asked.

“We’re done! Finally! So, I believe this requires some celebration guys, what do you say? Usual place, my treat, how’s that?”

“That is one of the greatest ideas I’ve heard from you since, well, ever.”

I said grinning over at him.

“Yes indeed.” Natalia spoke up.

“Best idea ever. Now can you two get a move on? I’m fuckin’ starving.”

It may come as a surprise that a girl would just talk like that, but in our friendship, Natalia was one of the dudes. We would be worried about her only if she welcomed us in the morning with actually saying ‘good morning’ instead of ‘what’s up dudes?’ or the more occasional ‘wassup bitches!’ which she used only if she was extremely happy. Yeah, she was alright, the three of us were so close, we knew when each other was serious or not if there was something wrong and we only kept our darkest secrets from each other.
After a short walk, we reached our destination, our favorite pizza parlor. Some relative of Logan’s owned it, and we were always welcomed to have a meal there. The entire way there, Logan just couldn’t stop smiling, I couldn’t wait to munch on some spicy pepperoni pizza, and Natalia seemed agitated; more than usual. We sat at our usual table and Loogan went to order. We always ordered the same stuff, so there was no need to ask. I always ate pepperoni pizza, he ate a margarita pizza and Natalia ate spaghetti with tomato sauce. I spotted her playing nervously with her hair and mumbling.

“…stupid…fucking….piece of…behind my back…bitch….”

I coughed, to interrupt her monologue and looked at her with a questioning look. She turned her head to look at me, as if I caught her looking at porn or something. He readjusted her seat and lowered her eyes.

“What’s wrong with you today? You’ve been all pissed off, more than you usually are, what’s going on?”

“Look, I know we’re not supposed to have secrets or anything from each other, but, I dunnno, I just couldn’t tell you guys this.”

“Couldn’t tell us what?”

Said Logan while sitting down to his seat. Natalia looked around as if she thought someone was watching us. She leaned her head in so only the three of us would hear.

“Look, I know we shouldn’t keep secrets from each other and I really am sorry for not telling you about this earlier. See, I’ve been dating this guy…”

“No shit? You’ve been dating a lot of guys. Come to think of it, when were you single exactly?” Logan said with a chuckle.

“Just shut up and listen will you? So, I’ve been dating this guy and as soon as, you know, umm we got closer, I find out that he was sleeping with that little fucking slut Angel!”

Angel, who was probably on the top of my ‘business woman’ scale, was the biggest slut I came across my entire life. Although I was about to find more about her after a few days, in my mind there was no other girl like her anywhere. By calling her a slut, we didn’t mean that she was dating a lot of guys or that she wore revealing clothes. No, Angel had the complete package and even some great additions. You see, she was open for business from day one in high school. After a month or so, a video of herself stripping, fingering herself and a whole lot more started spreading around school. All of them filmed by herself. About every month or so, a new video was released. All of those videos contained her number at the end. How none of the videos managed to find its way to a teacher or parent is beyond me. It wasn’t a few times that I caught myself thinking about her while masturbating or thinking about calling her, just to see what would happen. This though was something I never told neither Logan nor Natalia. Angel was a bitch, never got any good grades at school, never talked to you like you were another person and she didn’t have a single friend; only clients. Don’t get me wrong, she was smoking hot, great tits; her ass was one of the best I had ever seen, beautiful looking face, the entire looks department received a ranking off the charts. Shoulder length straight black hair, deep green eyes and great legs. But nevertheless, she was a true whore.

“So I find out he was sleeping with her and dumped the guy. I’ve learned all this today. I was supposed to spent most of my summer with that son of bitch, I can’t fuckin believe he would be with me and fucking her! Wasn’t I good enough for his sorry ass?”

Natalia was on the verge of crying, but I knew she would hold it. We never saw her cry; never.

“It’ll be alright, he’s an asshole, there’s nothing you can do.”

Logan said, patting Natalia on the back. She though, proceeded venting, something she probably needed to do before Logan and I paid for it.

“Seriously, is that skunk better than me. He had to fucking pay her and got everything he needed from me for free. Tell me Nick, weren’t these good enough for him?”

She said as she spontaneously placed my hand on her breasts. She looked at the surprised look on my face and backed off, letting go of my hands. Believe it or not this wasn’t the first time something like this happened. Just a side note, Natalia had great tits.

“Guys, since we’re on the Angel subject and all, I have a little confession to make too.”

Both of them looked surprised but then Natalia added, “Oh you fucked her too? That’s just great.”

“No,no,no, I didn’t fuck her but, umm got somewhat close to. Now before you crucify me just let me explain alright?”

The waiter brought us our food and I started telling them the whole story from start to finish on what I had to do with Angel.

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Old 11-23-2010, 02:04 PM   #2
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This is a really good story so far so please keep it going. I have not read your earlier one so would will start searching for it
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Chapter 1: That Angel…

“…So, I hope you guys have a great summer, and good luck with them collages next year!”

Miss Christine said. Those were hopefully the last words I would ever hear coming from the mouth of a teacher for just less than three months. ....
Let's hope Miss Christine wasn't the narrator's English teacher because you didn't a single thing in her class. It would appear Miss Christine might to re-qualify for her teaching certificate because of her terrible spelling and grammar!

Overall the story is very interesting other a very significant paragraph structure problem. When you have a character speaking in quotes, you should include which character spoke it on the same sentence. Take the above sentence (I'll correct spelling and grammar):

"I hope you guys have a great summer and good luck with college next year!”, Miss Christine said.

This "style" confused me since you prefaced this story with acknowledgement of a previous story you've written. I would think if it was posted on this site, someone would have given you these pointers.

Hopefully, you're using a word processor with spelling and grammar checking configured. Additionally, it might be a good idea for you to send each of your chapters, via pm, to someone else to "proof" it before you post it.

I look forward to reading your chapters!
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@Memorie for life:
Any grammatical/spelling errors are due to the fact that English isn't my first language. Also any wrongly spaced out parts of the story, such as the one you mentioned, are due to the fact that I just leave a spacing every time quotations start or finish. I know that this causes the story to 'not look good' as well as lacking a good paragraph structure and I will try to minimize this occuring on feuture chapters.

To everyone else, thank you for reading and I hope you enjoy the comming updates. As a litle sidenote, in case you are wandering, this story has absoloutely no connection to my previous one, that one was 80% fiction this one is 80% non-fiction
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Any grammatical/spelling errors are due to the fact that English isn't my first language. Also any wrongly spaced out parts of the story, such as the one you mentioned, are due to the fact that I just leave a spacing every time quotations start or finish. I know that this causes the story to 'not look good' as well as lacking a good paragraph structure and I will try to minimize this occuring on future chapters.
Since you feel your "English" narration might not be the best, I encourage you to send each of your chapters, via pm, to someone who has a better understanding of English to "proof" it before you post it. I'm sure there are many readers here who would welcome your request for a review prior to you post the finished chapter.
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OK, finally got the second chapter compleated. It looks like I'll be posting only when I have time, because I'm running low on free time right now. I hope you like it, please comment with your thoughts and opinions on this chapter.

Chapter 2: The past and the present

It was a sunny day in May, this year when it happened. I was going about my classes along with Logan and Natalia when I received a text; a text from Angel. I didn’t have her in my contacts list, but I could recognize her number anywhere. I saw her videos so much even though I hated the fact that she fucked whoever was willing to pay her.

The text read: “b @ locker rooms after skl. alone.”

This was about to be the first time I had lied to Natalia or Logan.

“Guys, I have to go someplace with my dad after school, so I won’t be getting home with you two, alright?”

There was no reason to ask any further questions because they knew that I couldn’t be lying; not to them. Math class dragged on forever, but scenes of Angel’s videos filled my mind. The bell went off and I got over to the locker rooms. No one was there and they were located pretty far from the main school building. Angel was not there; part of my brain wanted to take off and the other urged me to stay, part of it wanted me to fuck Angel’s brains out, part of it wanted me to flip her off and leave as soon as she came. At last Angel came by and motioned me to follow her. She led me to the girls locker room and locked the door behind her.

“Alright, what the fuck is going on?” I barked at her.

“Oh man, calm down and drop the act. You know why you’re here. You just wanna get some of this huh?” She said as she placed my right hand on her left tit. I quickly withdrew my hand.

“What the fuck is wrong with you? You are one of the first people I send my videos to, and yet you remain the only guy in school who hasn’t called me once. I know how much you want to fuck me. Come on, look, I like you more than the other guys and it just gets me hornier just by having you play hard to get. Look at what I’m offering you, a free ride and everything your dick desires, plus virgins are charged a bit more, but for you everything is free."

“First of all, I aint a virgin, seco…” She interrupted me.

“Oh, so you and that Nadia or whatever she’s called do fuck after all huh? Who’d have thought.”

“Her name is Natalia, and no I do not fuck her!” I yelled.

“Hey Nick, relax, we’re just here to have fun, alright? We can start slow if you like. How about a kiss to kick things off huh?”

As I turned my back around to leave, my dick started pulling up all sorts of stop signs and yelling for me to drop my pants down on the spot. I turned around to face Angel again.

“Why did you do it?”

“Did what?”

“Why did you start doing all this?”

"If I am going to tell you anything, I want something in return you know.”

“What do you want?”

“A small game of truth or dare. That way you can find out whatever you want and I’ll get a little of what I came here for. Two truths and one dare each; what do you say?”

“I’m fine with that, but get it clear in your head, I am not having sex with you. If you even thought that your dare is going to be this then forget it.”

She thought for a minute as if I read right through her mind. “OK, but because ladies go first, I’ll start.” Lady my ass.


“So, you want to fuck me;” she saw me ready to say something and motioned me not to. “There’s no point in denying it. Why don’t you do it then? Do you have a girlfriend or is there some other reason?”

“Look, yes, I admit it, I wanted to fuck you the moment I saw that first video of yours, but that’s just my dick thinking, you were a fantasy, nothing more. I don’t know how well you know me, but I’m not the kind of guy that hooks up with some randoms. I’m not like that. I want relationships that last and if the relationship goes well, then, I may choose to have sex with my girlfriend. I want to know the other, have feelings for them to even consider having sex with them. That is why I don’t want to do this.”

“Oh, look at you, all sensitive and shit. I definitely had the wrong idea about you.”

“Well, I don’t give a fuck what you think of me. Now, my turn. Why did you start being a whore?”

Angle lit up as if I asked a question she'd been eager to answer.

“It’s actually a good story this one. That first video was taken by me for my boyfriend at the time, and he just started spreading it around school. When I found out, I liked all the attention I was getting. I did dump my boyfriend for spreading that thing around though. So, anyways, it wasn’t long before guys started coming up to me, asking me for my number and a place we could hook up, so I just put it at the end of every video. By the end of the first month I made so much money just by taking off my clothes, blowing guys and having sex that all this made it worth it. Every salesman has something to sell, I sell my body. I see nothing wrong with that.”

I couldn’t believe that she supported what she did in such a manner. Her mind on money and nothing else. If this girl ever found herself in a stable relationship I would fuck a unicorn.

"So, satisfied with my answer? My turn now. Would you ever do what I'm doing?"

"I find it highly unlikely that any girl would want to be fucked just for the sake of fucking and paying me for it. I also don't believe that it would be much of a promotion of my services if I made any videos." I said with a sarcastic tone.

Angel chuckled. "True, true. Now, you ask one more truth and we get on with the dares."

"OK, whatever. Tell me, why do you want to fuck me? You said that you fucked anyone for money but not me, you'd fuck me for free, why's that?"

Angel chuckled again. "Isn't it obvious?"

"Not really."

"I like you for fuck sakes. You cannot imagine how much times I fantasized about you."

That was definitely not the answer I was expecting.

"OK, you like me? And you think that I'll fall in love with you because you decided not to charge me to have sex? That's real fucking generous of you"

"Look, throughout high school, you were the only one who paid no attention to me, ignored me. Why do you still pretend hard to get?"

"Are you serious, you want to have a relationship with me? You want to show me your love by having sex? Get your shit together! That's not how things work!"

"They do!"

"Do you think that once I fuck that magical pussy of yours I'll fall in love with you?"

She remained silent thinking of an answer but each time her mouth opened, no words came out.

"Let's get on with this so I can go. I actually have friends to go to after this."

"OK, fine, your loss! Now eat me out so you can be done with my dare." She said with an evil smile.

"Oh no, there's no way I'm trusting that pussy. I have no idea with how many guys you slept with and for all I know you could have just about completed the collection of all known STD's. You know what, fuck this. I am leaving." Before she even was able to protest I slammed the door behind me and left the locker rooms.


As I finished the explanation of how I got that close to actually having sex with Angel, both Logan and Natalia were looking at me not too surprised.

"OK, so we now know you're not a virgin, that you passed having sex with angel because you aren't an asshole and that she is in 'love' with you." Natalia recapped, saying those final three words with a sarcastic voice.

"Pretty much." I said plainly.

The three of us just got awkwardly quiet until our food came, and from there the whole Angel discussion was soon forgotten.

“So, we’re all set up for tonight, right?” Logan asked, with his mouth still stuffed with pizza.

“Yup, your house, eight o’ clock. Just how many people are actually coming besides us?”

“About twenty or so more people.” Logan replied.

The three of us were planning this party for quite some time. We didn’t invite too many people over, mainly because we couldn’t afford to buy drinks and food for everyone. We invited some friends in our classroom and other friends from school.

“Guys, I also have sort of a confession.” Natalia and I looked at him.

“What the fuck did you do?” Natalia asked, waiting for his answer before she could explode.

“I, I invited Angel to the party too…”
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